This was impressive, it really does suck when you lose someone you know.... good job with the story plot & description while expressing true art and poetry well done... sad story... hope you get thru it, move on and get better hope you the best man take it easy
Randomly found this, and enjoyed it. Got a old school, real hip hop feel to it. The message was touching. Let God be the head of your life and everything will be alright. Be blessed.
Randomly found this, but enjoyed it. God a old school real hip hop feel, and the message was deep. Continue to let God lead u, and everything will be alright. Be blessed
;0( Aww Im so sorry that is such a sad sad situation Im sorry you lost your friend poor Lena, I was filed with the reality of your pain and I wish you strength to help you get through this. for every day that you live your life remember always shes is free and able to watch over her child from a better place , take care ok xxx
Stand up bruh. Hebrews 12:11, God' promise about pain is this. Pain isn't enjoyable at the time, but later will bear fruits of peace and righteousness. I'll keep you in my prayers. Just be strong man, thats a deep story.
I dont agree with your response but its just a song for people to inspire those who think they are going through the same... In a way I respect your reply
that was one of the strongest messages i ever heard. you have a big heart to show that kind of dedication towards your friend. it reminds me that there are people in my life that deserve the same for all they have givin to me. stay up friend, and stay safe
Man that song was so strong. It just gives me memories that I been surprising for a while. Though I'm not emotional about it I feel you 100%. I hope you never change when you make it big like many others though.
shit, man... i was attempting to write lyrics for this song, but you killed it. Now whenever I hear this beat I'm going to think of your lines. This is amazing...
man i felt a tear drop my girl is goin thru a hard time like this it might not sound tru but it is some dude took her and beat da crap out of her her cousin came shot da dude and she went 2 jail and might face life i think but my girl has got 2 take care of her 6 year old daughter....she dnt kno wat 2 do but dis was real sad man i cant believed that happened 2 her keep your head up pimpin look at it at a positive perspective God called her home so she wouldnt suffer nomore
Life is a lesson and sometimes the lessons we learn and go through can be sometimes difficult and heartbreaking but we have to keep our head up and much respect to you and tell her I feel for her... Thank you
Whaaa. I'm totally, well...I can't find words? I was almost about to cry untill, you came to those voice messages and I was sitting here in my own tears...This was soo...Well...Oh god I seriously can't find words for it. And to actually record the song and upload it here on youtube is like the strongest thing you could ever do. This was amazing...
This comment you sent me really touch me to know that my feelings are shared and actually can make people think about their own way of life and how people should enjoy their moments on earth... I thank you
You are so talented man...excellent diction and lyrical content...but the 'best' part...i say best guardedly cuz i dont wanna be coming from the wrong angle..is your emotion. No one in their right minds could watch this and not be touched. I really would pay money for theis track. Real talk, and sorry for your loss man. Hope God makes you strong.
Thank you for complimenting my skills as a lyricist and hopefully I will be able to get it professionally mixed and recorded unlike the tracks already on my account
wow man. Just wow. I seriously wanted to cry bro. This is probably one of the saddest stories if not the saddest that i've ever heard. I'm very sorry for your loss. But man, this was something that really hits hard. This was more than music and more than lyrics. Props brother.
I sometimes feel like music has lost its true purpose, beauty, and emotion. Your lyrics are truly inspirational and need to be heard, so please try everything that you can to get that wisdom out there where everyone can hear it. This really brings a lot of things into perspective for me, being at college and all, I hope I am learning the right stuff, you know? Life isn't about the money or the cars, it's about the people and the journey. Keep teaching that, not enough people know it.
Oh don't worry I am recording new and true lyrics that will touch the heart of all who will hear my next track called "3-Day Connection" so please support me and thank you for telling me how life should be seen.
like nas' "dance"...emotions in a song is what makes it sincere and meaningful. youre a great story teller and lyricist so keep doing what you do best man...bless.
my man...excellent work. story sounds like a good reason to just give up. To your friend, thank you for holding on as long as you did, dealing with the bullshit from others and not given a chance by no body. Thank you for holding on for so long. Dude, to you. i get to help people out everyday just by being there, but sometimes that aint enough. and that really fuckin' hurts. i feel you. Bless you and her. dont stop doing what u do best.
In life, we only live once... when I leave, I'm going to make sure I leave with no regrets... Thank you for the extra motivation to be a better lyricist and a better person.
deep! very nice. i couldn't help but think of immortal technique's song: "you never know". especially... when you say "By the time you get this message, I'll be dead..."
Respect for these lyrics. I was going to write something for this instrumental myself. After watching this though, I don't feel I have the write. This beat belongs to you.
hey ray, this a beautifully written song. with all the emotion u put through ur lyrics itll be felt by her where she is now, rest in peace, and by the viewers of the vid all over the world. thanx to u im inspirired to write again. please keep prodoucing lyrical pieces of art. much love and respect..
I'm just so happy to touch the people who want to take the time to listen to my past and I happy to actually inspire someone that makes me feel the need to continue to express my life... Thank you
if only these were the exact lyrics to original nujabes track... emotional, sorrowful, and beautiful are what made me think of when i heard your lyrics. stay up and keep doing what you love most. god bless..
man..terrible..i hope she rests in peace and her son does well..that was a beautiful song..and real emotion..i wish you luck with recording it because i did a song on the first reflection eternal about my ex and some stuff i dont even like talken about and i barely did the first verse..and it hurts to record even write further so i aint done it..but for the mere beauty of the art and expressing myself i will and im sure you will to..i aint ever met you homie,but much love and respect
Sometimes emotions are the only way to express how you really feel about something that changes your perspective on life itself. Thank you for the love and respect
Wow, that was beautiful, and it really broke my heart... The Nujabes track is indeed a great plus. Great flow/poetry, and may your friend rest in the peace she deserves.
What an amazing but sad story. Well put together in words, may you find peace im sorry you lost a friend.
lolomica 7 months ago
no matter how many times I hear this song, I still cry like a little bitch.....
pong224 7 months ago
This was impressive, it really does suck when you lose someone you know.... good job with the story plot & description while expressing true art and poetry well done... sad story... hope you get thru it, move on and get better hope you the best man take it easy
MrJdarabi7 11 months ago
really wish there was a better quality version...
kmeistro900 1 year ago
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Randomly found this, and enjoyed it. Got a old school, real hip hop feel to it. The message was touching. Let God be the head of your life and everything will be alright. Be blessed.
Shegotgame32 1 year ago
Randomly found this, but enjoyed it. God a old school real hip hop feel, and the message was deep. Continue to let God lead u, and everything will be alright. Be blessed
Shegotgame32 1 year ago
that's deep.
Bobbinskii 1 year ago
wheres the mp3 version. this shit is straight from the heart man...
MegaMoFUnk 1 year ago
damn good story you murdered this.
chozen1RI 1 year ago
RIP Nujabes
pong224 1 year ago
with all the photos stuck up on the wall you look like some sort of serial killer
EvilWarlock666 1 year ago
man this is really deep...
this is really touching as well homie..
keep your head up high man
andrewhahahaha 2 years ago
;0( Aww Im so sorry that is such a sad sad situation Im sorry you lost your friend poor Lena, I was filed with the reality of your pain and I wish you strength to help you get through this. for every day that you live your life remember always shes is free and able to watch over her child from a better place , take care ok xxx
blustylz008 2 years ago
Stand up bruh. Hebrews 12:11, God' promise about pain is this. Pain isn't enjoyable at the time, but later will bear fruits of peace and righteousness. I'll keep you in my prayers. Just be strong man, thats a deep story.
Hiphophead1904 2 years ago
Oh my gosh,
those lyrics are deeep. they really touched me
infact i cried, youre an inspiration
R.i.p your dear friend xx
KayeTayeBabesz 2 years ago
Damn deep story yo! You are dope and this is what hip hop needs not this commercialized thug shit on the radio 24/7! Check me out bro peace!
Metamophisis 2 years ago
thats crazy
good job man
umaapow 2 years ago
DAMN....
pong224 2 years ago
i give enough respect to ray02222
two things real hip hop should have
1.Truth
2. Emotion
Ghecco09 2 years ago
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what a loser
girlsarefuntohit 2 years ago
I dont agree with your response but its just a song for people to inspire those who think they are going through the same... In a way I respect your reply
ray02222 2 years ago
big ups to u brotha..just keep living on for her man cuz her memory lives thru u
FLyrics 2 years ago
Holy Shit I almost cried man and I've never cried over a song before I... wow..just speechless.
coc0be4n77 2 years ago
DEEP DEEP lyrics man deep bro
props to u man and i'm srry for wat has happen to u man
Huaiwen 2 years ago
Damn that's deep. A lot better than the mainstream shit you hear on the radio everyday that usually turns me away from rap.
Very strong ending too.
DeepfriedStix 2 years ago 4
that was one of the strongest messages i ever heard. you have a big heart to show that kind of dedication towards your friend. it reminds me that there are people in my life that deserve the same for all they have givin to me. stay up friend, and stay safe
ShinobiKunai 2 years ago
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HOLY SHIT THAT MONKEY CAN TALK
girlsarefuntohit 2 years ago
Man that song was so strong. It just gives me memories that I been surprising for a while. Though I'm not emotional about it I feel you 100%. I hope you never change when you make it big like many others though.
whatdoyouwantandwhy 2 years ago
damn this is so dope and deep
im not even gonna lie, i started to cry at the end
iTzDisZ 2 years ago
R.I.P. Lena
CamboStyleZ 2 years ago 2
thats really good! cant you put out another one with better sound ?:)
jjjuuliaa 2 years ago
Wow. That's all I can say. I didn't know the lyrics would be so good and the way you told them.
HELLAcheezin 2 years ago
wow this is the realest stuff i have ever heard respect homie, one love.
NombaWon 2 years ago
very deep man
skatinazn29 2 years ago
Im glad to help you get through the day
ray02222 2 years ago
@ray02222 This is truly sad man I'm sorry to hear about your friend Lena. Please nobody post any stupid comments. Respect this video.
phonsie12 1 year ago
a thats deep n
thats out cold
1gaystud 2 years ago
damn you should record this in high quality
dddoughboyyy 2 years ago
Me and my 12 yr old daughter loved your song! You have a true talent keep on doing what you do, Hope hear your songs on the radio soon!! Piece out
crownizon 3 years ago 2
I am glad I can touch people hearts
ray02222 3 years ago
shit, man... i was attempting to write lyrics for this song, but you killed it. Now whenever I hear this beat I'm going to think of your lines. This is amazing...
paperpen0 3 years ago 3
That touched me I want to thank you
ray02222 3 years ago
This is Deep!...
go0d on you for keeping strong, i feel fo ya and keep up the songs!x. meaningful!
xxx
Tamonding 3 years ago
Got to man thank you
ray02222 3 years ago
hey man great job. storytelling was ill and great beat ;)
redja0 3 years ago
Thank you I tried my best
ray02222 3 years ago
(y)
brucebuey09 3 years ago
Why what?
ray02222 3 years ago
that was beautiful and soooo meaningful...
all shout outs from here to you brother...
take care and Jah Bless
nezianbaby15 3 years ago
Thank you for the shout out from over sea
ray02222 3 years ago
man, I loved this song! it made me cry. and I'm not a person who cries often
IB31P 3 years ago
Wow... sometimes people's emotions gets the bests of them
ray02222 3 years ago
That was deep dude......it made me cry
Keep ya head up
YungBenjamin 3 years ago 2
Thank you for the comment and sorry Im so late to reply
ray02222 3 years ago
oh my this song mad me cry
shonda741985 3 years ago 2
Its a heartbreaking song and real emotional too. Thank you for your comment
ray02222 3 years ago
nujabes should collaborate with you!. awesome job.
EnfantTerrible7 3 years ago
That comment touched me the most man thank you.
ray02222 3 years ago
man i felt a tear drop my girl is goin thru a hard time like this it might not sound tru but it is some dude took her and beat da crap out of her her cousin came shot da dude and she went 2 jail and might face life i think but my girl has got 2 take care of her 6 year old daughter....she dnt kno wat 2 do but dis was real sad man i cant believed that happened 2 her keep your head up pimpin look at it at a positive perspective God called her home so she wouldnt suffer nomore
aspenwil 3 years ago 2
Life is a lesson and sometimes the lessons we learn and go through can be sometimes difficult and heartbreaking but we have to keep our head up and much respect to you and tell her I feel for her... Thank you
ray02222 3 years ago
Whoa kid, I remember when you first started writing that.
It's definitely an experience to see that develop into such an emotional song. Keep doin your thing man!
ManifestMovement 3 years ago
Always man and thank you for you comment cause it really means alot from you for real
ray02222 3 years ago
mi pussy is dripping 8
Oulcean 3 years ago
Wow
ray02222 3 years ago
hey, loved the song, props to you
deathbeast18 3 years ago
Thank you for expressing your thoughts
ray02222 3 years ago
damn......speechless.... I cant say nothin but stay up n stay strong. God doesn't put us in anything we can't get out of
ConfusedTrap 3 years ago 2
That is true... Thank you
ray02222 3 years ago
That was touching, amazing, and it hard to believe that you are underrated man!
Tom3744 3 years ago 2
To me its just a way for me to have a start in music I love and thank you for real
ray02222 3 years ago
You're really good. touching lyrics , i really like this song. Good job dude 5/5.
latinsoldierb 3 years ago 2
Thank you for the comment on how you feel
ray02222 3 years ago
damn ray, that was some good stuff o.o. what a sad story ):
Shinobi027 3 years ago 3
It is but its the life we live that makes the story
ray02222 3 years ago
Whaaa. I'm totally, well...I can't find words? I was almost about to cry untill, you came to those voice messages and I was sitting here in my own tears...This was soo...Well...Oh god I seriously can't find words for it. And to actually record the song and upload it here on youtube is like the strongest thing you could ever do. This was amazing...
MannenMedSmak 3 years ago 4
This comment you sent me really touch me to know that my feelings are shared and actually can make people think about their own way of life and how people should enjoy their moments on earth... I thank you
ray02222 3 years ago
You are so talented man...excellent diction and lyrical content...but the 'best' part...i say best guardedly cuz i dont wanna be coming from the wrong angle..is your emotion. No one in their right minds could watch this and not be touched. I really would pay money for theis track. Real talk, and sorry for your loss man. Hope God makes you strong.
cloakk1988 3 years ago 7
Your comment touch me the most because you are right and God is always with me and I thank you
ray02222 3 years ago
my nigga prop killed it, T3!!!
330sniper 3 years ago 2
Out of all the people, 330sniper... I got the most respect for you for awlays listening to the songs on my account and having our back so thank you
ray02222 3 years ago
man thats some sad stuff and powerful story
sent chills up my spine and tears down my face
but on another note youve got skills man id love to hear this professionally mixed and recorded
faithskater72 3 years ago 2
Thank you for complimenting my skills as a lyricist and hopefully I will be able to get it professionally mixed and recorded unlike the tracks already on my account
ray02222 3 years ago
wow man. Just wow. I seriously wanted to cry bro. This is probably one of the saddest stories if not the saddest that i've ever heard. I'm very sorry for your loss. But man, this was something that really hits hard. This was more than music and more than lyrics. Props brother.
shazadster 3 years ago 2
Props to you too for actually taking the time to hear my thoughts of my past and then comment my song I thank you
ray02222 3 years ago
wow..real deep man, well spoken bro...rest in peace to your friend.
jblaze204 3 years ago 2
Thank you for your thoughts friend
ray02222 3 years ago
I sometimes feel like music has lost its true purpose, beauty, and emotion. Your lyrics are truly inspirational and need to be heard, so please try everything that you can to get that wisdom out there where everyone can hear it. This really brings a lot of things into perspective for me, being at college and all, I hope I am learning the right stuff, you know? Life isn't about the money or the cars, it's about the people and the journey. Keep teaching that, not enough people know it.
TheRealOneEye 3 years ago 2
Oh don't worry I am recording new and true lyrics that will touch the heart of all who will hear my next track called "3-Day Connection" so please support me and thank you for telling me how life should be seen.
ray02222 3 years ago
Sweet dude, I'll try to find your stuff. What you have here is incredible!
TheRealOneEye 3 years ago 2
Thank you and check me out real soon by subscribing to my account.
ray02222 3 years ago
like nas' "dance"...emotions in a song is what makes it sincere and meaningful. youre a great story teller and lyricist so keep doing what you do best man...bless.
mdynasty607 3 years ago 2
Thank ou for your blessing and I will stay a true lyricist...
ray02222 3 years ago
my man...excellent work. story sounds like a good reason to just give up. To your friend, thank you for holding on as long as you did, dealing with the bullshit from others and not given a chance by no body. Thank you for holding on for so long. Dude, to you. i get to help people out everyday just by being there, but sometimes that aint enough. and that really fuckin' hurts. i feel you. Bless you and her. dont stop doing what u do best.
lonewinter12 3 years ago 2
I won't and thank you for your share of thought on the video
ray02222 3 years ago
Love this song! Keep it up!
blinkerbob 3 years ago 2
Thank you very much I will
ray02222 3 years ago
Real deep lyrics man, real fucked up shit, glad to see you were good to her. your a true saint man. may she rest in peace.
alexluis 3 years ago 2
In life, we only live once... when I leave, I'm going to make sure I leave with no regrets... Thank you for the extra motivation to be a better lyricist and a better person.
ray02222 3 years ago
deep! very nice. i couldn't help but think of immortal technique's song: "you never know". especially... when you say "By the time you get this message, I'll be dead..."
JorgeDuarte 3 years ago 2
It keeps you wondering I know
ray02222 3 years ago
Wow I've just actually heard it but wonder if it really happened to him...
ray02222 3 years ago
deep rhymes
sweettechnique 3 years ago 2
just deep thoughts of mine
ray02222 3 years ago
That was amazing and incredibly sad. i can't believe someone had to go through that....
I don't even have anything to say, that was just... wow.
This video needs to be on the front page.
Hellooli 3 years ago 3
Thank you so much... It's hard for anyone to go through that but at least she will be remembered of her struggle
ray02222 3 years ago
Respect for these lyrics. I was going to write something for this instrumental myself. After watching this though, I don't feel I have the write. This beat belongs to you.
RSR187 3 years ago 3
This beat is a way to express one's feeling through lyrics that is rare to do in today's society so don't let my story stop yours
ray02222 3 years ago
hey ray, this a beautifully written song. with all the emotion u put through ur lyrics itll be felt by her where she is now, rest in peace, and by the viewers of the vid all over the world. thanx to u im inspirired to write again. please keep prodoucing lyrical pieces of art. much love and respect..
l0ckd0wnm3mb3r 3 years ago 2
I'm just so happy to touch the people who want to take the time to listen to my past and I happy to actually inspire someone that makes me feel the need to continue to express my life... Thank you
ray02222 3 years ago
Your story touched me man. and you did nujabes justice lyrically. got love for you man. hip hop isnt dead
allahdeja1 3 years ago 3
Thanks for the love for real and Hip-Hop is just hibernating ha ha
ray02222 3 years ago
if only these were the exact lyrics to original nujabes track... emotional, sorrowful, and beautiful are what made me think of when i heard your lyrics. stay up and keep doing what you love most. god bless..
flipstile69 3 years ago 2
Thank you for your blessing and I will continue doing what I love most... Thank you again
ray02222 3 years ago
man..terrible..i hope she rests in peace and her son does well..that was a beautiful song..and real emotion..i wish you luck with recording it because i did a song on the first reflection eternal about my ex and some stuff i dont even like talken about and i barely did the first verse..and it hurts to record even write further so i aint done it..but for the mere beauty of the art and expressing myself i will and im sure you will to..i aint ever met you homie,but much love and respect
The1tactician 3 years ago 2
Sometimes emotions are the only way to express how you really feel about something that changes your perspective on life itself. Thank you for the love and respect
ray02222 3 years ago
How beautiful it is.. she must be smiling listening your song in heaven.
indigoflow67 3 years ago 2
I pray for that thank you
ray02222 3 years ago
gotta record this ray
mackb 3 years ago 2
Oh yes I'm actually putting it together for the public to put in their mp3, ipod, and memory... thank you
ray02222 3 years ago
Wow, that was beautiful, and it really broke my heart... The Nujabes track is indeed a great plus. Great flow/poetry, and may your friend rest in the peace she deserves.
antid3ity 3 years ago 2
Thank you very much for caring
ray02222 3 years ago
Thank you
ray02222 3 years ago
i could feel you through your words. sad song but nice flow, keep ya head up brah cuz we gotta roll on.
dooleee 3 years ago 2
Got to
ray02222 3 years ago
that was very sad. you have a nice flow and i gotta give you props for being a nujabes fan.
XxpspchottoshotxX 3 years ago 2
Yeah one of the best producers
ray02222 3 years ago
that was deep man
blinkerbob 3 years ago 2
I know but its good to express my feelings about the situation
ray02222 3 years ago
yeee I feel u man, keep it up
blinkerbob 3 years ago 2
If that is real then i am absolutely sorry to hear that, those words were beautiful but so sad, im sorry =[
redoctane1 3 years ago 2
Thank you very much
ray02222 3 years ago
Thats some heavy stuff man, great job on the song though.
crazysxymanbeast 3 years ago 2
Thank you
ray02222 3 years ago
Feelin' your flow.
funkmasteryellow 3 years ago 2
Thanks for the comment
ray02222 3 years ago
Sad to hear the story. But the song is nice.
newguy2299 3 years ago 2
Thank you but had to get my feelings out there
ray02222 3 years ago