Waaaaaaaaaaay too rushed with the delivery of lines. In stage acting pacing can make a scene much more interesting or boring when utilized. Keeping the lines coming rapid fire like that can be good at some point but the audience will get bored and maybe won't be able to keep up with whats happening. Audiences attention is attracted to change. You have a fast pattern of lines, good. Since that is established, variate the delivery once or twice and audience notices change and stays interested
Waaaaaaaaaaay too rushed with the delivery of lines. In stage acting pacing can make a scene much more interesting or boring when utilized. Keeping the lines coming rapid fire like that can be good at some point but the audience will get bored and maybe won't be able to keep up with whats happening. Audiences attention is attracted to change. You have a fast pattern of lines, good. Since that is established, variate the delivery once or twice and audience notices change and stays interested
JTFsingz 7 months ago