I don't think it was terrible, but u really need to work on perfecting the little things in ur technique, for example when u turn u make it around and u have the right idea, but the position and head snap aren't there. Also, u should work on really feeling the music and portraying u character
hi. i love this song and i found your video. you're really good and have lots of potential to be a great dancer! it looks like you just put it all together and needs practice, but i think what would help give it more emotion is when you extend your arms, instead of just sort of putting them out there like at 2:41, let the movement flow from your shoulders to the tips of your fingers and make sort of a dipping/wave motion when you go down and come back up. that'll help the transition flow better♥
@ChaosInAGlassCage Aww thank you! And yeah, I know it's not very good. That's the first dance I've ever choreographed, so I'm working on it but... Haha yeah I got a lecture from my dance teacher after performing that to use my arms more. To be honest, I was just trying my hardest to remember the dance while I was performing that... :/
@love2dance614 yeah, i figured you were probably just trying to remember the steps. have you performed it yet? if you haven't def record it. excited to see how it turns out! ♥
@ChaosInAGlassCage No I'm not performing it... I choreographed that for fun. I was bored and felt like it. I did that in less than a week, which is another reason why it sucks. :P
@ChaosInAGlassCage No I'm not performing it... I choreographed that for fun. I was bored and felt like it. I did that in less than a week, which is another reason why it sucks. :P
@love2dance614 it's pretty good coreography and not much practice. glad you like to dance, i wish i had kept dancing when i was younger, i don't know that i can start again at 23! lol
@ChaosInAGlassCage Aww thanks! Though I just watched it again and absolutely hate it... >_> I'm sure it's not too late for you to dance... maybe not professionally, but if you love to dance, you should keep dancing. Actually haha my dance teacher's grandma still dances at the studio. She's inspiring...
@Xspearmint1 Awww thank you! Honestly, this was the first dance I've choreographed and performed so I didn't do so well and I really don't like it. But since I've posted this video, I've improved a lot :) super proud of myself now, but not then haha. But you're so sweet
@Xspearmint1 Oh sorry I didn't see this! Aw you're too sweet! Lol this was HORRIBLE... And yeah I want to, but I only know one person who recorded my last solo and she still hasn't sent me the video :( I'm working on another one though. I'm thinking Disney....
So prettyyyyyyy! Just add a dash of confidence! I know it's something you put together pretty quickly, but if you want to keep working on it, maybe do a little more with the transitions? And like Miss Jackie said, when you do arms do them BIG. Do it like you mean it! =^.^=
look at those noisy people in the background hahahaha
Emprez4 3 months ago
@Emprez4 Haha yeah my lyrical class had just ended so everyone was leaving
love2dance614 3 months ago
I don't think it was terrible, but u really need to work on perfecting the little things in ur technique, for example when u turn u make it around and u have the right idea, but the position and head snap aren't there. Also, u should work on really feeling the music and portraying u character
Brokentodeath 6 months ago
I don't think it was horrible :) and you mean like a disney song. you should do colors of the wind if you mean a disney song. It's from pocahontas :D
Xspearmint1 6 months ago
hi. i love this song and i found your video. you're really good and have lots of potential to be a great dancer! it looks like you just put it all together and needs practice, but i think what would help give it more emotion is when you extend your arms, instead of just sort of putting them out there like at 2:41, let the movement flow from your shoulders to the tips of your fingers and make sort of a dipping/wave motion when you go down and come back up. that'll help the transition flow better♥
ChaosInAGlassCage 1 year ago
@ChaosInAGlassCage Aww thank you! And yeah, I know it's not very good. That's the first dance I've ever choreographed, so I'm working on it but... Haha yeah I got a lecture from my dance teacher after performing that to use my arms more. To be honest, I was just trying my hardest to remember the dance while I was performing that... :/
love2dance614 1 year ago
@love2dance614 yeah, i figured you were probably just trying to remember the steps. have you performed it yet? if you haven't def record it. excited to see how it turns out! ♥
ChaosInAGlassCage 1 year ago
@ChaosInAGlassCage No I'm not performing it... I choreographed that for fun. I was bored and felt like it. I did that in less than a week, which is another reason why it sucks. :P
love2dance614 1 year ago
@ChaosInAGlassCage No I'm not performing it... I choreographed that for fun. I was bored and felt like it. I did that in less than a week, which is another reason why it sucks. :P
love2dance614 1 year ago
@love2dance614 it's pretty good coreography and not much practice. glad you like to dance, i wish i had kept dancing when i was younger, i don't know that i can start again at 23! lol
ChaosInAGlassCage 1 year ago
@ChaosInAGlassCage Aww thanks! Though I just watched it again and absolutely hate it... >_> I'm sure it's not too late for you to dance... maybe not professionally, but if you love to dance, you should keep dancing. Actually haha my dance teacher's grandma still dances at the studio. She's inspiring...
love2dance614 1 year ago
@love2dance614
you are really good and at least you can take constructive criticism so you can allow yourself to improve
Xspearmint1 8 months ago
@Xspearmint1 Awww thank you! Honestly, this was the first dance I've choreographed and performed so I didn't do so well and I really don't like it. But since I've posted this video, I've improved a lot :) super proud of myself now, but not then haha. But you're so sweet
love2dance614 8 months ago
@Xspearmint1
your welcome but i think your reallly reallly good :) you should make another video i would watch it cause i like your dancing :)
Xspearmint1 8 months ago
@Xspearmint1 Oh sorry I didn't see this! Aw you're too sweet! Lol this was HORRIBLE... And yeah I want to, but I only know one person who recorded my last solo and she still hasn't sent me the video :( I'm working on another one though. I'm thinking Disney....
love2dance614 6 months ago
So prettyyyyyyy! Just add a dash of confidence! I know it's something you put together pretty quickly, but if you want to keep working on it, maybe do a little more with the transitions? And like Miss Jackie said, when you do arms do them BIG. Do it like you mean it! =^.^=
N1njaP1rate 1 year ago