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  • What an amazing but sad story. Well put together in words, may you find peace im sorry you lost a friend.

  • no matter how many times I hear this song, I still cry like a little bitch.....

  • This was impressive, it really does suck when you lose someone you know.... good job with the story plot & description while expressing true art and poetry well done... sad story... hope you get thru it, move on and get better hope you the best man take it easy

  • really wish there was a better quality version...

  • Randomly found this, but enjoyed it. God a old school real hip hop feel, and the message was deep. Continue to let God lead u, and everything will be alright. Be blessed

  • that's deep. 

  • wheres the mp3 version. this shit is straight from the heart man...

  • damn good story you murdered this.

  • RIP Nujabes

  • with all the photos stuck up on the wall you look like some sort of serial killer

  • man this is really deep...

    this is really touching as well homie..

    keep your head up high man

  • ;0( Aww Im so sorry that is such a sad sad situation Im sorry you lost your friend poor Lena, I was filed with the reality of your pain and I wish you strength to help you get through this. for every day that you live your life remember always shes is free and able to watch over her child from a better place , take care ok xxx

  • Stand up bruh. Hebrews 12:11, God' promise about pain is this. Pain isn't enjoyable at the time, but later will bear fruits of peace and righteousness. I'll keep you in my prayers. Just be strong man, thats a deep story.

  • Oh my gosh,

    those lyrics are deeep. they really touched me

    infact i cried, youre an inspiration

    R.i.p your dear friend xx

  • Damn deep story yo! You are dope and this is what hip hop needs not this commercialized thug shit on the radio 24/7! Check me out bro peace!

  • thats crazy

    good job man

  • DAMN....

  • i give enough respect to ray02222

    two things real hip hop should have

    1.Truth

    2. Emotion

  • I dont agree with your response but its just a song for people to inspire those who think they are going through the same... In a way I respect your reply

  • big ups to u brotha..just keep living on for her man cuz her memory lives thru u

  • Holy Shit I almost cried man and I've never cried over a song before I... wow..just speechless.

  • DEEP DEEP lyrics man deep bro

    props to u man and i'm srry for wat has happen to u man

  • Damn that's deep. A lot better than the mainstream shit you hear on the radio everyday that usually turns me away from rap.

    Very strong ending too.

  • that was one of the strongest messages i ever heard. you have a big heart to show that kind of dedication towards your friend.  it reminds me that there are people in my life that deserve the same for all they have givin to me. stay up friend, and stay safe

  • Man that song was so strong. It just gives me memories that I been surprising for a while. Though I'm not emotional about it I feel you 100%. I hope you never change when you make it big like many others though.

  • damn this is so dope and deep

    im not even gonna lie, i started to cry at the end

  • R.I.P. Lena

  • thats really good! cant you put out another one with better sound ?:)

  • Wow. That's all I can say. I didn't know the lyrics would be so good and the way you told them.

  • wow this is the realest stuff i have ever heard respect homie, one love.

  • very deep man

  • Im glad to help you get through the day

  • @ray02222 This is truly sad man I'm sorry to hear about your friend Lena. Please nobody post any stupid comments. Respect this video.

  • a thats deep n

    thats out cold

  • damn you should record this in high quality

  • Me and my 12 yr old daughter loved your song! You have a true talent keep on doing what you do, Hope hear your songs on the radio soon!! Piece out

  • I am glad I can touch people hearts

  • shit, man... i was attempting to write lyrics for this song, but you killed it. Now whenever I hear this beat I'm going to think of your lines. This is amazing...

  • That touched me I want to thank you

  • This is Deep!...

    go0d on you for keeping strong, i feel fo ya and keep up the songs!x. meaningful!

    xxx

  • Got to man thank you

  • hey man great job. storytelling was ill and great beat ;)

  • Thank you I tried my best

  • (y)

  • Why what?

  • that was beautiful and soooo meaningful...

    all shout outs from here to you brother...

    take care and Jah Bless

  • Thank you for the shout out from over sea

  • man, I loved this song! it made me cry. and I'm not a person who cries often

  • Wow... sometimes people's emotions gets the bests of them

  • That was deep dude......it made me cry

    Keep ya head up

  • Thank you for the comment and sorry Im so late to reply

  • oh my this song mad me cry

  • Its a heartbreaking song and real emotional too. Thank you for your comment

  • nujabes should collaborate with you!. awesome job.

  • That comment touched me the most man thank you.

  • man i felt a tear drop my girl is goin thru a hard time like this it might not sound tru but it is some dude took her and beat da crap out of her her cousin came shot da dude and she went 2 jail and might face life i think but my girl has got 2 take care of her 6 year old daughter....she dnt kno wat 2 do but dis was real sad man i cant believed that happened 2 her keep your head up pimpin look at it at a positive perspective God called her home so she wouldnt suffer nomore

  • Life is a lesson and sometimes the lessons we learn and go through can be sometimes difficult and heartbreaking but we have to keep our head up and much respect to you and tell her I feel for her... Thank you

  • Whoa kid, I remember when you first started writing that.

    It's definitely an experience to see that develop into such an emotional song. Keep doin your thing man!

  • Always man and thank you for you comment cause it really means alot from you for real

  • mi pussy is dripping 8

  • Wow

  • hey, loved the song, props to you

  • Thank you for expressing your thoughts

  • damn......speechless.... I cant say nothin but stay up n stay strong. God doesn't put us in anything we can't get out of

  • That is true... Thank you

  • That was touching, amazing, and it hard to believe that you are underrated man!

  • To me its just a way for me to have a start in music I love and thank you for real

  • You're really good. touching lyrics , i really like this song. Good job dude 5/5.

  • Thank you for the comment on how you feel

  • damn ray, that was some good stuff o.o.  what a sad story ):

  • It is but its the life we live that makes the story

  • Whaaa. I'm totally, well...I can't find words? I was almost about to cry untill, you came to those voice messages and I was sitting here in my own tears...This was soo...Well...Oh god I seriously can't find words for it. And to actually record the song and upload it here on youtube is like the strongest thing you could ever do. This was amazing...

  • This comment you sent me really touch me to know that my feelings are shared and actually can make people think about their own way of life and how people should enjoy their moments on earth... I thank you

  • You are so talented man...excellent diction and lyrical content...but the 'best' part...i say best guardedly cuz i dont wanna be coming from the wrong angle..is your emotion. No one in their right minds could watch this and not be touched. I really would pay money for theis track. Real talk, and sorry for your loss man. Hope God makes you strong.

  • Your comment touch me the most because you are right and God is always with me and I thank you

  • my nigga prop killed it, T3!!!

  • Out of all the people, 330sniper... I got the most respect for you for awlays listening to the songs on my account and having our back so thank you

  • man thats some sad stuff and powerful story

    sent chills up my spine and tears down my face

    but on another note youve got skills man id love to hear this professionally mixed and recorded

  • Thank you for complimenting my skills as a lyricist and hopefully I will be able to get it professionally mixed and recorded unlike the tracks already on my account

  • wow man. Just wow. I seriously wanted to cry bro. This is probably one of the saddest stories if not the saddest that i've ever heard. I'm very sorry for your loss. But man, this was something that really hits hard. This was more than music and more than lyrics. Props brother.

  • Props to you too for actually taking the time to hear my thoughts of my past and then comment my song I thank you

  • wow..real deep man, well spoken bro...rest in peace to your friend.

  • Thank you for your thoughts friend

  • I sometimes feel like music has lost its true purpose, beauty, and emotion. Your lyrics are truly inspirational and need to be heard, so please try everything that you can to get that wisdom out there where everyone can hear it. This really brings a lot of things into perspective for me, being at college and all, I hope I am learning the right stuff, you know? Life isn't about the money or the cars, it's about the people and the journey. Keep teaching that, not enough people know it.

  • Oh don't worry I am recording new and true lyrics that will touch the heart of all who will hear my next track called "3-Day Connection" so please support me and thank you for telling me how life should be seen.

  • Sweet dude, I'll try to find your stuff. What you have here is incredible!

  • Thank you and check me out real soon by subscribing to my account.

  • like nas' "dance"...emotions in a song is what makes it sincere and meaningful. youre a great story teller and lyricist so keep doing what you do best man...bless.

  • Thank ou for your blessing and I will stay a true lyricist...

  • my man...excellent work. story sounds like a good reason to just give up. To your friend, thank you for holding on as long as you did, dealing with the bullshit from others and not given a chance by no body. Thank you for holding on for so long. Dude, to you. i get to help people out everyday just by being there, but sometimes that aint enough. and that really fuckin' hurts. i feel you. Bless you and her. dont stop doing what u do best.

  • I won't and thank you for your share of thought on the video

  • Love this song! Keep it up!

  • Thank you very much I will

  • Real deep lyrics man, real fucked up shit, glad to see you were good to her. your a true saint man. may she rest in peace.

  • In life, we only live once... when I leave, I'm going to make sure I leave with no regrets... Thank you for the extra motivation to be a better lyricist and a better person.

  • deep! very nice. i couldn't help but think of immortal technique's song: "you never know". especially... when you say "By the time you get this message, I'll be dead..."

  • It keeps you wondering I know

  • Wow I've just actually heard it but wonder if it really happened to him...

  • deep rhymes

  • just deep thoughts of mine

  • That was amazing and incredibly sad.  i can't believe someone had to go through that....

    I don't even have anything to say, that was just... wow.

    This video needs to be on the front page.

  • Thank you so much... It's hard for anyone to go through that but at least she will be remembered of her struggle

  • Respect for these lyrics. I was going to write something for this instrumental myself. After watching this though, I don't feel I have the write. This beat belongs to you.

  • This beat is a way to express one's feeling through lyrics that is rare to do in today's society so don't let my story stop yours

  • hey ray, this a beautifully written song. with all the emotion u put through ur lyrics itll be felt by her where she is now, rest in peace, and by the viewers of the vid all over the world. thanx to u im inspirired to write again. please keep prodoucing lyrical pieces of art. much love and respect..

  • I'm just so happy to touch the people who want to take the time to listen to my past and I happy to actually inspire someone that makes me feel the need to continue to express my life... Thank you

  • Your story touched me man. and you did nujabes justice lyrically. got love for you man. hip hop isnt dead

  • Thanks for the love for real and Hip-Hop is just hibernating ha ha

  • if only these were the exact lyrics to original nujabes track... emotional, sorrowful, and beautiful are what made me think of when i heard your lyrics. stay up and keep doing what you love most. god bless..

  • Thank you for your blessing and I will continue doing what I love most... Thank you again

  • man..terrible..i hope she rests in peace and her son does well..that was a beautiful song..and real emotion..i wish you luck with recording it because i did a song on the first reflection eternal about my ex and some stuff i dont even like talken about and i barely did the first verse..and it hurts to record even write further so i aint done it..but for the mere beauty of the art and expressing myself i will and im sure you will to..i aint ever met you homie,but much love and respect

  • Sometimes emotions are the only way to express how you really feel about something that changes your perspective on life itself. Thank you for the love and respect

  • How beautiful it is.. she must be smiling listening your song in heaven.

  • I pray for that thank you

  • gotta record this ray

  • Oh yes I'm actually putting it together for the public to put in their mp3, ipod, and memory... thank you

  • Wow, that was beautiful, and it really broke my heart... The Nujabes track is indeed a great plus. Great flow/poetry, and may your friend rest in the peace she deserves.

  • Thank you very much for caring

  • Thank you

  • i could feel you through your words. sad song but nice flow, keep ya head up brah cuz we gotta roll on.

  • Got to

  • that was very sad. you have a nice flow and i gotta give you props for being a nujabes fan.

  • Yeah one of the best producers

  • that was deep man

  • I know but its good to express my feelings about the situation

  • yeee I feel u man, keep it up

  • If that is real then i am absolutely sorry to hear that, those words were beautiful but so sad, im sorry =[

  • Thank you very much

  • Thats some heavy stuff man, great job on the song though.

  • Thank you

  • Feelin' your flow.

  • Thanks for the comment

  • Sad to hear the story. But the song is nice.

  • Thank you but had to get my feelings out there

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