Imperfection (Original)

[MadeOnEarth20]

I just found this now, and it's amazing! I love it!

[xoEternalLoveox]

This is beautiful. Fantastic work, keep it up! :)

[katienicholas10]

The lyrics are really really really good

how old are you may I ask?

[Moniiica3]

Wow. I love this! Oh, I would KILL to get a MP3 version (ok, not kill). It got me a little emotional, this would make a very good OST. Ever listened to Karekano OST? I know it's anime, but it's one of the very best OST I've ever listened to.

[Moniiica3]

@Moniiica3 And, by the way, those lyrics were pretty awesome!

[S107hy]

I love this song, it feels like it's telling a story. I would definately buy the sheet music for this.

[LTJ889]

Luke your amazing! <3

[DrGluteusMaximus]

Excellent you definitely achieved your aim. Good title for the piece too, the resolution of the chords played are im-perfect.

[adiamondteardrop]

i love it.... the intro might benefit from being a bit shorter but i'm not sure :D i loved it though.

[tati3547]

this is so good! How can anyone say this is bad?! <3 You have inspired me to make an original piano song! *starts scribbling piano notes...*

[SweetyCrumble]

wow!!

You didnt tell me about this one!

i love it, really really do!

x o x o x o x o x o x o

[2009hawtin]

Luke. Your so grate. I started playing at christmas self tolt by you and would like to say thank you and keep it up.

[astridsloane]

Luke, you're incredible as always ♥

[SihayaSyme]

Goosebumps all over!

[danishjackiechan2]

you should get a job where you can play your music in movies ;-)

[Microrator]

Well if you happen to be in that business then give me a shout please!

[Matchoo5]

I liked this piece very much, and think the words go very very well with it. Well done.

[WickedlyDifferent]

that was BLOODY AMAZING MATE!

[rain917]

This is gorgeous. <3

[goinggoinggone7]

i dont listen to piano much... but believe me, this is truly beautiful

[Francessxx]

I think you are extremely talented, and this song is stunning :)

[Pactoren]

thats prog music. and thats my favorit and its what all other music genre comes from original, ( i could imagen ) anyway awesome song. maybe to many fade outs but still awesome

[funkyg19]

AMAZING!!!!!!

[UTbound09]

perfectly imperfect!

beautiful job :)

[MusicMaaad]

you should put words to it, even take the words from a poem

[iheartlachie]

My only concern is.. will we ever get to see your face? great peice btw lol.

[Microrator]

Maybe i have no face! Just disembodied piano playing hands!

[iheartlachie]

now THAT is youtube worthy.

[fiddlereoghan]

I've seen his head. It's the size of three heads, with wide cauliflower ears, no mouth, and a thousand diamond-like eyes. It's best that no-one sees it because the sheer volume of information one receives from seeing it makes the brain implode.

[fiddlereoghan]

Well, he's no Yann Tiersen......... but I suppose it'll do!

Nice job Lukems, you'll be a star!

[aveach1018]

Wow a nice piece of music, my favorite part of the piece is beetween 2:45 thru 3:20, but the rest of it is really excellent as well. I wish I had your talent, you can go to piano classes forever and the bottom line is you either have the talent or you dont, you obviously have an amazing talent, I know its corny and cliche' but keep up the great work!

[bctinio]

I too love dissonance. I learned not to shy away from it. If it's subtle, then it's powerfully subtle.

[q1001001]

Well, I don't want to repeat what everyone is saying, but just know that it is excellent and moving.

[OMG1wtf]

Absolutely amazing!

[el1995]

Beautiful. Love around 3:16 where the bass copies the melody. Really nice piece, well done!

[regien1992]

Ur good

[CountessDiana]

wether or not you think this needs some work, i think it's absolutely beautiful :)) keep it up :)) xoxo

[weng437]

This is truly amazing and beautiful. Great job!

[writeranonymous]

I think I might have listened to this over a dozen times... bravo my friend!! ^_^

[WrightWindWrath]

This was really good. So much better than anything I could come up with. How on earth does someone become so good? I am well jealous. :D

Great job, Luke.

[LovelessxXo]

that was lovely, you can feel the sadness and love and pride and ... hmm compassion just Pouring out

[majlonyvr]

The song moves me and to me that is what makes a song perfect! Thank you so much for putting this song on youtube!

[Microrator]

No thank you for taking the time to listen to it!

[JdtKids]

wow I really like that idea...imperfection...incredib­le, and love the side note!

[LillyC68]

beautiful work... 5* for you,

Lilly

[julie11306]

this is amazing. and i have to say, what you wrote in the description box was so pleasing. i like that you think of imperfection that way. and in this song, like you said, it's not perfect, but that's what makes it beautiful.

i love it!

[Froencs]

you can totally hear that you are inspired by the fray ;)

i like it but it feels like there's something missing. maybe a lead voice for a melody or something. can't put it down properly. this way it's more like a progression of chords but not a full song. does anyone get what i mean? guess i'm too tired to think straight...

[Microrator]

I understand you, when i started i wasn't sure if i should wirte a piece for just piano, or one that would supplement a vocal melody. In the end i left it as a piano sketch, because i'm not really a great lyricist. But yeh you are right it sounds way too chordal in places, but im trying!

[rockonmusic9]

i would say some of the chords could use a little work, like you said, but it still sounds very nice nonetheless. a little revision and this song would be perfect. i love how it's slow at first, but then picks up the tempo later. very nice, 5 stars.

[shoallasoala]

Very good work, I was excited as soon as I saw in my subscription box that this was an original. I've tried unresolved chords recently and I love how they sound, but none of my compositions are anywhere near this. 5/5!

[JacksonAK92]

Awesome work micro.

[najgirliegirl]

its lovely.

It feels so melancholic at first and then uplifts...

[Lea233]

brilliant, i loved the anticipation the dissonant chords created and i thought it worked really well. I think my favorite part is 2:51 - 3:07 , but I'm kind of a sucker for  low notes : ) Anyways, thanks for putting up an original!

[emz357]

i enjoyed this very much. five stars.

and by the way, i am a huh-uge fan of unresolved chords.

been playing 10 years.... wish i had this kind of talent.

[RoddaMusic]

another thing I am trying to improve on aswell :L. I love it. Your side note is the best thing I've read all day.

[gswanson2003]

Loved it all except the chord progression at 0:43 - 0:52.

5 stars nontheless.

[Microrator]

Thanks for that!

Yeh some of the chords are a bit uncomfortable, but my game plan was that they would highlight the more pleasant chords!

[kicksforlife]

love it!! it sounds amazing, and your side note totally makes sense :] well done!

[soccaluva94]

beautiful! :) every time i watch your videos i wondered what something you wrote would sound like. it's great!

[Kingsland101]

i LOVE it!

more originals, definately!:) x

[fraughenie]

Loved it Bullet!!

[Microrator]

Cheers mate

[floedsje]

I like =]