I thought you did okay by making the vibe eerie. I think I know what the story is about but I think you could of explained a little more in the film to make audience understand.
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It had some moments but I found it boring 3 minutes into it. Techincally it's good with the visuals etc. but the frame flicker became a bit irritating after a while - think less is more sometimes. I felt the titles were too long too. Had good moments though so I'm not saying it was bad. Horror films are probably one of the hardest films to make I reckon.
Fantasic "flicker-light" style, non-hollywood feel and paranormal sequences. It was suspensefully gripping with a touch of emotion. Acting ability was appropriate. But building suspense through carefully pacing never paid off to a huge terrifying scare. The end was also decent at best. Ghosts trespassing people's bodies isn't exactly new. But 7/10 for this short film.
With a basic plot, the conclusion ceased to satify my needs though as was expecting maybe
its really good. i totally got the feel of what you were going for. trapped in his own mind of bad memories all alone in his house with nothing but those bad memories. i get it. i love it. thank you. ^.^
you should name your movie as the visitor not the visitng
kuruvi1231 1 year ago
I thought you did okay by making the vibe eerie. I think I know what the story is about but I think you could of explained a little more in the film to make audience understand.
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shadowmoonninja 1 year ago
story was okay, acting alright, atmosphere quite creepy but overall it was too flashy with all the twitchy and flickering effects and editing
drplbiftin 3 years ago
Great filming and lighting! A bit long, but brilliant!
MrNinjaMittens 3 years ago
ahahah dennis trilloXD
bhryian 3 years ago
It had some moments but I found it boring 3 minutes into it. Techincally it's good with the visuals etc. but the frame flicker became a bit irritating after a while - think less is more sometimes. I felt the titles were too long too. Had good moments though so I'm not saying it was bad. Horror films are probably one of the hardest films to make I reckon.
AnthonyJFrame 3 years ago
a better surprise ending.
TheBYWStation 3 years ago
Fantasic "flicker-light" style, non-hollywood feel and paranormal sequences. It was suspensefully gripping with a touch of emotion. Acting ability was appropriate. But building suspense through carefully pacing never paid off to a huge terrifying scare. The end was also decent at best. Ghosts trespassing people's bodies isn't exactly new. But 7/10 for this short film.
With a basic plot, the conclusion ceased to satify my needs though as was expecting maybe
TheBYWStation 3 years ago
Good job!
It was excellent. I didn't like the ending that much. But the final scene saved it all, for me.
Great atmosphere and SFX.
deathtouch1809 3 years ago
its really good. i totally got the feel of what you were going for. trapped in his own mind of bad memories all alone in his house with nothing but those bad memories. i get it. i love it. thank you. ^.^
Prettyvacant99 3 years ago
he looks like our local filipino actor named dennis trillo. dennis could have done a much better job, in my opinion. :)
gelaigurl 3 years ago