Bradley Stay (Don't Go Until You Know How Much We Love You)

[JAElsmore]

I dont doubt your talent, but that song was very boring and the lyrics are way too complex for a listener to try to follow along and relate to. Most people dont know what some of those words even mean.

[anxiousbane]

@JAElsmore I understand...we should always cater to the lowest common denominator so that stuff is more gooder. Sorry that no one forced you to watch. I don't claim it's a great song, nor did I write it for your praise. If you can do better, then please go do so.

[JAElsmore]

@anxiousbane So you posted this just so those who like it will say "great job". You seriously want no criticism on your song unless its someone who really likes it? I was just trying to give you my perspective, sorry if I hurt your feelings man. Most people put there videos on here to get comments back about it. Thats what this site is for dude.

[anxiousbane]

@JAElsmore The difference is that if I watch someone putting in the effort, and exposing their emotions, whether I think the song sucks or not, I'm not going to go out of my way to leave them a comment saying it sucked. Also, the lyrics may not be mainstream friendly, but except for a few words I don't see how they are sooo complex. I admit its a long winded version, but it's also like take 1 of an unfinished song. You get a diff perspective when you start posting your own stuff on here.

[JAElsmore]

@anxiousbane Ok man. I never said it sucked first of all. I actually said " I don't doubt your talent". I'm sorry you took the criticism the wrong way. Keep on singing dude I really loved the song, sounded great, forget what I said.

[anxiousbane]

@JAElsmore "very boring" sounds like "sucks" to me, but whatever, it's cool man. No hard feelings. It's just a hobby, but thanks for the encouragement.

[sublimetime024]

dude i liked it alot man maybe i should try to write a jam for bradley james

[anxiousbane]

@sublimetime024 do it, bro! jam out!

[sarahforth1]

Wow! Love the lyrics! You are such a talented songwriter!!! And, yes, the guitar sounds great!!! :)

[anxiousbane]

when i saw you in the new sunshine

and your sound it waxed divine

so desperate to find a new way to unwind

could you be living in rewind, and falling up...

truth resides in your fingertips

love revealed by your freudian slips

[anxiousbane]

when i saw you look at me and i could tell you did not see oh, that you could see it too the love that we feel for you and stay stay! truth resides in your fingertips love revealed by your freudian slips but it's a long way down when the captain trips the chalice tips as the record skips