I understand where you were attempting to go with this video, but I must say that the only negative comment I have is about the use of profanity. It was a little over the top. Those who live this kind of lifestyle can identify, but those in a position to either help, or spread your message global would have to consider audiences that are sympathetic, but whose sensibilities would be greatly offended. If you want to go far try scripts that have deep meaning (like this one) but can go global.
I was following your sister's blog and she mentioned your short film. I must say that I was very surprised at the level of direction, production and the plot. Much sucess to you and I look forward to the next short film.
I was watching a "Keep It Simple Sista" video when she mentioned her brother wrote/produced a movie. She said to check it out, and I did. The clip was very believable. It sort of had that "Baby Boy" vibe. Good work! At some point I'd like to interview you for my Entertainment site that is currently under construction. I wish you the best!
okay! WOW...talent all up in through the family. I can be deep conitioning my hair ,under the dryer from listening to the sister, while watching a short film from the brother! ; )
Um I want to see more!!!! Hello anybody hearing me damn that short film was good! Omg I want to see this become a movie! I know its more stuff in there closets! 2 snaps up!
Amen...sista! Men don't realize that God doesn't sleep. When they have a good woman that will give their life for them, they take that woman for granted until they kill the love that woman had for them forever. At the end of the day "what goes around comes around". This was a true indication of what's happening in relationship today. I can totally relate! I wish the cursing was tamed down a bit, but the moral of the story is well taken. Keep doing your thing. All the best to you!
That was good. I think that the mother actress was beautiful. I didn't like the first scene with the neighbor because it was a little typical..but I guess it was meant to be. Not sure why that girl's dress blew up though... Nice work overall.
maybe even try a horror flick, in the hood. Now that's different. Or how about other genres, read octavia butler and Bebe Moore Campbell for inspirations.
Honestly? The acting could have been better from the wm playing the daughter. The actress playing the mother was better. But, the story line was a bit 'off'. A lot of profanity and content that is not appropriate between parent and children.
That's some deep conversation for 8 minutes. The movie must be over the top! Did the daughter have some draws on? I think I saw her butt??? Just sayin'
5/5 Cool, some comic relief would a been nice. A comedian is always nice. You know how we do. Some people especially Black women (in my family especially me) tend to string insults, and injury, when we get mad. Like a machine gun. Rat-a-tat-tat. I speak with my hands 2. and I pace like crazy. LOL Urbody different tho. Even Tyler Perry had 2 start some where, right? Chittlin circuit. Big Rueb don't front when u get status...SHOUT OUT TO YO UTUBE FANS lol Tracy I'll see you on KISS girl : -))
Great job. I thought the actress playing the mom was excellent! The costume for the daughter was a bit off; it was hard to tell of she was supposed to be in high school or older? Also, the audio was lacking in the beginning. But overall, very good!!!!
OMGoodness! That was very good and entertaining! I fell out at the end when he said..you've only been pregnant by me once. LOL! Jokes aside, that was really good. I especially enjoyed the "mom," very convincing. And, the "daughter" certainly raised a good point about her own relationships...kids only know what we teach/show them.
Really loved this short film. Will there be other parts/series here on youtube or is there some where they could be purchased? Oh and wasnt the younger guy from college hill? Great film!!!!!!!!!
very enjoyable do some more i love short films
tee1736 11 months ago
I like this video good luck with your other projects.
missreed012 1 year ago
Think of where Ice Cube is today, Wil Smith, Tyler Perry, even Spike Lee. Your audience must be bigger than the Black Community. It must be global.
TheJPLGoodReport 1 year ago
I understand where you were attempting to go with this video, but I must say that the only negative comment I have is about the use of profanity. It was a little over the top. Those who live this kind of lifestyle can identify, but those in a position to either help, or spread your message global would have to consider audiences that are sympathetic, but whose sensibilities would be greatly offended. If you want to go far try scripts that have deep meaning (like this one) but can go global.
TheJPLGoodReport 1 year ago
I didn't like it, don't we have enough of these type of movies in our community.
lazymoon24 1 year ago
thank you all for opinions, good and bad, I'm going to keep it moving, regardless! i appreciate u!!!
bigreub 1 year ago
awesome! i love this
Sweetvengence23 2 years ago
Wow! That was great!....Will there be more?
niyahmadie 2 years ago
OMG that was good. thks to your sis I found your channell I loved that little short film.......wow :-D
ladyen7 2 years ago
I was following your sister's blog and she mentioned your short film. I must say that I was very surprised at the level of direction, production and the plot. Much sucess to you and I look forward to the next short film.
longhairluva 2 years ago
Can't wait to see the Rest...Great work Reuben!!!
emcitv 2 years ago
OMG!I Must see the rest!Please dont keep a sista waiting too long!Great luck on your success!looks VERY promising.Keep up the GREAT work!God Bless.
111jozzi 2 years ago
Very good! waiting to see the rest.
chelleum 2 years ago
Hello,
I was watching a "Keep It Simple Sista" video when she mentioned her brother wrote/produced a movie. She said to check it out, and I did. The clip was very believable. It sort of had that "Baby Boy" vibe. Good work! At some point I'd like to interview you for my Entertainment site that is currently under construction. I wish you the best!
lindajai 2 years ago
Wow I thought Traycee had talent!!! Genetics, Genetics, Genetics. . . I hope you post some new stuff soon, this was all kinds of juicy drama :-)
UrbanBella87 2 years ago
okay! WOW...talent all up in through the family. I can be deep conitioning my hair ,under the dryer from listening to the sister, while watching a short film from the brother! ; )
ummsaleem 2 years ago
Um I want to see more!!!! Hello anybody hearing me damn that short film was good! Omg I want to see this become a movie! I know its more stuff in there closets! 2 snaps up!
destiny5104 2 years ago
Great! am hooked already, waiting to see what happen next!!!!! good luck :0)
ReviveUK 2 years ago
where's the rest, lol, it was pretty good
shampaine22 2 years ago
Isn't that guy from college hill? He's really looking good.
DiamondButterflyz 2 years ago
Amen...sista! Men don't realize that God doesn't sleep. When they have a good woman that will give their life for them, they take that woman for granted until they kill the love that woman had for them forever. At the end of the day "what goes around comes around". This was a true indication of what's happening in relationship today. I can totally relate! I wish the cursing was tamed down a bit, but the moral of the story is well taken. Keep doing your thing. All the best to you!
julesjamdown 2 years ago
hey, i recognize that guy in the white tank...I don't remember his name but, I seen him on College Hill Virgin Islands...
Kaytube19 2 years ago
you shud send this to bet- a filmakers challenge.... SOON before it ends
lilbiscuitmaker 2 years ago
Thank you all for the comments! -BIG REUB
bigreub 2 years ago
good movie five star
monamona30 2 years ago
Good luck!!
lakitiamarie 2 years ago
it was okay interesting though. at first i thought the father couldnt talk, but he was watchin porn!!!
slyur244 2 years ago
Very good guy, lookin forward 2 seeing your work, Tyler Perry here he comes!!!
tjbmom123 2 years ago
Great, Great, Great Work!!!!
DarkCoCoB 2 years ago
That was good. I think that the mother actress was beautiful. I didn't like the first scene with the neighbor because it was a little typical..but I guess it was meant to be. Not sure why that girl's dress blew up though... Nice work overall.
beijosparavoce 2 years ago
2:32 lol is the dad watching porn? that was interesting i wanna see more.
UnperfectisPerfect 2 years ago
maybe even try a horror flick, in the hood. Now that's different. Or how about other genres, read octavia butler and Bebe Moore Campbell for inspirations.
kymelle 2 years ago
pretty good.
alexis20062008 2 years ago
Honestly? The acting could have been better from the wm playing the daughter. The actress playing the mother was better. But, the story line was a bit 'off'. A lot of profanity and content that is not appropriate between parent and children.
blkwmrsn 2 years ago 5
too much cursing...but overall it was pretty decent
TheVirgoLaLa 2 years ago
Wow this was damn good!!!!! I want more!!!!!
racquelgreg84 2 years ago
That's some deep conversation for 8 minutes. The movie must be over the top! Did the daughter have some draws on? I think I saw her butt??? Just sayin'
atinob43 2 years ago
I'll go see it. But did Lil' sis have some draws on?
atinob43 2 years ago 2
5/5 Cool, some comic relief would a been nice. A comedian is always nice. You know how we do. Some people especially Black women (in my family especially me) tend to string insults, and injury, when we get mad. Like a machine gun. Rat-a-tat-tat. I speak with my hands 2. and I pace like crazy. LOL Urbody different tho. Even Tyler Perry had 2 start some where, right? Chittlin circuit. Big Rueb don't front when u get status...SHOUT OUT TO YO UTUBE FANS lol Tracy I'll see you on KISS girl : -))
HipHopcheerleader 2 years ago
Great job. I thought the actress playing the mom was excellent! The costume for the daughter was a bit off; it was hard to tell of she was supposed to be in high school or older? Also, the audio was lacking in the beginning. But overall, very good!!!!
monilark 2 years ago 5
it was good, but the actors need to talk louder.
cubatown88 2 years ago
OMGoodness! That was very good and entertaining! I fell out at the end when he said..you've only been pregnant by me once. LOL! Jokes aside, that was really good. I especially enjoyed the "mom," very convincing. And, the "daughter" certainly raised a good point about her own relationships...kids only know what we teach/show them.
luvleechica 2 years ago
Really good . Would like to see the rest.
smp077 2 years ago
wow...dysfunctional family, lol...Great flick!...I would totally watch the full length movie.
SamuelsMommy 2 years ago
WOW congratulations to Traycee's brother,good job.
PrincessBeautyLounge 2 years ago
Great!! I loved it. I want a sequel!
kakakakatrina 2 years ago
Great Job
kshamar26 2 years ago
Excellent.
naturalpride 2 years ago
Aw man...this is really good Reub!! Can't wait to catch the whole thing!! I'm literally on the edge of my seat wanting MOREEE!! :-)
Kookie28Krisp 2 years ago
Very interesting. You are good . This was definetly for the mature audience.
tmamatheresa 2 years ago
I liked it! Was that guy in the beginning from College Hill?
QKalani 2 years ago
Yep...
KISSseventyseven 2 years ago
Really loved this short film. Will there be other parts/series here on youtube or is there some where they could be purchased? Oh and wasnt the younger guy from college hill? Great film!!!!!!!!!
xxxMsLynn 2 years ago
that was good. i wanna see more
120604030985cutie 2 years ago
This was really good!
1SimplYounique 2 years ago