Ten seconds in I said out loud: "body under the swingset." The camera sticks on that patch of dirt like it's fucking Brad Pitt. And that's the most practical place to bury a body, right? The ending was in bad taste as well. I feel like an asshole saying it, but the writing on this show is just flaccid, which is a shame, because the child actor in this one is remarkably good, and the moody atmosphere in the first minute was very effective. There are really solid elements at work, just not enough.
This wasa little disappointing as it was predictable the dad was a creeper ......and THEN he gets no punishment. I find it upsetting to watch an innocent child amongst a scary adult.
this is my favourite one from scaredstifftv, it brings a lot of suspense. I thought he was going to kill the little girl, but then he just goes back to dig the body.
@twilightpeacegirl Thanks! I am glad that you liked it. As far as actors, sometimes I use friends or family, but most of the actors I have met through Craigslist.
ok well maybe iv seen too many horror movies but it was predictable and anticlimactic like he moves her body? thats it? no deaths no blood no arrests? nothing???? and was i the only one who thought the swing set sounds was loud and over exagerated? i wanted to punch the little girl cuz she was the one making the stupid noice >.<
@punished1134 It's funny you should ask. I am prepping a couple zombie episodes right now! Although the first of them will probably not be ready until September. I think you will like them though. Stay tuned!
I like it.....A beautiful family you have sir......by the way, you kind of remind me of Doug in "KIng of Queens"...nice work.....by the way, what cam do you use and editing software for this piece?....torchidman
A very good short film !!! An adequately paced, well-acted, and competently scripted psychological teaser/thriller with some nice theatrical / sound effects. Love the overall presentation, and the dramatic visual impact. Very well done and effective ! I am very impressed !!! :-)
@danielferreira666 Sorry. I don't know what is causing that. If you still haven't gotten it to play you can watch and download it for free on our website: scaredstiff(dot)tv
The girls mom buried underneath the swingset? LMAO. That is pretty irresistably funny. But anyway, the girl did her part fine and the dad was casted nice and ominously. Everything was given away though by the time she backed up into her dad at 2:50 in. Still, good short. Enjoyed!
Aww, I want more. Seriously your short stories are getting better each time. Five stars in the old scale. Wish I could do that with my short stories. Keep them coming
Very nicely put together, Shots were done very well, sound was great, and you had some very talented actors! I give this short film an A+ and 5 Stars. Can't wait to see some more stuff from Scared Stiff TV.
Well done. Though, some of the shots were boring. I wanted more movement. The swing was also incredibly annoying. The sound should have been more of a back round sound. The dialogue in the kitchen didn't really move the story until a few moments had past. I thought that could have been cut down as well.
But the story was good and the tension was nice. For a second I thought he was gonna kill the little girl which kept me antsy!
Once again a very good short film i look up to well done and i agree with doc studios should be knocking on your door, you bring fresh creepiness to the floor.
hey doug, i like the idea a lot and the way u turned it was scary and macabre. I think it is the darkest way of a human mind that u ever showed off. (No mutant, no vampire no insane clown...just DAD) Thats Stephen King like and i love it. Things i dont like are the annoying swingset sound...has to be less noisy or shorter. The fact that hes the dumbest killer (Wife in backyard, easy job for cops. ) is a whole n the plot but ok for the thrill. great acting, nice angles. Good job doug!
@Anavrin90s Thanks Anavrin, I always appreciate your feedback and analysis.
*Spoliers* I understand your point about the dad bring a dumb killer, but I had him bury her under there for two reasons. Functionally, the dad figured that no one would look under the swingset when looking for the wife's body. And the loose dirt the burial would cause could be explained by the constant use by the daughter.
@Anavrin90s Secondly, the swing set acts as the girl's happy place. It shows how twisted the dad is by him burying the girl's mother under her happy place.
@Anavrin90s The sound is a problem that I have had with doing the scores and sound FX on the show. Some people who watch the show have external speakers and some people listen to it through their built in computer speakers. I have to find a happy medium when designing the sound to optimize for both. For instance, I have scored entire pieces to find that they are too low pitched to even register on internal computer speakers, and had to redo the soundtrack.
@Anavrin90s As far as the sound on the swing set, apparently some people's speakers apparently are more sensitive to higher pitched frequencies, so the sound of the swing set is louder to some. Hopefully they didn't find it annoying and stop watching. Again thanks for your helpful comments! Much appreciated.
@DocLeggz Thanks Doc! I really appreciate the comment. Hopefully one day that will happen when we get some exposure. For now I am just enjoying the ride!
@NoDeity Sorry. I would tell you to just skip through the first few minutes, but you would miss a big part of the story. Oh well. Thanks for giving it a try though!
@Carebear1323 Well, we have a Zazzle store. You can go there if you go to ScaredStiff(dot)tv and click on the link on the home page. We have a few shirts and coffee mugs.
@ScaredStiffTV [shrug] You can't please everyone all the time, eh? I've enjoyed plenty of your work in the past and I'm sure I'll enjoy more of it in the future.
nice haha as always that swing sound was horrible :D would loved to have seen more of the mum haha :) good job keep it up still need that script all exams are finished now :D
Great acting, very chilling, but it leaves soo much open though and alot of it isn't explained- I mean, The story and plot looks like what the viewer thinks it is, but there are soo many alternatives and its not explained
Dad killed the girls mom, she was warning the girl of him. She tells her dad she heard "mommy" at the swing set where he buried her. At the end he goes to move the body
Goddammit, I swear I just heard my grandmother again.........
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Ten seconds in I said out loud: "body under the swingset." The camera sticks on that patch of dirt like it's fucking Brad Pitt. And that's the most practical place to bury a body, right? The ending was in bad taste as well. I feel like an asshole saying it, but the writing on this show is just flaccid, which is a shame, because the child actor in this one is remarkably good, and the moody atmosphere in the first minute was very effective. There are really solid elements at work, just not enough.
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This wasa little disappointing as it was predictable the dad was a creeper ......and THEN he gets no punishment. I find it upsetting to watch an innocent child amongst a scary adult.
tarasvoice 6 months ago
i love it the eery swingset sound and everything
HORRoRFrEak4EvEr1 7 months ago
great =)
oscar1987zp 7 months ago
Kinda reminds me of John Gacy
thisisparta23 9 months ago
@thisisparta23 i bet you got that from me, because i said that on another video that he looks like john wayne gacy
Gencturk92 9 months ago
That was really well put together! Loved it. Thanks for the support btw.
spillcom 9 months ago
I like this.
QueenAnime99 1 year ago
that swingset sound unfortuneatly drives me insane.
skate3745 1 year ago 9
@skate3745 I must agree, with all due respect that was a bit much.
tarasvoice 6 months ago
LOVED the creepy hand reveal!
hottentot 1 year ago
love the ending credits whenhe takes the wedding ring lol
maggot8000 1 year ago
@twilightpeacegirl thanks for the spoiler
maggot8000 1 year ago
Newer subscriber, but becoming a true fan.. If only this video played off of the suicide mote..lol great vid..
HamEntertainment 1 year ago
this is my favourite one from scaredstifftv, it brings a lot of suspense. I thought he was going to kill the little girl, but then he just goes back to dig the body.
badturkali 1 year ago
If a swing creaks that much... I don't think she should be swinging on it lol
oblivionfan345Tony 1 year ago
that little girl is stupid.... who keeps swinging after hearing that like three times
MultiMariah11 1 year ago
@MultiMariah11 How is she stupid? 99% of the time, when you hear weird whispery voices, they are in your head.
QueenAnime99 1 year ago
omfg that swing sound is SUPER annoying
mnmmc1 1 year ago
The man looks like 'John Wayne Gacy'
Gencturk92 1 year ago
Why would anyone, in a million years, ever bury a body under a swingset??? That's just nuts!!
bigworf 1 year ago
@bigworf Are you insulting my burial methods?
oblivionfan345Tony 1 year ago
that girls like mentally retarded
cjcbeme 1 year ago
This is great!
mpdub09 1 year ago
@twilightpeacegirl Thanks! I am glad that you liked it. As far as actors, sometimes I use friends or family, but most of the actors I have met through Craigslist.
ScaredStiffTV 1 year ago
@ScaredStiffTV Ha! Craigslist for the win!
maarakailet1 1 year ago
Choice!
patzilla2000 1 year ago
Thx for uploading =)
BlutgerichtinTexas 1 year ago
I'm not sure what's going to happen but please warn me if I'm going to have to change my pants or take a sedative....
AngelVomit26 1 year ago
great as usual but the swing nosie was annoying lol but i could still watch this awesome video i am also a fan of zombies
TheAwesomedude591 1 year ago
Creepy! Love it!
xjennajennax 1 year ago
Yikes! I could see where that lead up towards the end. And I can guess who's buried there as well. Good job as always guys at SS TV.
Dunes 1 year ago
ok well maybe iv seen too many horror movies but it was predictable and anticlimactic like he moves her body? thats it? no deaths no blood no arrests? nothing???? and was i the only one who thought the swing set sounds was loud and over exagerated? i wanted to punch the little girl cuz she was the one making the stupid noice >.<
ryanmm8 1 year ago
Wow, the sound effects & angles are so awesome. As always this was amazing, I love the storyline, the music & acting was on point. Great job.
MissZena 1 year ago
This was scary, I almost thought that the girl would be killed by her father! Good work!
EelizabethBathog 1 year ago
Another great one!
rockinbonesvideo 1 year ago
good job doug scariest one yet, keep up the good work!
under0e 1 year ago
ever since u guys added me iv been waitchin all theys and u sould really make a movie, u would make looooots (:
alow412 1 year ago
Awesome stuff!
trentsnpr 1 year ago
NICE Job! The swing squeaks and whispers overlays raised the hair on my neck! thumbs up ;)
WellHelloDali 1 year ago
This is my favourite so far
Gencturk92 1 year ago
Damn it I wanted to see him get sucked down into the grave by the Ghost
VampireLord66 1 year ago
Nice work doug. Are you a zombie fan? I'd love to see you do a zobie flavored short, something new and fresh. Have a good one
-J.H.
punished1134 1 year ago
@punished1134 I ment zombie not zobie.lol
punished1134 1 year ago
@punished1134 It's funny you should ask. I am prepping a couple zombie episodes right now! Although the first of them will probably not be ready until September. I think you will like them though. Stay tuned!
-Scared Stiff Doug
ScaredStiffTV 1 year ago
Omg, that is one rusty swing>.>
Haha...
Great Job though!!Keep up the great work=)
tinjoe1100 1 year ago
IM SO GLAD A NEW ONE IS OUT!
toomuchnatureforme 1 year ago
that was freaky... my new all time favorite!
toomuchnatureforme 1 year ago
fucking hell how rusty is that swing?!?!?!
need2learn2spkspan 1 year ago
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hmm. interesting.
twosaperfectnumber 1 year ago
Beautiful video, hope to see more.
Gencturk92 1 year ago
I like it.....A beautiful family you have sir......by the way, you kind of remind me of Doug in "KIng of Queens"...nice work.....by the way, what cam do you use and editing software for this piece?....torchidman
torchidman 1 year ago
A very good short film !!! An adequately paced, well-acted, and competently scripted psychological teaser/thriller with some nice theatrical / sound effects. Love the overall presentation, and the dramatic visual impact. Very well done and effective ! I am very impressed !!! :-)
UngodlyForces 1 year ago
nice job!
trelozombie 1 year ago
Nice flick man.
VanillaLightning30 1 year ago
kool
WwfHerosAndVillains 1 year ago
good vid dudes
thesweetestsherry 1 year ago
great work...
TheWolfman1979 1 year ago
I don't get it O_o
sorry i am slow.
MegMelodyz 1 year ago
Klasse mag ich
turborosch 1 year ago
good job
teachemariusz 1 year ago
Excellent and terrible video and nice effects !
Great job !
Tadek59 1 year ago
Really good vid..the characters were real spooky..the style was spooky..
Teyethegreat 1 year ago
ugh, seriusly, please dont u ever do a vid with a swing eva again!!! it was so annoying!
MissRockgirl13 1 year ago
good video both you guys are good actors
ParisHitlerHollywood 1 year ago
Interesting video.
FireStar32005 1 year ago
holy crap the swing set is annoyin me!lol
speakyourpeace09 1 year ago
this video doesnt work on my computer, it stops at 5 minutes :(
danielferreira666 1 year ago
@danielferreira666 Sorry. I don't know what is causing that. If you still haven't gotten it to play you can watch and download it for free on our website: scaredstiff(dot)tv
-Scared Stiff Doug
ScaredStiffTV 1 year ago
@danielferreira666, that happened to me aswell, it stopped twice. but if u just press forward or backwards, then the video should be fine.
Gencturk92 1 year ago
AHHH!THAT SWINGING SOUND IS SO ANNOYING!!!
skate3745 1 year ago
The girls mom buried underneath the swingset? LMAO. That is pretty irresistably funny. But anyway, the girl did her part fine and the dad was casted nice and ominously. Everything was given away though by the time she backed up into her dad at 2:50 in. Still, good short. Enjoyed!
DwayneMiller 1 year ago
Daddy's a dick lol
PoLaRIV 1 year ago
Excellent pacing, wonderful casting, and immensely captivating throughout.
SevenDeadlyCinema 1 year ago
What the hell? Why would he bury her under the swing set of all places? This whole video was too implausible for me.
Pseudonym10 1 year ago
That was great!!
RemoSC49 1 year ago
I liked the video thanks for posting.
Skylinerealities 1 year ago
awsome i love it
shimonthepro 1 year ago
Wow great really phsycological Stephen King like. Very good. And exciting :) Nice work ;)
sekan123 1 year ago
great vieo and acting. liked the music aswell, and the sound of the dingely, dangely thingy...the thing that people use to have hanging in the wind
hilde86m 1 year ago
This is a good video foreal.''Scared Stiff TV''.
Oriedo 1 year ago
cool! great job yall!
merishane 1 year ago
Good one! Personally, I've always found the creaking of swing sets to be exceptionally creepy. You got that sound just right.
pilatunes 1 year ago
Aww, I want more. Seriously your short stories are getting better each time. Five stars in the old scale. Wish I could do that with my short stories. Keep them coming
ocossa 1 year ago
annoying swing sound :P
PaulDavidT 1 year ago
great job i enjoyed that!
youraverageuser 1 year ago
awesome! peace2u! eric
no2hate 1 year ago
We liked the creepy dad! Reminds us of reading horror books. Thought it could have been a little longer, but overall, another great short.
GrimmReaperFilms 1 year ago
I liked this one! It was good, and didn't rely upon the 'screamer' thing.
Nicely shot also!
Scwirul 1 year ago
Your male lead really reminds me of Frank Zitto...
ayatollahy2j 1 year ago
Great film! Great acting!
MrBlomu 1 year ago
Wow great job man altho the sound of the swingset was a little to loud for my speakers but still a wonderful film none the less :)
NateDunningfilms 1 year ago
good job ;] ! i like it
keendraaa 1 year ago
Very nicely put together, Shots were done very well, sound was great, and you had some very talented actors! I give this short film an A+ and 5 Stars. Can't wait to see some more stuff from Scared Stiff TV.
mswhellfire 1 year ago
Wow, nice video! and quite a thrill too! lol
koreanman113 1 year ago
Wow, great acting, and I absolutely looove the filming and background sounds~ :D Kinda creepy for me to watch all alone :P
The swing's obnoxious noise kinda made me feel nostalgic; sounded just like my old swing from forever ago :c
ZeCoColie 1 year ago
Awesome Video, Pavel
Meternych 1 year ago
God damn that swings annoying. Cool video tho,
KillaNCDealer 1 year ago
wow this video was really creepy,loved it...
marixalilith 1 year ago
nice job on the video
louice 1 year ago
cool
brianobx 1 year ago
Great job with the video.. What camera do you guys use to shoot your movies with?
fourman04 1 year ago
@fourman04 Thanks! For the last several movies, we used the Panasonic AG-HMC40.
ScaredStiffTV 1 year ago
@ScaredStiffTV How much is that camera?
metallicanogo 1 year ago
this did get me looking behind me a few times
GOOD JOB
scared me good
ZXBrad 1 year ago
Very nice video! I like how the husband is her killer. :D
knightbmb 1 year ago
Oh, wow. Very VERY understated, yet quite terrifying. Great job!!!
CaptainBurbujas197 1 year ago
Awesome Video Good Work : )
kurtex777 1 year ago
I loved it. very Stephen King-ish. :) <3
iamalighthouse1 1 year ago
I was like OH! when the hand was in the floor! that was good :)
ZenaSapphire 1 year ago
Love your video!!
~ Melania
goddessmelania 1 year ago
Warning: don't watch if you were already feeling queasy. #LOL Oh great, my niece is just her age and has the same name..
Hey can I ask if you do, or plan on working with horror films?? Just curious..
FangnclawXD 1 year ago
Very fine, understated performances!
haggidubious 1 year ago
Just fantastic :>)
GContelli 1 year ago
I liked this. It really kept my attention. Good job.
dholt777 1 year ago
Great atmosphere , awesome video !
GCON3000 1 year ago
I loved this clip ! : )
Felicia794 1 year ago
I love the acting in this, it is so authentic!
ErichoTTA 1 year ago
Well done. Though, some of the shots were boring. I wanted more movement. The swing was also incredibly annoying. The sound should have been more of a back round sound. The dialogue in the kitchen didn't really move the story until a few moments had past. I thought that could have been cut down as well.
But the story was good and the tension was nice. For a second I thought he was gonna kill the little girl which kept me antsy!
HNN16 1 year ago
cool I peed my pants
fogfrogblog 1 year ago
very well made video, nice one!
hartage 1 year ago
Once again a very good short film i look up to well done and i agree with doc studios should be knocking on your door, you bring fresh creepiness to the floor.
gearsofshock 1 year ago
Creepy! Good use of sound effects - although that is one noisy swing!
dashpoet 1 year ago
another great production and again, so glad to be a part of this.
Peter.
PeterL524 1 year ago
@PeterL524 It's a Pleasure to have you on board!
ScaredStiffTV 1 year ago
You always deliver !!!
heatherRyan8 1 year ago
hey doug, i like the idea a lot and the way u turned it was scary and macabre. I think it is the darkest way of a human mind that u ever showed off. (No mutant, no vampire no insane clown...just DAD) Thats Stephen King like and i love it. Things i dont like are the annoying swingset sound...has to be less noisy or shorter. The fact that hes the dumbest killer (Wife in backyard, easy job for cops. ) is a whole n the plot but ok for the thrill. great acting, nice angles. Good job doug!
Anavrin90s 1 year ago
@Anavrin90s meant hole in the plot, not whole.
Anavrin90s 1 year ago
@Anavrin90s Thanks Anavrin, I always appreciate your feedback and analysis.
*Spoliers* I understand your point about the dad bring a dumb killer, but I had him bury her under there for two reasons. Functionally, the dad figured that no one would look under the swingset when looking for the wife's body. And the loose dirt the burial would cause could be explained by the constant use by the daughter.
ScaredStiffTV 1 year ago
@Anavrin90s Secondly, the swing set acts as the girl's happy place. It shows how twisted the dad is by him burying the girl's mother under her happy place.
ScaredStiffTV 1 year ago
@Anavrin90s The sound is a problem that I have had with doing the scores and sound FX on the show. Some people who watch the show have external speakers and some people listen to it through their built in computer speakers. I have to find a happy medium when designing the sound to optimize for both. For instance, I have scored entire pieces to find that they are too low pitched to even register on internal computer speakers, and had to redo the soundtrack.
ScaredStiffTV 1 year ago
@Anavrin90s As far as the sound on the swing set, apparently some people's speakers apparently are more sensitive to higher pitched frequencies, so the sound of the swing set is louder to some. Hopefully they didn't find it annoying and stop watching. Again thanks for your helpful comments! Much appreciated.
-Scared Stiff Doug
ScaredStiffTV 1 year ago
@ScaredStiffTV ya the only thing i didnt' like was the sound of the swingset and how long it went on,
other than that the Dad was a great actor and so was the little girl, and it was a good horror short :) keep up the good work.
roacherz 1 year ago
@ScaredStiffTV
i almost stoped watching cuz of the swing
MissRockgirl13 1 year ago
Very strange and frightening Story ! I like it ! And many thanks for sharing
allstuffchannel3160 1 year ago
cool!:)
DarkAngelGirl7 1 year ago
Dem Nemcheks is some fine actors. What can I say that hasn't been said below? Very nice camera work and editing. WOW
dkspookshow 1 year ago
Very good short. It's scary.
cineprom 1 year ago
really nice work
Ilove it ;)
dreamsrealised2 1 year ago
Hey my name's Hannah! Cool video!
tsukroffhan 1 year ago
Awesome video, scarey!
chocolateguy72476 1 year ago
thats one scary dad
candyshit101 1 year ago
Umm, cold chills?
Nice one, guys!
MZMStudios 1 year ago
great video
absule 1 year ago
Great stuff, like always, Doug. Seriously, why are studios not beating your damn door down?
DocLeggz 1 year ago
@DocLeggz They`re busy doing remakes!
jack2breeze 1 year ago
@DocLeggz Thanks Doc! I really appreciate the comment. Hopefully one day that will happen when we get some exposure. For now I am just enjoying the ride!
ScaredStiffTV 1 year ago
wow this was excellent :D as always
MyLifeToons 1 year ago
wow great
cisaraunome 1 year ago
u all make some amaazing vids!!! love it !! KEEP IT SIIICK!!!
ChangingPlanet1 1 year ago
dude, this is creepy!
personally, i think this is ur best vid
atomichead777 1 year ago
Nice film! :)
BigBerthaTractor 1 year ago
Great work! Thumbs up!
MrBlomu 1 year ago
o my god is good video thanks and greetings from mexico bye
10juancamaney 1 year ago
Pretty creepy!
CedarStreetFilms 1 year ago
my fav. vid of urs
great job!
loved it alot!!!!!
MovieMan4000 1 year ago
kool
WwfHerosAndVillains 1 year ago
Awesome vid, cool cam shots. : D
calvin1pn 1 year ago
now i get it at 2:09 you can see what probably is the mothers fingers so she was buraid under the swings and she hounts who ever goes on them
Brando216 1 year ago
Thanks for msg me w/ this video, i actually really enjoyed it, hope to see more in the future !
AiGproductions 1 year ago
Awesome!!!!! I was covering my eyes!!! So scary!!!!!
stregamantis 1 year ago
good video terrorific
10juancamaney 1 year ago
nice^^
Benjigsaw1934 1 year ago
Sorry, couldn't watch it. I find the swing noise intolerably grating.
NoDeity 1 year ago
@NoDeity The swing set gives it that mysterious/suspense feel.
Carebear1323 1 year ago
@Carebear1323 For me, it gives it that "AHHHH! TURN IT OFF!" feel. ;-)
NoDeity 1 year ago
@NoDeity Sorry. I would tell you to just skip through the first few minutes, but you would miss a big part of the story. Oh well. Thanks for giving it a try though!
ScaredStiffTV 1 year ago
@ScaredStiffTV
Is there any place i can buy merch?
Carebear1323 1 year ago
@Carebear1323 Well, we have a Zazzle store. You can go there if you go to ScaredStiff(dot)tv and click on the link on the home page. We have a few shirts and coffee mugs.
ScaredStiffTV 1 year ago
@ScaredStiffTV
Awesome! =D
Carebear1323 1 year ago
@ScaredStiffTV [shrug] You can't please everyone all the time, eh? I've enjoyed plenty of your work in the past and I'm sure I'll enjoy more of it in the future.
NoDeity 1 year ago
@NoDeity
*shrugs* To each their own. You missed a great show.
Carebear1323 1 year ago
nice haha as always that swing sound was horrible :D would loved to have seen more of the mum haha :) good job keep it up still need that script all exams are finished now :D
SFTV
superfreaktelevision 1 year ago
Great acting, very chilling, but it leaves soo much open though and alot of it isn't explained- I mean, The story and plot looks like what the viewer thinks it is, but there are soo many alternatives and its not explained
mgrchip 1 year ago
@mgrchip
WARNING SPOILERS:
Dad killed the girls mom, she was warning the girl of him. She tells her dad she heard "mommy" at the swing set where he buried her. At the end he goes to move the body
Carebear1323 1 year ago