staircases

[Teddies3805]

Take it from someone a bit older than u & a lot of years of Ed. - very good, very, very good!

[TheGothicPoodle]

I realize this is not an appropriate place to post this, but I am unable to message you:

Whyyyyy is that piece on Paper Anniversary private. That was my favorite thing on all of youtube. Hadn't watched it in awhile and I went to show someone today and BAM…

I mean, I understand why you did it, just expressing my sadness.

Caleb

P.S. You are really awesome.

[Rotting102]

Am i the only one who thinks this would make an AMAZING graduation speech? ;) You're great Kade, keep it up.

[jjguerra48]

very reminiscent of Jon Sands

[xmarylu]

you are veery talented, keep up doin that, I love it!

[JENTHELUSH]

totally love this

[technicolor444]

really well done, i think.

good poems give perspective, especially on subjects that are right in front of our noses, but are continually ignored in the day to day. they re-tell the truth in a new light.

poems like this can be grounding, in a sense.

is there a slam scene in texas?

[PaRkOuR4LiFeMaN]

omg thats amazing :D

fair fucks man,

i wrote a few poems

but thats just pleasing to the ear

[timetopretend4]

gorgeous. <3

[dirtxdonnas]

wow. amazing

[TheEnemyOfKira]

Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! 5/5 stars and faves!

[Liv6283]

Kade, this is amazing [:

[amonav1s]

You look like Devon Sawa, it's uncanny!

[angielooo]

this is fucking amazing. more than publishable.

[LiveInFullEffect]

Epic.

[SwirlytownRUs]

Beautiful and poignant.

[christyanajw]

Beautiful.

[Yaknowdagame]

damn Kade!! that rocked..your a beast lol. It was great I loved it, i didn't even know you did poetry

[propshuass]

Dood... Legit. That was fucking phenominal!

[xoxloveyoxo]

you know when you hear something and just wish you wrote it? this is one of those for me!

[ShannonShevelle]

Great!!! It sounded like a monologue it had dramatic effect.

[TheAnnaShowUk]

I didnt even know you wrote poetry kade!

I hope you dont mind but I intend to show this at writers group after school on tuesday.

the image it gives is very surreal and picturesque. a nice thing to do for somthing like stairs, make people look again.

also, a good ending, it brings emphasis onto the importance of the matieral if you repeat yourself, but changing it slightly from the begining brings the attention in with the repeated bit, and keeps it there for the important ending. well done.

[mrsethcorbin]

An amateur? Kade you're as modest as they come. This was an amazing piece, I loved it.

[hairsprayqueen]

You're amazing.

[mgrhpfan93]

I just started listening to Def Jam... definitely like this kind of poetry. Good job. =)

[PALSTCB]

So amazing. (:

[lezzy09]

wow that was really beautiful!!!!

[raz08raz08raz]

I love this =D

[raineinsane]

Imagery; omg amazing imagery.

[igore99]

would u put this in the side bar i want to qoute u on facebook this is GREAT

[zxLEXxz]

Awesome man. I'd love to give some better feedback than that, but right now I'm a bit awestruck.

I'm inspired to start writing again.

[bCurious2]

Beautiful and brilliant!

[DietDrPepperGirl]

The pictures you paint with your words are beautiful and I think your delivery is spot on. Thanks for sharing!

[kade512]

you are awesome, my friend.

[TousVous]

Fucking beautiful. Like you.

[moiragranada]

beautiful. I wish I could ryme in English. It is difficult!! In Italian or Spanish I can do it easily, but rythm in English is complex and really beautiful.

[PaintedRavensong]

Great Kade!! Staircases are indeed cool. Please tell me that you are familiar with Escher's piece.

[SarahSizzle318]

you are a brilliant brilliant man =)

LUFF SARAH!

[caitlinboo]

love it Kade, Keep it up!

[missdivinestalls]

Awesome! Have you searched for Def Poetry Jam videos on youtube? Their timing and delivery is amazing and the rhyming and syntax of the stanzas is kick ass.

[NotSoClassyBroad]

i agree, a bit slower would add more emphasis on certain parts.

PS i like to write slammers, too. cheers!

[kikyoslovergirl]

i suggest reading a little bit slower, you seem rushed.

[TheTattooedGirl]

I am really loving your poetry, Kade :-) It's wonderful.

[sylviemc3]

Beautiful imagery! Don't be afraid to take pauses, they can be really powerful and help the heavy words sink into the audience. Keep it up!

[celnaning]

i love the passion in your voice behind your words, gives me goose bumps

[SoxAsh0810]

I really liked that. For being "lighthearted," I didn't really see it as completely lighthearted...it seemed very symbolic to me. I hope that you keep posting these. Really.

[KaiGuent]

awesome! : )

[darkangel624]

your so passionate and amazing : D

[darkeststorm]

o.o i'm pretty sure this would pop to mind next time i use the stairs...

^^ i love what you write, always said very passionately

[12thLeveIWizardKing]

Amazing! You're a great writer!

[moldingMe]

Beautiful. You are talented man. Keep them coming. Your writing and your delivery are amazing.

[tenthingsqueer]

wow, that was amaaaazing kade! actually, love it! beautiful...and it totally made my day [:

[KINGV3NOM]

pretty good

[internationalquiche]

You're amazing.

[musicaljoplin]

"...I think they're infatuated with me."

Who wouldn't be? =)

Great job, Kade. I look forward to the next one. Cheers!

[amandatovar07]

that is really good love the words good job keep up the good work

[ItalianStallionette]

WOW! This is so beautiful! YOU are SO beautiful!

[SoNluver511]

keep up the good work. your delivery is very powerful. awesome job!

[thenewstmudfrog]

so you're a big fan of spoken word poetry then I take it? Do you have any favorite poets? Some of my favorites are Andrea Gibson? and Anis Mojgani=)

[cheesyches]

I agree, Andrea Gibson and Anis Mojgani are amazing. Buddy Wakefield, Marty McConnell, and Rachel McKibbens are great as well.

[lidespinkparty]

That was awesome

[cheesyches]

I've been into slam a lot lately as well, I'm probably going to try and record myself in the next few days of me doing some of my work. I absolutely love the stuff you have put up. You have talent.

Have you ever gone to the Dallas Poetry Slam? It's every Friday night at Cafe Madrid I think.

[ohnoahomo]

We had a slam poetry night at my university a few nights ago and I have to say that, after watching a few of your videos, the way you prepare yourself and your words is way better than what I saw there.

My favorite of your's has to be Paper Anniversary.

Keep up the good work!

[biscuit13185]

i love your words... keep writing, you're good.

[LiveLifeUnrated]

Love It :-)