putting this on here u have guts-i have to say tht no..i didnt like it, there was heavy breathing the entire time, but u have to expect criticism when you put something on the internet.
before you try to get all fancy and stuff with the rhythms and the grace notes, work on making your voice clear and not breathy, and making your vowels warm and pure, not harsh and annoying....you can do it!
You have a good voice but start singing from your diaphragm your singing though your nose (i used to to ) Dont worry with practice it is really easy , But other wise good job
I'll have to learn how to use my diaphragm then, and to sing a bit louder. Thank you for telling me why you didn't like it, it's very annoying why some one just says that they don't like and nothing else. At least with comments like yours I know where I need to improve, so thanks. ^_^ have a nice day.
Too much breathing. Half the time you sounded out of breath. You need to stop singing from your throat and start singing from your diaphragm. It will improve your sound and will make you louder. Also, before you add your own quirks, you need to learn to sing the original song correctly. Keep practicing! =]
I didn't like it. The breathing was in the wrong place. It didn't sound like you were using your diaphram. Too quiet. Added your own little tune thing which didn't work.
Well, I'm sorry you didn't like. Thank you for the comment and for telling me what you didn't like instead of just insulting me, I'll work on improving. Once again thank you.
well you dont suck but you could help with a few voice lessons if you want to be realy awsome! just because your not good at singing doesnt mean you shouldnt! :)
And what Shawdow said people dont have to put mean comments. You are ok really. It may not be the best but its still ok. At least you gave it a shot! :]
Im usin my dads page. Your ok its just you need to do a little work. I dont want to be harsh but maybe you should practice a lil bit more. If this is a rude comment write back but im just saying
You did ok and I know some people may not like it, but they dont have to post bad comments....I'll admit this isn't the "best" thing i've ever heard but its still ok. Its not like it's bad at all. I can listen to it, and even if people don't like it they still shouldn't post mean comments. Im not going to get in a big fight or anything so I'll leave it to you. Hope you fufill your dreams.
curses! lol i meant to say good comment, but i accidentally clicked bad. so sorry! i completely agree with everything you said. and its good to be honest, but honesty doesnt have to include cuss words and insults >>; some people are just ridiculous.
I just want to tell you all that you dont have to be so mean! If you posted a song you sang out on youtube, you wouldnt be so happy to be called "Chris Crocker choking on a stick". that was too much. dreamer22220, dont listen to the mean comments you get. theyre just stupid people in front of a computer with nothing better to do than posting stupid comments without thinking about other peoples feelings. Ceep up the good work honey ;)
*Shrugs* I don't know about the breathing problem thing, I might, I have been exposed to second hand smoke all my life so it's a possability. And I wasn't bored, I just don't know how to put emoshine into songs that I haven't written, plus my mic is stupid so if I tried it would probabaly do some thing stupid.
uhmm you're trying too hard, u have to make sure you don't slide your notes up and down, listen back to this and pay attention to the parts where you're sliding and work on it so that when you change notes, ure not hitting every other note on the way up/down. There were some moments that sounded really good but others need a lot of work. Also, don't take what other people say to heart and ignore them. I think you need to get singing lessons before u develope habits.. good luck!
Ok...first off stop replying to the nasty comments if you really want to prove you don't care what they think, don't reveal that you're reading their comments. Second I don't think you're voice is bad after all it's not like I was expecting American Idol when I logged on. When you exhale try exhaling the song instead of a breath and you're voice sounds young...maybe you should try the more upbeat version of this song.
i'm sorry but that was aweful. it's too slow for the song. and try not singing directly into the microphone. it catches every breath that way. sing across it. also sing from your gut and not your throat. you have room to improve you sound young so keep working at it. it's just crapy now. i can't sing so your one up on me.
lololol i love how i just said like 1 thing then ur like......WOAH PERIOD and u freak out just cause u know that ur voice is so fucked up nd ur fat nd have no friends at school lol learn how 2 sing dip shit
not bad, but next time back up a little from the mic, and see if you can extend if, taking a few more breaks. The gaps in the song kind of ruin it, but good job! 4/5
hey thats pretty good , and not being mean but your a little off if you no what i mean but your mike you used like crackled so ... you are good just try get in tune :)
You have no clue how wrong you are. My daddy loves me and there've been times that I've had at least 5 boys fighting over me. So you really don't know any thing. Also, who the hell asked you? You're nothing but some peace of shit with no life. Now, if you'll excuse me I have better thing to do: like call my friends and plan what we're going to do for Chris' b-day. So bye-bye.
Really I don't wanna be mean but I didn't think you sounded good at all, maybe it has also to do with the muffled sound of the microphone but idk. Like I said, i don't wanna hurt anyone's feelings. ~Ange
Ugly piece of crap. Oh sorry... I was referring to you and the quality..
BBandBekka 5 days ago
at least someone got the guts! Who cares if shes gay its her choice
blondangel10 2 months ago
Just shup up at least she trid and had the guts to do it
william101rocks 3 months ago
you wrecked the song. that sucked!!
RunnerBeast98 4 months ago
Umm.......
RunnerBeast98 4 months ago
putting this on here u have guts-i have to say tht no..i didnt like it, there was heavy breathing the entire time, but u have to expect criticism when you put something on the internet.
AprincessFallsInLove 4 months ago
This is alright but the quality is CRAP
Jasafarina 5 months ago
wow just wow
21mustanglover 5 months ago
horrible!!!!! gah i almost puked! ur like the worst singer ever i dont know if you would even call that singing... :(
CandSsurvival 8 months ago
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Ki3r4n888 5 months ago
@CandSsurvival Make a video of you singing see if your any good, little hypocritical dick....Nice vid dreamer you can improve but still good start.
Ki3r4n888 5 months ago
Would you guys stop judging her singing, at least she sang and she was happy with it! If you don't like her singing go away and stop commenting.
jaspersgirl99 9 months ago 2
OUT OF TUNE
ALL YOU'VE DONE IS RUINED SOME GOOD LYRICS
AND WHY WERE YOU SINGIN THROUGH YOUR NOSE
JUST STUPID
LXAXRXAXGXRXOXVXEXSX 9 months ago
horrible
PlutoUndisputed 9 months ago
errr.... no comment
AngelPowah 9 months ago in playlist IF ONLY!!
YOU JUST KILLED THE SONG!!1 >:@
gizmona11 10 months ago 2
not good
emilynolan99 11 months ago
shit
LaBacia627 11 months ago
You sing through your nose, intonation was all over the place.
Sorry, but your video made me go like this: )=
lala12349 11 months ago 2
not being mean, this is 2 help
u have a good voice, but u need 2 work on not singing thru ur nose
go get sum perfessional help, and im 100% sure u will b awesome(:
also it sounds like ur singing a little bit 2 close 2 the microphone but hey, practice makes perfect(:
342kf 1 year ago
before you try to get all fancy and stuff with the rhythms and the grace notes, work on making your voice clear and not breathy, and making your vowels warm and pure, not harsh and annoying....you can do it!
DiannaBlack 1 year ago
this sucks. you suck. dont waste your time.
3MMi34 1 year ago
do you have a cold or something? no offense but it kinda seems like you are singing from your nose :/ good effort though :P
98kierra 1 year ago
i like the wolf picture.
SomeoneSayHofer 1 year ago
kinda bad is genris!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
origami345 1 year ago
srry this isent a song people sing...... it was bad :(
razznfrazz12 1 year ago
This is kinda bad sorry
20breanne10 1 year ago
sing it a little faster and dont make it sound so naisily and it will be alot better
triflinful 1 year ago
Um, I'm sorry, but that's not how you're supposed to sing it... Sorry, but I think you might want to work on it... No offense...
cherylsmith75 1 year ago
i liked it you have a pretty voice
khalifdove 1 year ago
i definitely think you have good potential, maybe just a better mic, but it was nice! =)
zedog546 1 year ago
It might have been good but the quality was really bad so i couldn't understand a lot of it
bellatrixblack1313 1 year ago
Sorry, it really wasn't good... probably because you didn't even follow the correct tune. What was that even of?
fruityloopsloops 1 year ago
LESBIAN!
soymeno 1 year ago
@soymeno What does it fucking matter to you!?
mandorian10 1 month ago
the tune isnt rite but it was cool
awesomechick810 1 year ago
sooooo.... uhhh you pretty much sound like my dog when he farts. i dunno if it smells nearly as bad, but..... yeah. stop trying
bmcc7896 1 year ago
sux
thats all im saying and this so yeah
TheStpatricksday 1 year ago
GAY
soymeno 1 year ago
you are correct, I am gay. I'm a happy girl and so is my girl friend.
dreamer22220 1 year ago 12
@soymeno Didn't you allready say that? Waht is wrong with you??
mandorian10 1 month ago
You have a good voice but start singing from your diaphragm your singing though your nose (i used to to ) Dont worry with practice it is really easy , But other wise good job
LadyHallia 1 year ago
good, kinda short, but :)
bsmithruns 1 year ago
@bsmithruns Thats the whole song.
mandorian10 1 month ago
:) good :)
MizzLexiBabez 1 year ago
The singing was awful, the spectacle was marvelous. You might want to hit up FailBlog. ;)
sonamy123 2 years ago
awsome but you should fix your mic. it'll sound way better not that it dosent now but ur still awsome at it
dragondrawer30 2 years ago
bad ha ha ha don`t get mad go away tommy and stop reading this.
WoodStock477 2 years ago
half and half
garrett7171 2 years ago
Just a sec, brb, gotta go get some toilet paper to stick in my bleeding ears...
Back. That was... umm.... satisfactory. Sure.
Consider lessons. Or consider stopping.
Menathinius 2 years ago 4
Fix your mic. and that might have been why it sounded wierd
nzwb101 2 years ago 2
:S practice
KreeRSLee 2 years ago 3
Sorry but singing lessons....really...don;t embarrass yourself..like many have....get singing lessons.
MistvillagePirate 2 years ago 5
not bad! try getting a better mic!!!
jonastwilight18 2 years ago
not to good but the mike was bad so.. well your ok
sunny149603 2 years ago
your not good..
Jepeto31 2 years ago 23
you need a new mic !!
carheadman123123 2 years ago
ummm, no offense, but you sound terrible.
yoyoitsme555 2 years ago 4
THAT SUCKED BALLS!
Thebudgie253 2 years ago
@Thebudgie253 I realy hate it when people don't listen to me....
mandorian10 1 month ago
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MY EARS ARE BLEEDING!!!!!!!!!
MrBiggie1014 2 years ago 2
unlike the others that commented, i'm not gonna be nice about it.
YOU SUCK BIG BALLS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DON'T SING ON YOUTUBE IF YOU SUCK!!!!
maxidoodlie 2 years ago 3
umm yeah ur singing through ur nose might want to work on it
mommacate 2 years ago 19
*cough*
cheezenfriez 2 years ago
I could not understand a word, sry
crappy mics lol
Get some training, too be honest its not well...good, just keep practacing and work on it.
FuCKuP2 2 years ago 5
i'm not being mean but you sing through ur nose... work on that.... and you actually might get somwhere.
brownsguurl08 2 years ago 2
Get training you might have talent
FreshPfanALLTHEWAY 2 years ago 9
I can't tell if you're being sincere or not but if you are then thank you.
dreamer22220 2 years ago
I am! your welcome
FreshPfanALLTHEWAY 2 years ago
ah!!!! my ears!!!!!!!
strawberrycat132 2 years ago
well i didnt like it but al least u tried
hihat3rsby3hat3rs1 2 years ago
you tried and i really liked it. it wasnt any thing extreamly fancy like u didnt over do it. great job
MYlastthought 2 years ago 2
Thank you :)
dreamer22220 2 years ago
u have talent but it sounds like ur trying way to hard
ashbnash1 2 years ago
Oh, okay. Thanks ^_^.
dreamer22220 2 years ago
ya but otherwise its good
bcmrox 2 years ago
.............Well.....um.......First Of All I've Won A Lot Of Talent Awards For My Singing
Honestly.......Your singing was the worst i have ever heard
SakuraHaruno6775 2 years ago
@SakuraHaruno6775 You're an ignorant whore, so keep your mouth shut.
FireyFiringFire 1 year ago
It was good, ur alittle to nastley! But Great Potentail!
lovegg5678 2 years ago
Thank you.
dreamer22220 2 years ago
I thought it was bad... Mainly because you were too quiet, and you weren't using your diaphragm.
But, yeah. You also added your own little tune to it instead of the original.
PedoSaur 2 years ago
I'll have to learn how to use my diaphragm then, and to sing a bit louder. Thank you for telling me why you didn't like it, it's very annoying why some one just says that they don't like and nothing else. At least with comments like yours I know where I need to improve, so thanks. ^_^ have a nice day.
dreamer22220 2 years ago
Also, Jesus Christ, most of the people who commented on this video cannot spell for shit. Why!?
POKEMONbitches 2 years ago
Too much breathing. Half the time you sounded out of breath. You need to stop singing from your throat and start singing from your diaphragm. It will improve your sound and will make you louder. Also, before you add your own quirks, you need to learn to sing the original song correctly. Keep practicing! =]
POKEMONbitches 2 years ago
..im sorry..but like..ur not good...at all.
GOBATISTA 2 years ago 2
i think it was pretty nice!! <3
langels123 2 years ago
thanks
dreamer22220 2 years ago
Dude my girlfriend sings better then that, and she sucks!!!
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ButterFlykisses1794 2 years ago
I didn't like it. The breathing was in the wrong place. It didn't sound like you were using your diaphram. Too quiet. Added your own little tune thing which didn't work.
fwed1 2 years ago 3
Well, I'm sorry you didn't like. Thank you for the comment and for telling me what you didn't like instead of just insulting me, I'll work on improving. Once again thank you.
dreamer22220 2 years ago
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hahahhahah my ears ouch did a dog just bite my ears..?
LoL
give up sining
try speeching
McAsSF 3 years ago
I think you were pretty good.
MsHatakee1 3 years ago
Thank you ^_^
dreamer22220 3 years ago
give it up your no good
Sketchymf 3 years ago
hey if u cant think of something nice dont comment i bet u have a terrible voice both u and msxdragonx
bcmrox 2 years ago 2
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SO SUCK SHUT THE FUCK UP FAT BITCH
msxdragonx 3 years ago
you need a better mic.
and you suck at singing (:
TEAMSWITZERLANDx 3 years ago 3
Wtf...?LoLz...Is THis Singing Or Crying!!?
McAsSF 3 years ago 2
not very much you are not a good singer.
washingtonboy09 3 years ago 2
lol right when u talked i instently knew this was going to be crap....ew why'd u post this?
itachicloud 3 years ago
same here
Sketchymf 3 years ago
that was terrible
jayneal12 3 years ago
WOW!!!!
Thats all I can say.
GOOD JOB.
1992peter 3 years ago 2
Thank you ^_^
dreamer22220 3 years ago
This girl needs speech lessons... learn to speak before you learn to sing.
ConnorP95 3 years ago
you did a good job but sing threw ur nose not ur tummy
deamonfroggy 3 years ago
You have the right idea, but you need some more practice.
wolfwriterRodger 3 years ago
well you dont suck but you could help with a few voice lessons if you want to be realy awsome! just because your not good at singing doesnt mean you shouldnt! :)
moonlight324 3 years ago 2
hahahahaa
i had to show my friends :D
hahahahaa
oh my god!
hun
im sorry your tone deaf.
i really am sorry.
but you are
and you cant chnage that
so move on.
marebear2796 3 years ago 2
how the fuck is she tone deaf that was awsome you asswhole
pyrusbrawler12 3 years ago 2
no offence but u suck!!!!!
austin830dawg 3 years ago
Lol
KozmikKiller 3 years ago
that was pritty good just do a little moe pracice and it will be even more awsome you hae talant
pyrusbrawler12 3 years ago 4
thank you
dreamer22220 3 years ago
you mean NO talent
marebear2796 3 years ago
dont give up your day job...
aeriegirl13 3 years ago
Did you comment before or are you too stupid to come up with any thing original?
dreamer22220 3 years ago
i dont want to offend you.........but,,i just think you need to ....uummm...well.........practice a bit more though!!
you have an ok voice.well done for being brave enough to do it!
purplepeanut090 3 years ago 4
Thanks, and don't worry, I'm not offended.
dreamer22220 3 years ago
nop, sorry
carlostrescoli 3 years ago
ummmm?????????????? random
eramus5614 3 years ago
I don't like it,But kudos for the effort.THe regular version is waaaaaaaayyyyyyyy better.(no offnese please please please don't take offense to this)
Mamasita5678 3 years ago
Don't worry, I'm not Offended.
dreamer22220 3 years ago
it was alright but if herd better and if u want to sound better get farther away from the that might help
breadster2 3 years ago
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u suck bitch
jimmyb700 3 years ago
you sing plain.. i wouldnt buy a cd -.-
ZemaProductions 3 years ago
And what Shawdow said people dont have to put mean comments. You are ok really. It may not be the best but its still ok. At least you gave it a shot! :]
lbacardi143 3 years ago
Im usin my dads page. Your ok its just you need to do a little work. I dont want to be harsh but maybe you should practice a lil bit more. If this is a rude comment write back but im just saying
lbacardi143 3 years ago 4
I don't think the comment's rude. You're not saying any thing just to be mean, unlike some people on here. I don't mind criticism, just flamers.
dreamer22220 3 years ago
just stop you suck my ears ow that really hurt come on have some common cuticy
walrus4001 3 years ago
You did ok and I know some people may not like it, but they dont have to post bad comments....I'll admit this isn't the "best" thing i've ever heard but its still ok. Its not like it's bad at all. I can listen to it, and even if people don't like it they still shouldn't post mean comments. Im not going to get in a big fight or anything so I'll leave it to you. Hope you fufill your dreams.
shadow1the1hedgehog 3 years ago
Thanks :)
dreamer22220 3 years ago
curses! lol i meant to say good comment, but i accidentally clicked bad. so sorry! i completely agree with everything you said. and its good to be honest, but honesty doesnt have to include cuss words and insults >>; some people are just ridiculous.
AlbinoDinoX3 2 years ago
I just want to tell you all that you dont have to be so mean! If you posted a song you sang out on youtube, you wouldnt be so happy to be called "Chris Crocker choking on a stick". that was too much. dreamer22220, dont listen to the mean comments you get. theyre just stupid people in front of a computer with nothing better to do than posting stupid comments without thinking about other peoples feelings. Ceep up the good work honey ;)
lovelovelovelove1989 3 years ago 2
Thank you ^_^
dreamer22220 3 years ago
have u got some kind of breathing problem cuz u breathe 2 much and u sound like you are bored
duckthecool 3 years ago
*Shrugs* I don't know about the breathing problem thing, I might, I have been exposed to second hand smoke all my life so it's a possability. And I wasn't bored, I just don't know how to put emoshine into songs that I haven't written, plus my mic is stupid so if I tried it would probabaly do some thing stupid.
dreamer22220 3 years ago
OMG MY EARS@@@ THEY BURN!!! no offence but u suck
so508 3 years ago
what the fuck u suck at singing
megliam55 3 years ago
it's not that bad but you just have to sing it right not with with the wrong beats
melbell5287 3 years ago
OMg that was terrible!!
Light0606 3 years ago
HAHA CHRIS CROCKER wtf was that it sounded like a dieing horse ^_^
SilverStarCutie94 3 years ago
eww thats grimeyyyyyyyy
EmMiLy1111 3 years ago
not 2 bad. just try 2 get better quality k
liljokercalifaz 3 years ago
Okay, thanks
dreamer22220 3 years ago
uhmm you're trying too hard, u have to make sure you don't slide your notes up and down, listen back to this and pay attention to the parts where you're sliding and work on it so that when you change notes, ure not hitting every other note on the way up/down. There were some moments that sounded really good but others need a lot of work. Also, don't take what other people say to heart and ignore them. I think you need to get singing lessons before u develope habits.. good luck!
stephenwainrib 3 years ago
Okay, thank you.
dreamer22220 3 years ago
Ok...first off stop replying to the nasty comments if you really want to prove you don't care what they think, don't reveal that you're reading their comments. Second I don't think you're voice is bad after all it's not like I was expecting American Idol when I logged on. When you exhale try exhaling the song instead of a breath and you're voice sounds young...maybe you should try the more upbeat version of this song.
JenicaT 3 years ago
Thanks, I'll try, again thanks.
dreamer22220 3 years ago
are u a he-she? cause u sounds like chris crocker choking on a stick
potatoe919 3 years ago
i'm sorry but that was aweful. it's too slow for the song. and try not singing directly into the microphone. it catches every breath that way. sing across it. also sing from your gut and not your throat. you have room to improve you sound young so keep working at it. it's just crapy now. i can't sing so your one up on me.
loverryoko 3 years ago
:S
From me
DivaPowers 3 years ago
awesome voice!
jesusandjonasfreek11 3 years ago
Thank you ^_^
dreamer22220 3 years ago
lol tahts not even the tune dip shit lol
LIANGE1011 3 years ago
So what bitch? You really think that I give a rats ass? If so then you're sadly mistaken.
dreamer22220 3 years ago
lololol i love how i just said like 1 thing then ur like......WOAH PERIOD and u freak out just cause u know that ur voice is so fucked up nd ur fat nd have no friends at school lol learn how 2 sing dip shit
LIANGE1011 3 years ago
u just got told lol!
thejohnnycage 3 years ago
SERIOUSLY!!!
RyanScheklerluver 3 years ago
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McAsSF 3 years ago
wow your wonderfull i bet ur parent would not let u show ur face on youtube lol =D
pugslygirl123 3 years ago
Thank you ^_^
dreamer22220 3 years ago
not bad, but next time back up a little from the mic, and see if you can extend if, taking a few more breaks. The gaps in the song kind of ruin it, but good job! 4/5
jamezricky 3 years ago
Thanks you, I'll have to try that.
dreamer22220 3 years ago
hey thats pretty good , and not being mean but your a little off if you no what i mean but your mike you used like crackled so ... you are good just try get in tune :)
letsmbpk 3 years ago
Okay, thanks. And hopefully I'll find a way to put my singing on here with out having to use these really bad mics.
dreamer22220 3 years ago
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haha this is shit
50ishot 3 years ago
its pretty good but ur toon is off...
chokletmilk12 3 years ago
Thanks, and sorry 'bout that. I don't know how to sing it the right way so I usualy sing this song, and others, my own way. Sorry.
dreamer22220 3 years ago
No, you don't know how to sing it the right way because you're a worthless disgrace to your parents who no boy will ever want.
Ragumshnagum 3 years ago
You have no clue how wrong you are. My daddy loves me and there've been times that I've had at least 5 boys fighting over me. So you really don't know any thing. Also, who the hell asked you? You're nothing but some peace of shit with no life. Now, if you'll excuse me I have better thing to do: like call my friends and plan what we're going to do for Chris' b-day. So bye-bye.
dreamer22220 3 years ago
There is no God...
Ragumshnagum 3 years ago
Really I don't wanna be mean but I didn't think you sounded good at all, maybe it has also to do with the muffled sound of the microphone but idk. Like I said, i don't wanna hurt anyone's feelings. ~Ange
anhaFay 3 years ago
It's okay, I don't mind that you don't like. I'm just thankful that yur not being rude like so many other people on here. So thanks for being nice.
dreamer22220