IELTS Argument Essay Writing 1 (3 of 4)

[jakalii]

"Motivation and discipline are key to..." or "motivation and discipline are keyS to.."? (adopted from supporting paragraph 2)

[jakalii]

@jakalii or the meaning is like "motivation and discipline are the academic success key" ? i guess

[lamtrancc]

wow, thanks much for your program

[challenge991]

hi ryan ,i would like to ask you how to write an situational essay.could you please give me some clue abt it /

thank you very much xx

[desmond80in]

Your introduction para is very much attractive and guide line on writing paragraph is also very useful, but i find the linking words are not much used in the essay. May i know why haven't you included them in this?

[deepakgupta4u]

i have exam in this saturday nov 20th and i am very much worried .......in writing dont have any idea...........

[deepakgupta4u]

i have exam in this saturday nov 20th and i am very much worried .......in writing dont have any idea...........

[44english44]

"its clear "its subjective language.is it ok to use subjective language?can anybody help?

[44english44]

it looks so easy for you to write a essay.why is it so hard for me?

[lepnam86]

As the outline you mentioned before, there should be an example in each supporting paragraph. The IELTS preparation books said that " ther examinors will be glad to see the eg from your experiences or knowledge", but the 2nd supporting paragraph doesnt contain an example. Am I right ?

[highang]

I wish i have see this before, i been taking the writting for many time and still fail, so hope after watch this video i will pass..

i think i will be a super senior...cause of this test

well thank so much for this VDO

[MrRamyadavs]

It is very helpful...Thank you Ryan

[LoveBigTime]

This is very useful. I will use this strategy in my writing test.

Thank you so much

[Ms12buckle]

very much simple,clear and can understand easily.easy to grasp

[98764455]

This is not a good essay at all

[Archer6633]

Thx man

[aamol4u]

essay is really nice but the only thing which i thought that the words motivation and discipline are used huge...are there any other words

[heartzmechanic]

nice JOb !!

[ahmedaegypt]

Thanks alot for your great effort.

[umangpokharel]

thanks.good on you

[lactium]

very clear

understanding

[kakrali99]

Thank you very much for providing these useful videos which helps the needy students. Keep on!

God/Allah bless you ( Ameen)

[Franktheman149]

@kakrali99 What about Yahweh, Anu, Krishna, Orisis, Thor, Zeus, Hubal, Ahura Mazda, Gaia, Jupiter, Vishnu, Rama, Quetzacotl, Odin or Nanna etc.

[viewpl]

What's the meaning of "in-tune"?

[antetchie]

I would like to ask if you have an example for task 1 essay writing for academic.thanks

[sanjaysaini83]

i am really thankful to you.you are a great teacher as well as a good thinker. you are able to assess the needs of a desired student.

[sascorea]

I greatly appreciate your elaborate explanation. Thanks to you, I've managed to grasp the structure of argument essay.

[ihdamas28]

got question here.. some teacher encourage when writing the introduction to state your position in an argument questions? please help me regarding this matter because its really confusing.

Thanks! great videos by the way! hope to watch more....

[EnglishRyan]

Hi, thanks for the comment.

I am not sure I understand what you are saying. Please rephrase your question and send it to me as a personal message.

[ihdamas28]

sorry for that one...some teachers encourage that when writing an argument essay, it is better to state your position in the introduction paragraph. Like to agree or not to agree.. thanks!

[EnglishRyan]

Did you watch video 1 and 2 of this series? In video 1, I write the introduction paragraph and include a thesis that states the position for the essay. This position is followed throughout the essay.

Good luck :D

[paniyao]

I am trying to teach argument essay in my class too,this is a different style..The question is,is it going to work on my students advantage in the Academic/General essay writing in the IELTS?? Thank you anyway I appreciate your diligence..I would like to comment on the use of fragment sentences in essay writing it should be avoided.

[44english44]

@EnglishRyan "doing this""accomplish this" its kind of oral english,isnt it?"doing so" and "accomplish this task" would be better.im not sure about.can anybody help?

[henrongyijizhu]

very helpful.

[henrongyijizhu]

Thank you for such good techniques. I gree that human teachers can not be replaced, but I am greatful to have the technology such like this to learn.

[monicazhu526]

COOL.