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that poem was amazing!!!!!!
prettypnkduck001 2 years ago
I like the part about the ducks.
cannondahler 2 years ago
Wow, I didn't expect it to be that good... but it was. :) It really caught me in the beginning and I coudn't stop listening. I really like it. :D
TheOrangeDream 2 years ago
I love the rythm in the way you write poetry...I noticed in I Want as well, it's a certain style you have that's really unique I like it! I'm probably not one to judge but if you do want to do this for a living the whole unique style thing will probably count in your favor! And I also really like the way you read it out loud
Wow that's a lot of books! though 300 pages of a novel I don't think is as bad as 400 pages of say.. Homer or Dante.. like what they give us at my high school :/
rigodelsa312 2 years ago
No energy November sounds like an awesome idea... except for the fact I'm kind of afraid of the dark. =)
I loved the poem! I especially like the: "I watch her rise, the folds of her dress smoothed down over those thighs. Hips that sway as she walks away, thats it."
desertislanddream 2 years ago
o.o...you win at life,good sir.
cosmicchik 2 years ago
I was actually just thinking about your poem " I want" all morning. So I'm pretty happy you made another poem video.
They always sound pretty awesome, this one was defidently no exception.
Have you tried to convert your poems to songs[ with guitar also] lately?
those always sounded pretty great.
schroter5 2 years ago
You should definitely do a poetry slam sometime!
karenlikesyou 2 years ago
I won one in high school ;)
And I'm going to be looking around more for them at my college!!
-Chris
agreatperhaps 2 years ago
No energy November sounds awesome!
Good luck in school and keep enjoying life!
In all honesty, I really did like your poem! I've listened to it 3 times in a row now!
RedVolly 2 years ago
It's crazy, I can totally walk around my apartment fine in the dark now haha!
You enjoy life MORE!!!!
And thanks man, that means a lot coming from the Legendary REDVOLLY!!!
-Chris
agreatperhaps 2 years ago
I will enjoy life! yay
psh legendary lol
RedVolly 2 years ago