Hi, It's good to hear from you there. Yeah, that's the thing about those pretty, shiny love blades-they can slice right to the bone without even trying. Luckily, you learn something new with each cut.
you need to sleep more...you'll be so much beautiful if you'll sleep no less of 8 hours per night-...listen to me honey;-)sleep sleep & sleep and don't forget to dream a lot
Actually enjoyed this a lot! I taught creative writing and English language and literature for many years before retiring into teaching music courses at AUC, and would give your poem highest marks.
wow! I'm impressed. That was really moving. sigh............one day, perhaps, yes one day, somebody will write something that meaningful for me :) You look lovely.Forget about makeup & brushes are over-rated lol
hmm..i tot i did post a comment in here..but it didnt appear..(if i did appear out of the blue, pls just delete one of this;) )
ohwell. i was sayin i tot this was cool. n i remember saying im makeup and hairbrush challenged most of the time(too)..i could challenge u to it lol.oh nvm :P
i am not at that point yet...but you are, i see it in your eyes, when you where reading to new in your mind what the sounds needed to be, you are a blues singer baby....i feel it, i see it. dont sell your self short. Live your dream, it is possible, poeple laugh, but then they turn around and play music of someone living theres, while putting other people down.
Still lovin' all you guys. I'll never forget you. I danced with a sword one day, but fell directly upon it.
Newhomerambler 2 years ago
Hi, It's good to hear from you there. Yeah, that's the thing about those pretty, shiny love blades-they can slice right to the bone without even trying. Luckily, you learn something new with each cut.
tanoshineko 2 years ago
nice poem !, have you put it to music yet ? .... im new to your chnl .... :)
arent multiple takes just the best !!
gwhancock 4 years ago
No music to it yet- I haven't really thought about that-good idea! Hmmm...
tanoshineko 4 years ago
Great job - love the poem (have already read it...) Love your sister, too. And really enjoyed you singing! What a voice!
datsun0000 4 years ago
you need to sleep more...you'll be so much beautiful if you'll sleep no less of 8 hours per night-...listen to me honey;-)sleep sleep & sleep and don't forget to dream a lot
THCRHpositivo 4 years ago
Not a problem lately, as I have been slacking off on my "computer duties". Haven't stayed up 'till four in a month or so-Mah
tanoshineko 4 years ago
I am honored to know your tribe of women. MORE!!
Put it to music!
hanabbe 4 years ago
I would love to see you soon! I'll be moving closer to you sometime in the spring, hopefully. We'll have a nice big housewarming.
tanoshineko 4 years ago
Wow! I believe I have the perfect music for that great poem!
unym 4 years ago
"Go ahead, dance with swords" is a very multifaceted line of poetry and quite penetrating. Great job. Did your sister read it and what did she think?
TheGiggler1 4 years ago
Actually enjoyed this a lot! I taught creative writing and English language and literature for many years before retiring into teaching music courses at AUC, and would give your poem highest marks.
TheFolksinger 4 years ago
great poem/lyrics! 5stars*****
i don't see nothin' haggard here
GB
culverlocal 4 years ago
I like it very much...
What about your Book??You got a new one?
Janne
janne830 4 years ago
My dear young lady, you have more talent in your pinky finger than 80% on YT..You Go Girl!!
Be well My sweet lady,
BillyRay
BillyRay1952 4 years ago
Lovely!
Larrymcphereson 4 years ago
Heavy! Very heavy! Thank you.
steveho69 4 years ago
:) hammer gut
rhodanhase 4 years ago
Danke schon!
tanoshineko 4 years ago
wow! I'm impressed. That was really moving. sigh............one day, perhaps, yes one day, somebody will write something that meaningful for me :) You look lovely.Forget about makeup & brushes are over-rated lol
4anney 4 years ago
hmm..i tot i did post a comment in here..but it didnt appear..(if i did appear out of the blue, pls just delete one of this;) )
ohwell. i was sayin i tot this was cool. n i remember saying im makeup and hairbrush challenged most of the time(too)..i could challenge u to it lol.oh nvm :P
thisjourney 4 years ago
A nice poem indeed. Real love IS better than gold for sure! Thanks for sharing. Dan =:D
dan9tee 4 years ago
Never say try never say try.......
i am not at that point yet...but you are, i see it in your eyes, when you where reading to new in your mind what the sounds needed to be, you are a blues singer baby....i feel it, i see it. dont sell your self short. Live your dream, it is possible, poeple laugh, but then they turn around and play music of someone living theres, while putting other people down.
BlackraIN757 4 years ago
I like both voices.
potent357 4 years ago
I like your talkin voice better.
robshred66 4 years ago
This was really great! I wish I was talented enough to write stuff like that. 5 stars of course! :-)
SarahhRUSH 4 years ago
I rather enjoy your voice.
robshred66 4 years ago
I think you are smart mah.
potent357 4 years ago