Fallen Petals; one-shot // part two

[maddogcjz]

wow thats all i can say.

[TorinMarch]

what the **** is a one shot?

[LaurenLockheart]

@TorinMarch it's like a mini series, ya know? like a story but there's only a one or a few parts?

[TorinMarch]

@LaurenLockheart oh. okay.

[xXMarlznAriezxX]

i luv the last line..this is a really nice one shot i love it

[mrsniley]

when did that happen?

how old were you?

younger or? :)

[ylc7]

i liked the endingg.

amazingg story!

[smiley0smiley03]

the end was amazing what she said about suicide is sooo true

i loved it!

[TheJonasfan1001]

im not even crying im like balling this one shot is that amazing continue writting one shots!!!

[4laq]

I am seriously like crying right you are getting better and better and i really love the last line U ARE AWESOME DUDE!! wow im actually crying aswell

[arizonababe12]

The very last line in this story...I like that line...No actually i LOVE that line.

This is an amazing story, but its horrible how too many people live in homes where only one of the parents are permanent, if that. Or sometimes even when they still have both parents the love is gone.

[jessiesalzer]

omg who did this happen to........ this is so depressing........omg 

[maecorn12]

Oh my god dude! I'm like really crying right now. That was hard. I loved the end with the part about suciede, that's so so true

[Saranizer0204]

I'm soo sorry. My father and mother divorced when I was at a young age due to constant fights.. Leading to my father walking out of my life permanently a few years later. Haven't seen him since. I sympathize you. Hope everything gets better.

[ILoveNiley3]

wow.

you just keep getting better and better.

just;...wow.

loved it.

what songs are these?

[L0veMe4Me123]

that was amazing. i cried, and ask anyone, i dont cry at anything. I am so sorry you had to go through this, i hope everything is better with your parents now.

[qtbaby88]

i was almost balling amazing i know a few ppl who took their own life and miss them dearly i hope every thing turns out better

[LankanLil]

Oh no.. the song is so sad. <3

Amazing, second time reading and it's so touching.

[MySimpleStory]

That was really beautiful. I was crying myself.

I totally deal with the same thing.

Except you know, still going on. --"

And its my mom, not my dad. :/

[lenebraes]

oooooooooooooooomg ='[

[AstridStar01Cp]

@lenebraes I Said That Too :(

[xxBroganLouisaxx]

i have tears in my eyes.

If you've gone through this, then i am so, so sorry.

[xxiluvnileynjoejxx]

this was amazing

loved it

[nickkjerryjonasx3]

incredible, i cried♥

[nileyxoxo]

This happened to my bestfriend she was seven her dad shot himself . She's 16 now strongest girl I know

[AstridStar01Cp]

@nileyxoxo Aww.. I Feel Sorry For Her Loss..... Its Good Thats Shes Strong!

[ChrisMarieJonas]

owwn i cry ): u're an awesome writter (:

[mmtwilight1]

WOW youre AHMAZING!! :D god im sorry you/or anyone else had/have to pass through this :S....

[faithinniley]

Wow this sounds like my life.And im serious.

[msloves2sing]

You went through this, right? I think I remember you writing something like this, but actual people, you and stuff, but celebs or not, its so powerful I swear If it happened to me, i'd cry, hell i'd kill myself

[SummerShowersx]

i was in shock the whole oneshot!

this is absolutely breathtaking i wish i could write this powerfully..

and i am so sorry for you.. since this is written on a real life experience!

i have never had to endure such bad things in my life like you did!

amazingly written!

love it!

<3

[PurplePandaBear100]

amazing

[ilessthan3music1]

wow... i'm speechless. this was amazing!!! what a powerful message!! way to go! you are an amazing writer! keep it up :)

[ultimatenileyfan101]

this made me cry! :(

[CharlotteLuvsYuux3]

Wow; that waso so amazing! :D You are such a talented writer! I adore you so much! <3

[LovelyLiLAmy]

One word, two words. Breath-taking. Really it is. During the scene with Selena and Joe (Before 7 years) Tears were forming in my eyes. I just wanted to scream at the screen to tell Joe not to commit suicide.. but then.. I would get weird stares so.. I just covered my mouth and was in shocked of what an amazing story this was. Honestly, I felt .. it was really great.. I dont know what to say right now. Its so amazing. Absolutely amazing that I dont know what to say. You deserve an emmy :]