One last adventure, part 2/8

[CosmoPrimo1]

Kristina - I must disagree with other posters who have criticized your narration and the sound of your voice. Despite my own Swedish ancestry (my grandfather came to America from Söderfors at age 20), I don't believe I'm biased. You certainly don't have the "accent" he had! (In fact, your voice sounded a bit Irish at first...) Your drawings are also well done. Your work shows a great deal of effort: writing the story, gathering film clips and photos, and piecing it all together.

[joannatan2010]

bad narrator. period.

[AngelKate5]

The narration is lifeless and doesn't add value. Would improve if replaced. Very Nice drawings.

[kidballistic]

The worst narrator ever. She talks like she has a penis in her mouth. Just give me the facts, enough with the long winded made up emotional speculations. I doubt I will make it to part 8 even though I am very interested in this story-