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  • this is the hardest thing iv see since my boner

  • sometimes reading somebody elses lyrics is not all that easy.. but i think if you guys actually had the courage to write anything on "Youtube" you yourselves must have some sense that the verses were good.. long as i see something rhyme in that joint.. im cool .

  • i got places to go got people to see..

  • im tellin you man dont piss me off, or fuck wit me in any way, it might not end up the way you want it, ha.....

    dont fuck wit me , cus it will be you i will come see, and if your bigger than me ,ill get you in a way thats another, i might just have to say word to ya motha or brotha, or little sister susie, you might just find her dead in a jacuzzi. haha i did this in 20 seconds youtube rappers are a joke

  • is it the same instru as in monkey see monkey do by em ?

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  • @CLOVERCITYY15 Since when did dre produce this?

  • @jimmymarshallable na my bad man i fergot that eminem did it for the 8mile album sickk shitt tho

  • @CLOVERCITYY15 Easy mistake, bro.

  • @jimmymarshallable eminem produced this

  • @Sabbay997 That's what I was trying too explain to him three fucking months ago.

  • @jimmymarshallable hahahhahah

    

  • its like all eyes on me,and i can see it with the eyes on me,but no surprise,this gift is whats wrong with me,as i sit alone,in my own zone,i was prone to phone home in a song all along as you see,its my freedom,so as long as i get away,what can i say,when it comes to props i need none,this is juss what i feed from,a caged beast,with to much rage to say the least,

  • @krazystyle1 the least i need is a feast on these beats,step on my beat and ur leashed to me,so let me unleash the defeat you seek,cause u aint seekin me,when ur sinkin in quick sand,wit my quick hand,type to sick damn,the type to make u quit at hand,this is it ur last stand,and i got a casket plan,so when u drop lines make sure u know where u cast it,please not at me,you dont wanna catch a quick end,make a quick decision,and be safe on how u begin- me

  • this song makes me wanna cuss some byotch out!! i love it!!

  • Prayed every night to god that i'd get tougher

    Used to think my only purpose in life was to suffer

    I stopped whining, cause i knew things would only get rougher

    I stood up, looked at the man standing in the mirror

    I told him erase the tears, man up, and face your fear

    I ain't gettin anywhere by just sittin here

    Life was goin too slow, like one step every year

    Put the pedal to the metal while i'm shiftin gears

  • this beat is 2 sacred Keep your mouth closed, Cold, Naked without clothes, so dope, And ahead of yu, I wrote my verse tomorrow loco, with dollars, not SCENTS, So cut out your NOSTRILLS, But i can not hold, Sumthin thats not Gold, Slice ur ear, Throw it in tha air, Listen up! Here... get it? were... Gonna need sum beer, If you wanna look hot, dear.... Might as well stop here, U Guys r like cops beards Nuthn but a poor attempt to act like yu belong HERE Mijo 1810
  • DAMN this vid got some dope ass lyrics, but also got some weak ass lyrics.. @jmlad91 u killed ittt!

  • but I know ur gonna reply anyways, cuz u think if u get the last word in, that you win, but Im done...cuz I know deep down your not gonna top me, and if u had some respect, u wouldnt post unless u knew u could top it. So yea, im done here, I already proved myself and u already know what I can do, so I dont gotta keep doing it. So do what u want, reply if u want, u aint gonna top my last verse lol

  • @Jmlad91 lol ur right im not gonna reply to that garbage...............or give u any more of my fresh ideas........well let the video poster guy decide

  • @thedonofwar

    This beef shit isnt over til I say its over/My bars drop niggas flat, make em wake from comas/I think its evident, clear who's behind in this/Take a look at my channel, he co-signed my shit/So how u gon say its garbage when u gave me props/I aint give u the whole beef yet, just gave u chops/For me to send bars at u, homie thats a privalege/I dont give a quick death, u slowly gettin finished/

  • well i co-signed your shit cause your not dumb numb minded,let it be rewinded back to my first lines kid/this wasn't a beef just a quick release of words onto youtube/while others are blinded confused fools walking in too toos/i got that info thats proven too be usefull everything you've seen on tv was meant to dupe you/shits bannanas,coo coo but if were truthfull we can bust loose too!/ima say i respect u highly,but if a mothafucka trys me,ill put em on a iv for 5 weeks...

  • @Jmlad91 na i didnt hear the cassidy a milli,but ima go check that out now.....you stepped your game up good bars...but its only youtube this shit dont mean nothing

  • @Jmlad91 lol thats fucking crazy sick.....ok im never using that line again,but no idea is new...everythings been done odds are theres over a hundreds of thousands diff people in the states writing shit every day whos to say they wont produce a line or two thats very close to mines or you????

  • @thedonofwar

    Okay I'll take ur word for it, probly just a coincidence, but u can see where im comin from when i heard cass say it and then u say it in the same order with the same words. I've came across a couple people who have tried to pull that shit on me. Its all good tho, good bars anyways

  • @Jmlad91 oh hell yeah...coming from a writer the worst thing is a biter,if you cant think up your own clever shit then fuck off....i was just listenin to hard body(lil wayne dissin gillie tha kid old shit)and he said shhot a nigga on the porch and make em fall in the kitchen.....yeah rick ross ripped that line and flipped it his(shoot a nigga in tha kitchen and watch em fall on tha porch off your fortress??? like what tha fucks that shit

  • @thedonofwar

    Yea I dont listen to weezy or ross...Right now im really liking J Cole and slaughterhouse

  • @Jmlad91 yeah me niether....everybody on the radio is garbage........i like j cole though ive only heard a few of his songs......im more into immortal technique,pac,50(power of the dollar great album)krs is dope,nas is dope, weezy joke,ross a joke,drake a joke lol

  • @Jmlad91 fuck you rebattle

  • now there's some lyricism for ya ass, dont reply cuz I know u aint gonna top it, u wastin my time.

  • cock back im ready reaload nothin violent but my bars say so from the way i flow i should be behind yellow tape caution nigga when im on the mic nigga im come back like the guy in black with the cape never give a beat a minute to spare when im the beat it breaks my bars are heavyweight i need to talk to shady cos things crazy wheres dre i could use a good producer sitting wrighting ryhmes on a computer bulid the tension in the room as there reading ........ ->
  • em really killed this shit this beat is sickening

  • verga de verdad que este instrumental no juega ta weno weno

  • have seen 50 latley he skinny as fuck lost 25 kilo looks like 20 man

  • EM beat this right???

  • Do you know who I am, no cos Im not earning I am owing a grand, to fucking bills, gives me the fucking chills, going up more fucking hills, chucking deals, away cos their shit and Im a buffalo bill, nearly on top of that hill, youll fucking bopping to get yourself killed, will your wealth build, fuck with me then the question is will your health build, cos Ive dealt real, life with having problems and just feel that I should grab a knife

  • hey thanks for the beat boss man, is there anyway you could put a download link up? the only version i can find of this is the 2 minute version that was on an instrumental mixtape so there's DJ Sound effects and shit all through it

  • sick stuff my main man!

  • All these youtube rappers think that they sick wit a pencil

    yall niggas typin for nothin, ya fuckin shit is too simple

    plenty mental disorders makes me crazy with these words

    When im recordin its almost sorta like shady spit my verse

  • Like a fucken glare yea i fucken been there strap in2 ya seats n say ya prayer case we ruff ridin dont matter which nigga be up next he dien hearin some momma cryin he dien now u grew up in da burbs i grew up in the street were niggas pak heat lookin for a place 2 rest there feat were baby daddy drama only accompany a cheat times up yu already late for defeat as i sit here wid pen n write my next verse they packagin ya ass in da bak of hurtz

  • @Jmlad91 man don't you have a place to go? ill just go ahead and lace your flow/now your your stumbling out the door,leaning,gleaming falling on the floor bleeding/man you was right i was reading what these kids right and i don't like it one bit/who say we can't be intellengent like lupe,what u wrote wasn't any different then a hook from gucci,ima do me fuck what you say/

  • @thedonofwar U call urself the don of war? U want beef? Ima carnivore Look, excuse me But if my verse is a hook from gucci Then ur bars is fairytales - Books and movies U too shook to move me lyrics are pictures and urs looks like coochie And as far as a place to go Im doin good lil boy just ask ya hoe And yes im lupe-intelligent While you-stay-irrelevant I end em like doomsday This dude remains veteran Stay in ya lane I might make u quit I knew from ya name u was fake as shit lame ass bitch
  • i knew you'd rhyme intellegent with irrelevant,just another failed attempt at this shit/flip the script quick and get your lip spilt ,with a visit to receive 33 stitches i'm straight vicious/dawg knock it off,when shit gets to popping off you go cotton soft,when they ask where that hardass went walking off too? ima reply to get a tampon or two...diss who? now that's a risky issue down another fifth of whiskey sissy and blow me like you monica lewinski/maybe this veteran over took his medicine

  • @thedonofwar

    All u gotta do is read my shit, and u know I be spittin/

    I dont take ur disses serious, half of its pre-written/

    Cmon dog, ur last reply had nothin to do with mine/

    Except for ur first and last bars, inbetween took time/

    See my shits on the spot, I be talkin loudly/

    Ur verse didnt hurt, I forgot u was talkin bout me/

    Rhymin poppin off wit cotton soft? Cassidy did it/

    U dont right ur own bars, bitch this rap beef is finished

  • @thedonofwar

    oh and btw I heard "Im str8 vicious" in an eminem freestyle, and the "blow me like monica lewinski" line was in another eminem freestyle, and I dont think thats a coincidence. Eminem 1999 freestyle - "Im str8 vicious, I'll hit u wit plates and dishes, leave u wit 8 stitches" I dont think its a coincidence u rhymed stiches wit vicious lol...and the other lewinski line is from "rhymim wit proof". U've been exposed as a fraud, so no need to keep battling u lol

  • @Jmlad91 wow good way to say your wack,i rhymed this shit,script quick,lip split...receive 33 stitches and vicious and im bitin em??? fifth of whiskey and monica lewinksi?? and the line your dumb ass is trying to quote from cass is from that freeway battle.....it's "you pissed off cause your dicks small and the condom slipped off so u hit raw"..or some shit...oh u used an em line thats from 8 mile....."i b spittin half of its pre written"..........ur like one word ryming get UR BARS UP U STUPID

  • @thedonofwar

    Oh and that cass line I was referring to was from the a milli freestyle and im pretty sure u heard that...and u said im one word rhyming? lol, obviously u werent paying attention. Lupe-Intelligent...You-Stay-Ir­relevent...thats a multi rhyme u dumbass, I got em all over the place...ur only doing 2 syllable rhymes. Quick script, lip split...Thats 2 syllables. Mine was three, thats a multi rhyme. Check the bars again dumbass

  • i don't appreciate lying,so ima bust up your rhyming like i did your sisters hymen,it's fine man/oh shit i wrote some sick diss so i must of ripped it/,hey dip shit tell your mom to quit changing lip sticks/my dicks starting to look like it should be on a christmas giftlist with all these fuckin kisses/disses? naw man just throw out your gay shit and pay me homage to ghostwrite you a hit,i know u aint incoherant u like my lrics face it,i could give your whole style a facelift in a day bitch/

  • @thedonofwar

    Let me depict a visual, vivid image, picture, n vision for you/Grippin pistols, equipped with clips bigger than triple of u/And It'll be cripplin u, stiffen and rip u in two/Hittin and pistol whippin got u lookin disfigured and bruised/Sizzle ya tissue when these missles whistle, Im nukin you/You riskin ur existence by liftin ya lips and dissin dudes/Have you limpin and flinchin and given stitches from fixin you/Swimmin wit bigger fishes got you twitchin when bit into

  • @Jmlad91 well shady guess he sick,nigga u fuckin wit da kid

    qords are berserk wen im riten wit dis pin,u on utube tryna make up yo own shit,

    yea its been 10 months where da hell have i been,

    like ima let u try 2 be betta den me wit da pen ,

    i spit it myself,ni*** i spray u 2 ,

    dnt be on here ill be der a mac 10 and an uz-i 2

  • @Jmlad91 nigga you a youtube rapper also

  • @Jmlad91 Hahahaha u suck bad

  • I'm insane, satanly murder every word of my lines

    u niggas lazy, sound like babies wit ya nursery rhymes

    Im waitin patiently, makin for certain that im first in line

    some mistakenly mistake me for a rapist, and thats fine

    because basically, I rape these beats, so really they aint lyin

    only way to see my level is to travel further into time

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  • you shouldnt of put this on here somebody might jack it..

    just sayin its good

  • just think in ya mind just for second so listen now that im here only reason why the game is efficient the flow is present, so im guessin that u hatin again just make it so i take it all just to make it again cuz i aint stoppin for nothin fuck it u stuck wit it now u can fuck wit it ya fuckin lucky pucker up now u can suck a dick u a sucka bitch im the king wit the mic straight out the booth im sweet like fuckin candy bitch with or without the tooth
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