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  • Ahhh, I'm hurrrying to the next one. RIGHT NOW.

    Gosh, Elle. Sucha cliff hanger ;]

  • OMG! I couldnt believe you stopped THERE!!! I was like on the edge of my seat it was SOO SO SO good.

  • hmm. where'd she gooo?

  • oh god. now im nervous. like reaaly nervous. i feel that something is gonna happen and maybe not something good ... But, oh my god Elle. I so understand why it's ur favorite, this chap was so freaking good. The way that simple thing like that happen and how much they are happy with just this situation is so powerful. I freaking love them and just can't wait to see what's gonna happen because im afraid .. but i need to know. Love you damn girl :] Post part 2 please =D for me .. haha

  • amazing!! where did she go? is he dreaming? oohh i cannot wait for the next one! amazing chapter <3

  • noooooo!! :(

  • that was good! one of my faves! :]

    ohmygoodness... who sees nick?!

    can't wait for tomorrow.

  • omg, you should post part 2 today!

    I NEED to know who it is!

    you write so well.

    I can imagine ever single detail you imagine. I see them in motion, the way they lay down, the way the walk, the way they don't care about anything else but each other.

    I loved it!

  • WOW!

    I have no idea on what to write.

    I wanna know where Miley is though....

    BBEAUTIFUL! [It's only fitting]

  • omfg..........................­..this is the most beautiful episode ever....undescriptable..seriou­sly it is WOW..cant ever describe it cuz my stupid words would ruin it. just PLEASSEEE IM BEGGINNNNGGG U !!! NEXT CHAPPPTTTEEERRR!!!! AND MAKE IT TO BE MILEEEYYYYYYY!!! PLEAAASSSSEEEE!!!

  • Where the heck did she go.?

    Ha. I re-read to make sure their isn't an author code im missing, im not ;] i think... I like this chapter!!! Im in class as we speak reading and saying this ;D

  • ahmazing, and yes this was my favorite(:

  • OMG what's happeniiiiiiiing!?!?!

  • part 2 please!

    that was so amazing <3

  • i understand why this is your favorite. i can feel their emotions. i can see their figures moving. i love it . thank you

  • This is so good that I cant even describe it! This story is one of the best ive ever read. Its even better than some books ive read, & trust me, im not just saying that. I can definitely see why its your favorite! The way you write Nick & Miley is like watching it happen in real life. I dont know how you can make it seem so intense & realistic but you do & its fantastic! The ending was such a good cliff-hanger, I know the next part of this chapter is gonna be something fabulous! cant wait! <3

  • ooooooooooooh i guess that wasn´t miley huh?? yup one of the favorite chapters defenitly girl =)

  • PLEASE POST PART 2

    I'M BEGGING

  • oommmgg

    please post the next bit today

    PLEAASSEEE

    :D

  • i can see why its your favorite :)

  • Dang you Elle. Stopping it there! Haha but really that was fantastic. Can't wait for the next one :)

  • ohhhhh!!! pleaseeee post part two today. just this once!

    my heart is beating really fast right now.

    :)

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