"This is the Place" ~ a thriller/suspense short film!

[theycalmemrfarenheit]

She's a total bitch

[slm22186]

Totally awesome!

[ajinqya]

Predictable .. but nice effort ! .. Guy was very natural and convincing.. girl was sorta over and fake .. but she eventually grabbed it . kool guys :D

[TheSantanico]

I'd like to use your film on my television series, Theatre of Ice. santanicofilms@hotmail

[PenfoldFilm]

Very nice short film but I didn't feel the suspence, if you wanted more suspence you should have kept going because now the audience knows something that she does not so we know it's coming thus creating tension and suspence. Other than that, great work!

[deppcarter]

@PenfoldFilm well...actually...she...didnt.­..write...it

[HauntedAlleyTV]

excellent guys!

[1bobo1]

cool!

[trollywoodstudios]

I can tottaly see you on a show like CSI or something!

[880728leonjf]

hey very cool, excelent photography and actress

[michaelvm92]

That was incredible! :D

[LovelyAprilBaby]

this was very interesting and impressive. well put together

[dwunltd]

congrats, babie!

xoxx

[MeMeCarPiRo]

Wow O.O this is an awesome short Denna, congrats for the results of it. I kind of made a short on my own for a work.. it is not great at all, so i guess this had a big amount of time and effort. Congrats again. Meli

[IRM783]

A great movie, and very-well made. Although I saw the ending coming, it was a great twist.

WARNING! SPOILERS!

First I thought the woman with him wanted him to kill her, and was planning out her assisted suicide.

Second I thought that the guy was the killer and the girl, a friend of his, was helping him cover it up.

I thought about it for a while, when I predicted what they were actually doing.

Sorry, I like telling people my thought cycles. Again, nice film, nice shots, nice acting, nice twist.

[mikeysgirl314]

well that left me hanging...now i want to know what really happens to that woman!

[haltrix]

i love how at the beggining they make it seem like a detective movie but at tthe end it is such a psycho sadistic movie

[alfinou13]

hello!! i really enjoyed this video, it's awesome! But i can't decide myself on the meaning of the end. I have two theories:

either the two characters are working on a thriller movie and the woman is recording the scene of the crime at the end.

Or the two characters are total psychos and the woman is recording the murder because Jacob and she both enjoy it.

[vallonierproduction]

they were planning the murder that they were going to do..

[JHSpring26]

freakin' brilliant!

[Tuber228756]

Very impressive...good work.

[AllWoundUp]

this is awesome

[OneWithTheCam]

Some Fantastic shots

[fjhc75]

excellent on movie 5 awesome video...

[kieransherry91]

very well done

[09193877119]

where'd you get the sound effects?

[SNL0907]

Very well done! Great story all done in less than 7 minutes. Very nice twist.

I sort of had the feeling that it was either he or the girl that was involved in the murder (which hasn't happened yet as we finally find out)

He had that "killer"look when he was holding the pan.

Bravo!

[meganxmcr]

wow ! That was wikid good :D

[25PeeAddiction]

Very excellent movie, everything is well done and I do like the plot and the acting as well. the only thing I can comment on is the excessive use of the soft/diffuser effect, it kinda ruined the sharp thoughts and the thrill those characters were presenting.

[alaynawinchester]

Very well done with a great twist ending. All of my short stories have twists at the end, I love them :)

[nodicefilms]

Fantastic cinematography/editing. Lots of fun to watch. Great job!

[THExDON12]

THAT WAS AN AWESOME VIDEO! the ending was so catchy!

[phantomluver26]

wowz cool beans...in 48 mins? did u sleep?!

"did he hit her with the dumpster?"

ooooo... i though you would turn around and kill him...

[fireflystar119]

sweet!!!

[walkerwayfilms]

really nicely done. an amazing effort given you guys only had 48 hours.

[XANDER7411]

clever haha i like it a lot

[SINDJIRO]

NICE WORK! YEESSS

[Hyduk87]

Wow, really creative, I must say.

I really did not expect that kind of ending.

[eneidaOnline]

There's something I dont get... You both decided the last way was the best way to kill her, but the evidences say you killed her in the first way.

Am I wrong? Please, explain to me :(

[boogleberry85]

ok

they were planning a way to kill her without leaving evidence, and there was no evidence because it didnt happen yet

[halfdollar123451]

oooo deena i have chills up and down my spine!! :D haha jk lol :D great job though!!!

<3

[omlee26]

that was oober good!

[heyitsusthree]

love the twist at the end!

[decapitatedmime]

awesome.

[NatilaTekila]

wow, that was sooo cool

[slm22186]

That was good.

[josephpuente]

That is pretty cool.

[KassieNicole11]

I loved it! Amazing!

[444papaya444]

wow this is amazing especially since it was writen and filmed all in 48 hours, wow!!!

[BravoSixRedBRick]

yes jacob is the one that kills her and the deena and jacob are figuring out a way to kill her. they know the ladie is gonna come so they can kill her. But that was great!!! it was awesome!

[444papaya444]

yeah that's right, at the beginnning i received the impression that they were both detectives and that the man was also the assasin and i thought that he was going to kill her too, wow this was a really good film- totally unexpected!!!

[johnnyfuentes91]

savage ass jacob.

[Poodle9513]

Okay, so is the Jacob dude the guy that kills her?

And you and the jacob dude were like figuring out a way to kill her?! :P

Lol, I like this little short move thing (:

[Unigalipo]

This is great !

[paddycoolZ1]

proper job on the editing. creepy suspense. check out my film music. you are welcome to use it for your projects. i posted video response. Cheers,

paddycoolZ1

[thatbrownguy]

bravo!!

great acting

nice ending too

[GreatYeldar]

CSI Deena Edition

[ladderman22]

well done.

[Youdothedishes]

Excellent! Very professional. Amazing!

[horrorshow87]

this is AMAZING!

I hope to make this kind of movies one day

you're a good actress deena!!

5 STARS!! and a favourite!

[kara7girl]

Whoa. That's creepy. This is fantastic. Good job, Deena! :oP

[gobz11]

He eats a donut and a crumb fell onto his jacket.. not that he noticed... good job there is a female present to show the way and guide, phew!

With all these subliminal messages, you should fit right into Hollywood's system of mind control.LoL

You are a v. good actress BTW.

[jplolo316]

man oh man, that was really scary.

haha, and really fucked up.

i am so glad i'm not a killer, what a mess. nah, just kidding. (about the mess part)

what?

[RazmusStarscream]

This was a very sweet Idea!!

[THELIVINGJOKE]

That is amazing for 48 hours. The dialogue and camera set ups are top notch. Congrats Deena.

Tristan.

[lifeMac]

Amazing for 48 hours. The script was a little obscure, but... in 48 hours!?

[gdreemer]

Wow!

[WeskJago]

brilliant! extravagent! awsome awsome awsome!! and you rule as an actress!

[TheRadioCow]

Amazing! Very awesome twist, I kept thinking the entire time that he was gonna kill you cause you kept pressuring him, but no he was going to be the killer in general..

[Born2Rock666]

i likes it.

[7thgradewierdo]

wasnt that the guy from Otis?

[SidneyXda]

you should be an actress on TV! i can just picture you picking up an oscar someday *dreams*

[BeanerLaRue]

dear SidneyXda :

ooohhhhh! i wish! you are so sweet! :)

[SidneyXda]

I know ive said this before in another vi od yours, but you look so like Angelina Jolie! in fact i would want you over Angelina hehe ;)

will subscribe to your channel, i love what you do..its funny, creative and your just so beautiful!

[fatal4sara]

that is one KEWL video!

[pitousa13]

That was hot!!!

usually short films are crappy...but this was phenomenal!

[harleynanda]

A wonderful short. Commendations to the entire crew on this one. Excellent acting by you guys. Would like to see a version of this with Lil' Miss HoneyBee playing a part.

[MesquitaTV]

Which camcorder did you use? Thanks!

[BeanerLaRue]

dear MesquitaTV :

not sure what kind of camera the production team used.

[0gummyworms0]

OMG that was soooooo scary

it seemed like part of a real film

[Vierge17]

wow, thats cool that you were apart of this mini film.

[bookmouse99]

The guy you are acting opposite looks very very familar

and you were fantastic.

Keep making us smile!

(although this isnt so smiley......)

Loved it anyways

[7thgradewierdo]

the ending tied everything in, masterfully

[kongawonga]

I've always enjoyed seeing WHAT WILL BOUNCE ON CONCRETE, a GREAT pastime;) Nicely done, one and all, great production value.

[AnahitaSharma]

My god, BeanerLaRue, that was fantastic. :) Great job. I'ma subscribe ter ya.

[blapdapenguin]

ooooo lalaaaaaaaa

It wasn't as creepy as I thought it would be but all the short clips of the girl dying or getting hit that the editor put in with scary music looked very professional. Bravo! Great acting!

[LalalandE2008]

please don't stop what you do!

i mean posting videos... lol

[BeanerLaRue]

dear LalalandE2008 :

never! :)

[JerbyVids]

That was pretty freaky!

And I bet that was a lot of fun to work on.

[CWheath3]

Your Going To Do Very Well At Your Craft. That Was A Great Short Film !! I saw Tesla Preform @ saltair In 95.

[jojoluvjobro1]

Wow.

You are amazing!

I hope you realllllly sooooon be in a bigggggggg movie or a tv series!!!

[BeanerLaRue]

dear jojoluvjobro1:

thank you!!! i hope so too! he he!

[xmyx3romancex]

this is so awesome! you are such a talented actress writer and everything! LOVE IT!!

[deathlyfairy]

You are amazing!!!

[ItsMargie]

Fantastic! really is awesome!!!!

[khyronelric]

A que la chingada.. THE SHORT FILM IS AWESOME... Is great, Are you thinking to make a second part.. or more chapter.. .. WOW... amazing. 5/5 and go to favorites.

[HansThane]

creepy. but bloody cool! :)

[JunJP02]

That was one sick, but deep short. Great job!

[Runies1]

dang that was a scary flashback film.... but who played as the lady who has been dragged stabbed killed and thrown of the balcony??

[BeanerLaRue]

dear Runies1:

you know, i didn't spend much time w/her since we weren't in any scenes together ~ can't even think of her name! it's in the credits at the end of the film! :)

[Runies1]

Oooo in the credits there were names of alota people, i thout you had a small video camera but ... you don't have one of these big camera do you?? with a big furry mic pointing to your face everywhere you go do yoU?? oh by the way sorry i forgot to tell you that this short film rocks!!

[NTC355]

Enjoyed it! Very good job all around :)

[k04jetta]

that was awesome!!

[deimosianrocks]

Excellent short film. Kudos to the directory of photography for a well shot video. Deena great acting in this one. I hope you go far.

[CommentSense]

So - when are you taking yourself to LA? You know you got the stuff...

[yourstuffstores]

Very good video :]

Thanks

Artracejr

[bennystropical]

i luv it*********

[mosVIDEOtribute]

very good !!!! thank you

[mo4form]

i dont find it scary .. kinda like watching porn :D

lol jk ..

movies n actin is .. i dunno

but starting a band is so easy

[Joshuahernandez75]

this movie is cool you are a big insperation!!!

[TrippinwithAlexis]

hella scary

[meq4life]

love the twist!

[kickanus]

Oh my gosh i love it...i wanna make movies with yall...the editing was amazing

[HOLLATYME]

i luv it*********

[rain8a]

wait......the guy is the killer, right?

[rain8a]

whoa cool vid. you should make a part2.

oh and that guy should take some kind of psycho analyzes class..hahaha

[MelodyElize]

Wow. Spooooky.....

[knightmaster55]

wow! you are a great actress! this video rocks! great job!

[unlovelyxromance]

wow this was amazing:]

you're such a wonderful actress

i hope you make more!

[SolidSnake7189]

wow this is a great short. this could make a good movie. i could be the killer

[mikejaysmith]

Wonderful short, Deena.

Hope you'll do more of those!

[caseydavid2]

Ahh. Awesome acting job, and awesome film. :D

[airracket]

WILD...

[AnnaSolgaard]

this film is the best film i ever have seen on youtube!! (:

[BeanerLaRue]

dear AnnaSolgaard:

thank you so much for watching! so glad u liked this film!

[ShiekUrBooty]

I just watched it again, the twist in the premise of the story is so ingenious..."house of 1,000 corpses" esque.

[PureIrishBabe]

hay!! love it. speshuly da start.

real twisstt!!! xx awesome!

[LivLafLuv4EVA23]

this was REALLY good you guys are SO good at acting!!!! i wish it could have been longer though!

[BeanerLaRue]

dear LivLafLuv4EVA23:

thank you SO much! xoxo

[LivLafLuv4EVA23]

r u professional? all of your videos are by far the best on youtube. i LOVE the miss honey bee vids the most tho! your really good at comedy

[BeanerLaRue]

dear LivLafLuv4EVA23 :

wow! thank you so much! i do act professionally! i'm so happy u r enjoying my channel! :)

[corwinfreak19]

u both had such great acting.but i kinda got lost with the whole movie,too bad it couldnt continue,it could be like a series,like law & order

[argenfargabarg]

Yeah, she looks just like you, Bean. No, I get it! It is you! Wow, cool. Don't forget us little people...

[BeanerLaRue]

dear argenfargabarg:

it's me! :)thanks for watching, my friend! ;)

[snaregurl15]

does anyone know were this was filmed? was it at a concert hall?

[BeanerLaRue]

dear snaregurl15:

in Salt Lake City at a place called Saltaire by the Great Salt Lake :)

[cholo123321]

wow YUP YOU SHOULD BE IN A MOVIE!

[armanipotter]

koool

[mcminn01]

the only thing i didn't like was your purse. oh, and most of his acting. but that's damn good for only 48 hours. good god.

[sirfuzzyman]

Great writing and great acting make for a very immersive story. This has both. Keep doing it and all will fall into place.

[jweinrub]

Now that was very well done there!

[geness30]

wow!!! awesome, you are good, I really got into, too bad it was to short, good job!

[JesiErin]

neat concept!

[halospartan92]

Really good actually. 5/5

[sismian]

That was well acted, enjoyable :P

[halospartan92]

Its pretty good for a short, probably low-budgeted film.

[spheremaster]

to only explore my darker side through film. shivers.

[bone666mafiathugs]

thats tight!

[TheUndeadWeasel]

Cleaver. :)

+Nice acting. :D

[Ninjasqrlgirl]

You are great in this.

I'm subscribed, right?

I'll hit the button again in case I'm not.

[TheStepfordNews]

Wow...amazing and even more impressive after reading the description!

[ILoveHimEternally2]

COOL VID! :)

[rhondaanthonytanner]

Nice Deena!! Woot woot!

♥--Hugz and Light Bulbs--♥ Brittani aka Rhonda :)

[gggnarly]

cute to see u serious!

[VancouverDriver]

For most of the vid, I thought that the guy was going to club JackAndCokeLady in the head.

Oh well, surprise ending.

[nightwolf014]

this is really good! jodie

[fatdaddyb28]

Jodie is Venetian Princess

This is Deena Marie, the Jack and Coke Lady

wrong channel

[TrippinwithAlexis]

You really

should just work in hollywood!

[TrippinwithAlexis]

This is so serious its shocking!

[annspade]

Love it!! Great work, too, Deena. w00t! By all actors!

+5

[annspade]

Meant to share! The 48-hour film challenge I participated in had to be no longer than 3 minutes. So they chose an infomercial theme. We won Best Ensemble Acting! (But *ahem* we didn't get paid.) :)

[BeanerLaRue]

dear annspade:

3 min?! wow! do you have it? i would love to see! i totally want to it again next year! xoxo

[annspade]

I do have it, actually. Do you remember the trailer to the film short "Embryo"? It's on the same DVD. :) I'll figure a way to let you see it. See your PM.

[Kabuki0009]

real dark stuff this, well acted as well.

[1938superman]

cool :-)

[moukell]

Wow that was awesome 10 starts 150%!!

[moukell]

wow well done!

[paintandpass]

you ROCK !!!!

[TrekkieAtlantis]

I was not expecting the ending

[sirfuzzyman]

If Hollywood doesn't called you after this they are fools. This is incredible. Very intense. Starts out CSI and ends as a killer-in-training. Great twist ending.

[BeanerLaRue]

dear sirfuzzyman:

thank you so much! boy i wish! call me, call me! xoxo

[liveawesome]

wow, that was awesome!!! i was so into it, and i could have kept watching. i think that it was very well done. and i was not expecting the ending to be like that. very very well done!!!

[laladedo13]

wow this was good!

[moviedirector88]

Brady Peterson did an excellent job on writing this! :D

Great Performance Deena! :D

This movie was awesome! You guys did al that in 48 hours, whoa thats brilliant! :D

[LadyShortyG]

great video loved the suspense.lady shorty g

[Bohn2]

Very good Deena I Like How you guys got the plot down in such a short time and at the end you are the teacher and the mind of a real killer cool congrats of the award. Thanks for sharing it with us.

[bronxjl]

best thing i ever saw on you tube. awesome

[staceydyan]

That was really good and creepy.

[monkeygoosemoose]

amazing actress!!!

absolutely GORGEOUS!

[WANNAGO2MCDONALDS]

omg deena you did soooo GOOD

fantastic job! you looked totally gorgeous too

[cjam12]

No wonder this was audience favorite... It's great! The writing, the editing, the music, but especially the ACTRESS. Deena, you rock my socks!

[TUESDAYIMFADINGX]

wow! everything about this video is awesome!

[Clobberbob55]

Always knew you're a killer, cuz ya slay me.

[DTMTroy]

That was awesome i'd love to hire you on for some of my shorts.I gotta admit I saw it coming but still I loved it.

[GayCarrington]

I LOVE meeting the different sides of you, Deena.

Cheers!

XX, Gay