::Poems Of Irony, Mannerism, And Love::

[leobaba7]

get some psychiatric help.

[ballsackgina]

Personally I dont like goths or emo kids...but I got to admit it did take alot of guts for you to post this...I give you kudos...nice writing and keep it up...

[iLiveLaughLoveLife]

Ya the last one had some really random crap in it. You'll let me kiss bullets, but you wont let me smoke

He said "Bullets don't give you cancer."

I told him "No, but they'll give you a bad case of lead poisoning."

Thats pretty bad

[ninjakid626]

i like poems!!! and yours are so good

[dementeddumbass]

wow u got hot voice lol

[holdxmexclose92]

ur rlly pretty...sorry i just wanted to say that lol...luv the tripps. ur poems are osm

[henry619hhh]

MARINE CORPS! wierdo

[codyclayrice]

i love them i write some some times but i dont think mine r ne good yours are great

[minnow4410]

I think it would be good if your wording was less....simple. Sometimes it works, but not here.

[martyrdomcausespanic]

I'm not a big fan of the content, but you're a decent writer, and I'll admit, it takes guts to put yourself out there. So nice job!

[demonique666]

"Meanings hidden with in meanings"

Isn't it more grammatically correct to say 'within'? Did you split the word in half for a purpose that I'm not seeing?

[crazyatheist123]

your so goth, you make the backround look goth, touche

[MorphineRose]

That put a smile on my face.

[synthetickat]

Yet you can't seem to figure out when someone is mocking you. Ha.

[LeopBloom]

you're pretty much stereotypical, but your poems are good, so in general you are good, and you are not afraid about sharing your true feelings about several very personal stuff, so five stars for you.

[SecretlyLovingYou]

Dude, i have those pants.

Tripp pants rock. && your pretty.

And your poem, Its beautiful! You kno what you should do hun, make a book, make a book so your poems can help people. I owuld love to here more.

[MorphineRose]

Shh.. Its a secret, but there may be a short film / vignette soon.

[sispunk]

Your poetry is beautiful. Writing can be such a good release and even therapeutic. If you can't sleep at night because your brain keeps coming up with really creative stuff you have to write down, then my dear, I say we share the writer's sickness. Keep on rockin'!

[MorphineRose]

Writer's sickness indeed.

And I'm an insomniac because of it!

[sociopathicregret]

Ick. I have the opposite problem. I'm so fucking bored that I can't write.

Maybe someday I could post a bunch of videos with some of my novel I'm writing.

[sillyxsamsonn]

These are so inspiring. I'll admit I'm not that great of a poet, but I love to write, and the way you turned everything upside-down so that it made sense was impressive. (yeah, that may not have made much since). Good job. And contrary to other comments, I think you're gorgeous. You have your own style, which is what's going to show through most when the brand-names don't matter anymore. [:

[GetKrunkNgr]

LOL! I wish I was as Emo as you dude...

[trilingual]

rich, colourful and potent . . . well done!

[YourRippinMyDickOff]

hahahahha, get some sun, wear some color loser

[MorphineRose]

I should start deleting comments that hold so little validation in their persecutions. They breed hatred.

[SewellCarly]

i love the poems

[bananajackflapper]

awesome, I like your poems

[ClubAw3s0m3]

you should make the last one a song

[tomboy242424]

wow i want pizza

[ShadowVendeta14]

Beautiful-simply Beautiful.

[YaoiFanGirlForever]

i like the first one!!! its really good ^^ actually it reminds me of me...........almost perfictly actually..........keep up the good work!

[jailbaitinfishnets]

From one poet to another, your poetry is really amazing. I like the dark edge to it and you have the perfect voice for reading it.

[Down10]

Need more rhyming. And possibly a violin. and maybe a little dancing. And some dark curtains. A spotlight. And a smoke machine.

[ClaygroundBully]

Courageous. Thank  you for sharing.

[DavidRandallCurtis]

I think the last poem was the best and worst. Actually, it's a good poem right now. If you did some hardcore editing and cut the length down - you'd have a great poem.

[CyberneticOrganism]

Where are your cuts !

[plumbsndrums]

God i love freaks with poems,Hott ones at that

FREAKS WITH POEMS ROCK

[welittlemanboobs]

OMG! its a freak!

[dnemain]

cool what mad u want to write all that??

[dnemain]

kool i love it

[nordicsky]

Great another u tube poet. I think all poets should read their work to an audience and you were really good. The best thing about your poetry is that it is edgy and slightly dark. I would like my poetry to be more that way. I will send you one and let you judge it.

I hope you keep writing and post some more.

[Saturninefilms]

simply beautiful, and the poetry was wonderful!!!!

[kalindoscopy]

pretty poems, nicely done. 'A bad case of lead poisoning' that got me haha

[demonchild9066860]

Im sorry, I forgot to mention,you are a very good writer.

[demonchild9066860]

Im not emo or goth, or whatever label you claim, honestly i hate useing those words just because their stereotypes, but to those of you judging for the way she dresses, have strongly clouded minds. I mean im as normal as normal can get, but I atl east have half the mind to respect others, regardless of how they dress.

[graknosh]

LOL and i was serching for a movie trailer and find this **** JESUS! oh ups XD guess u dont like him...

[Saturninefilms]

These poems are gorgeous, every single one of them.

Sorry it took me so long to get to responding.

[MorphineRose]

That's alright. I know how it is.

Maybe one day we should get around to do a collaboration of something.

[applecado]

oh wow hunny never have children..

[MorphineRose]

Isn't it funny how one line of words says so much about some one?

Perhaps its obvious which of us may be the better parent.

My children will be raised with a lot more open mindedness and a lot less judgment.

[Haysie2007]

deep meaningfull yet beautifull - the poems were awesome Aswell that i do know

the words you say speak for many people

But trying to express is like pushing the mind up a big steep hill

you get to the top see the beauty all around you

hear her words people she speaks like angels would so listen you might learn something new.

sending my prayers to keep you safe X

[chemicals3107]

oh, and i forgot to mention that i love your clothes. =] didnt really seem to fit in my last comment.

[chemicals3107]

wow, that was beautiful. i can't decide which was my favorite, they were all so pretty. i just wish i could write like that...

[Disturbedelv121]

Ok ( Kissing Bullets ) was a very well done poem.. BTW i love ur evil grin it adds Charector and u have a nice voice for this.

[panagiotisssssss]

So much for first impressions...could've sworn, based on the video, that you were as healthy as healthy gets. But even so, you are right.I jumped to conclusions and they turned out 1000% wrong.

Anyway...for what it's worth, i do apologise.

[oktoberK]

Vary beautiful Rose. I miss seeing you move and talk. I miss you so much.

[panagiotisssssss]

You have to admite, he does have a point.We all go through a state of depression at some point,finding some 'problem' and expanding it out of proportion.But in the end we, the 'fortunate', dont know, and never will, what real depression and pain is.Feeling this way, when you got your health, enough money to own a computer and enough spare time to write poems, you are just being selfish.

I may sound harsh but, in my opinion, thats how it is

[MorphineRose]

Just as a heads up there'll probably be a video response to this as well, because I have something I want to show you.

All of you.

[MorphineRose]

The camera I used wasn't even mine because I can't afford to buy one.

The reason I got my first computer was because I cut a deal with my mother.

We couldn't afford the testing I needed because our HMO wouldn't cover it.

So if I would wait for our insurance to switch over, she'd buy me a computer.

Because it would be cheaper that way.

There was a lot of physical pain and depression during that time.

Which is something naturally expected if you're that sick.

[MorphineRose]

I went through all of that because that's how dedicated to my art I am,

Because I knew that I'd need one for my writing and film.

Yes, I had the time in between doctor's appointments and teaching myself high school.

And when I didn't have the time, I made it.

Half of my stuff wound up on random pieces of paper.

[MorphineRose]

You want to call me selfish?

That's fine. If I had to guess, you're selfish in some way.

-Aren't we all? - And please, feel free to point out where I'm selfish.-

You're obviously wanting to jump to the conclusion that I hate my life just from the way I dress.

You've never been so horribly wrong.

[MorphineRose]

I never walk all over someone just because of how they look.

I'm a rather compassionate and caring person.

If anyone asked anything from me, I would put them before myself.

You don't know half of my story.

This is just a fracture of it.

I'm still hesitant to judge you because I don't know your story.

But you show a lot when you come here and say unjustifiable things.

[kalindoscopy]

where is it?

[MorphineRose]

The cemetery?

[capra09]

nice poems ... are those pages from the comic book crow

[MorphineRose]

Uhm.. Nope. It's all mine.

James O'Barr is a major influence for me though.

Thanks though. That means a lot to me.

All of your comments do.

Except Lolly. I'll get around to him when I feel like I've the time.

But thanks.

[slitechguy]

Bravo! Your a natural with words, your a natural on film... I enjoyed it. Thanks

slitechguy, a.k.a. Keenan

Keen Machine PCs

myspace/keenmachinepcs

[EndlessXLove666]

I enjoyed very much

I could stop watching

you have a way with words

[VladBrian]

Hey i love your poems,they rock,i would luv if you would send me the whole poem to my email,id luv to post it on my mayspace as a blog!

kk,thanx,by the way i luv your outfit! X)

[classicwreck]

What a bitch.

Something she doesn't know about, you little cunt, you have no idea how close to being dead she really was. She was as sick as she can fucking get and you think you have any right to talk to her, why don't you shove your christian bullshit down your throat.

[Lolly456]

Im not a dickhead, im not a stereotype but please stop pretending to be something your not, everyone like you is trying to be someone there not. I dont know why you type of people do this, this is why people hate you and look down on you. Why dont you write happy, cheerful poetry instead of death and things you dont know about, your blinded by your own self pity and you get that self pity from writing these sorts of things, and you wonder why somtimes why your life sucks(when it doesnt).

[MorphineRose]

Let's go over a few things.

Shall we?

I am no one but myself.

Take the time to get to know me and you'd understand that.

My friends look to me because I have that unfaltering strength.

It takes a lot to be the person you want to be,

To hold your ground as a minority against a majority isn't always easy.

[MorphineRose]

And if you'd watch my videos you'd see how happy my life really is. Do you see those friends? Do you see the man I love? They're my world. I've never been happier. I've everything I could ever ask for. A job caring for people which makes me happy. A chance for a college education. A life of my own. Unfaltering friends. A family. And the endless love of an amazing man. I fought hard to get here.

[MorphineRose]

Just because I don't dress to meet your standards,

Just because I'm walking the thin line of stereotypes precariously,

Doesn't mean that I'm miserable.

I don't have to satisfy you.

Only myself, and my friends.

Next time take your think before you jump blindly into a conclusion.

[MorphineRose]

And as for Death?

I've had more than my fair share of close calls.

Don't tell me I don't know what death is.

I spent four years in a pediatrics cancer ward.

I watched children die.

I had six major surgeries in the past five years.

I'd have to believe that I probably would know a bit better than you.

[MorphineRose]

When I dressed and looked the way you want me to,

That's when I wanted to die.

And I'm not going to even go into those reasons, but they weren't over exaggerated.

I've an unending passion for life.

There's not a moment that I take for granted.

I'm adamant that everyone see the point.

I stress the cliché to never take life for granted to a sickening point.

I've become that cliché.

[MorphineRose]

The funny thing is that I never mention anything about depression.

I think that's what burns me the most about this.

You see the word Death and you only think one thing.

What a wonderful one track mind you have.

Because these poems aren't about death.

It's about Irony. Respect for the dead. And a relationship.

[MorphineRose]

However in dying, I've leaned some things about Death:

Never assume. Never judge.

You assume you become a liar.

You judge and your prejudice is unjustified.

Death personified does none of these things.

And self pity puts a bitter taste in my mouth.

I may state the facts, but I don't complain.

Nowhere in those poems mentions anything about self pity or any abhorration for life.

[MorphineRose]

I'd asked you to put down a more valued and educated opinion on what you think of the poetry.

You've missed the point entirely.

I do lean towards the darker things.

But I'm certainly not what you think of me.

Maybe I am a stereotype,

But something tells me you're as much as a cliché as I am.