Re: Let's Write a Sawng (Step 14: Revise the Bridge Lyrics)

[RHCPfan2376]

yeah the last line was cheezy but i thought it was good

[brown5629]

w00t! go Broski

[AlphaOmega64]

I like this idea the best but in the last line, can you make it WITHOUT our radio, so it sounds like you need music everywhere you go...and instead of going up twice just go up to that high note then come down like with our radiOOO oh-oh (add the oh oh in it)

[cebroski]

Done!

From NY to LA

and all across the bay

London to Tokyo

There's no where we can go

WITHOUT our radio

Thank you for your warm words!

[evaliaband]

From New York to LA

And all across the bay

London to Tokyo

There's no place we can't go

ON THE radio

[cebroski]

great suggestion, I dig!

[Gimpy24x7]

talk about phoning in a performance lol

[cebroski]

yeah I was at work and called my sister on my lunch break. She put me on speaker phone, recorded it with her digital camera, and submitted it at the last minute

[Gimpy24x7]

cool

[CameronMaris]

eh.

[cebroski]

If this doesn't turn you on you could alternately use the lyric, "dancing to the radio," in the last line of this bridge. I dug the other bridges that emphasized dancing bc this be a dancin' sawng