This is gorgeous! The only thing that really bothered me was that a lot of the dancers were out of sync, but I know that's only because they haven't rehearsed enough. Perhaps with some of the twirls you could incorporate a ripple effect kind of thing? (I don't know what it's called :P )
This is great! Like some of the other comments, it does need some cleaning up, but there's a very solid foundation to this and you can take it pretty far! I love that somebody choreographed something to a song of Darren's, for some reason I hadn't thought of that. I wish my studio would do a song of his!
@jjeesssskkaahh505- I would have loved to have a male couple, or have some men- again, i was working with very limited resources. The fall show I am revamping it for will have auditions and I will hopefully have my pick of the crop, as it were. I'm toying with the costumes idea- I wanted to maintain individual characters, so I allowed the dancers to choose their own costumes. Perhaps more muted street clothing?
Thanks all for your comments! I really appreciate it!
Re: more practice- Unfortunately, this was a student-run show the weekend before finals, so we were not granted much rehearsal time. I will be revamping it in the fall with more rehearsal time.
AMAZING start! I think it's great so far. Def needs cleaning up and making moves more crisp and ect but seriously you have some great stuff in there! I can't wait to see more or this one once revamped! :D
It's definitely an excellent start. I loved the develope with all three girls at the back, but felt it could have been more controlled to fill more space and time, if that makes any sense.
I feel like there were some major empty spots that could have been filled with some smaller movement, possibly some different blocking.
I also felt like some of the girls could have projected more or danced more full out.
However- fantastic start, and I'd love to see this develop more!
I think it's a good start. It needs to be more in sync and perfected in that sense. But I think the overall idea is good and it could really go somewhere good with a little more practice. =)
Gorgeous!
kira902k 8 months ago
This is gorgeous! The only thing that really bothered me was that a lot of the dancers were out of sync, but I know that's only because they haven't rehearsed enough. Perhaps with some of the twirls you could incorporate a ripple effect kind of thing? (I don't know what it's called :P )
SnowGirl098 9 months ago
Awesome work! Using a Darren Criss song = win :)
RitaProductions94 9 months ago
This is beautiful! <3
crazycakey2 9 months ago
the choreography is absolutely beautiful :') I think some of it was a bit out of time but the movement was beautiful :')
joannadreamer 9 months ago
beautiful
GaSs34 9 months ago
This is great! Like some of the other comments, it does need some cleaning up, but there's a very solid foundation to this and you can take it pretty far! I love that somebody choreographed something to a song of Darren's, for some reason I hadn't thought of that. I wish my studio would do a song of his!
drumblondej 9 months ago
@jjeesssskkaahh505- I would have loved to have a male couple, or have some men- again, i was working with very limited resources. The fall show I am revamping it for will have auditions and I will hopefully have my pick of the crop, as it were. I'm toying with the costumes idea- I wanted to maintain individual characters, so I allowed the dancers to choose their own costumes. Perhaps more muted street clothing?
dancingmaniac2 9 months ago
Thanks all for your comments! I really appreciate it!
Re: more practice- Unfortunately, this was a student-run show the weekend before finals, so we were not granted much rehearsal time. I will be revamping it in the fall with more rehearsal time.
dancingmaniac2 9 months ago
the costumes are distracting, i'd go with a simple mod look, like spandex, black sports bras and white t shirts.
yeah, more practice would be good but its beautiful. and it could be even more powerful with a few (but not too many ) boys!
jjeesssskkaahh505 9 months ago
Really beautiful. I dont know much about dance but I do know it touched me.
Lovely.
xoMrsWentzxo 9 months ago
AMAZING start! I think it's great so far. Def needs cleaning up and making moves more crisp and ect but seriously you have some great stuff in there! I can't wait to see more or this one once revamped! :D
AllStar628 9 months ago
It's definitely an excellent start. I loved the develope with all three girls at the back, but felt it could have been more controlled to fill more space and time, if that makes any sense.
I feel like there were some major empty spots that could have been filled with some smaller movement, possibly some different blocking.
I also felt like some of the girls could have projected more or danced more full out.
However- fantastic start, and I'd love to see this develop more!
Cathaign 9 months ago
I think it's a good start. It needs to be more in sync and perfected in that sense. But I think the overall idea is good and it could really go somewhere good with a little more practice. =)
AwesomeFatKitty 9 months ago 5
I really loved this! It's so amazing :)
SparkyTheMistress2 9 months ago
Awesome Job!! :D Keep up the amazing work!
DomLo2126 10 months ago 4