This is all happening wayyy ti fast! Jemi and Nelena are dating and Nick nor Joe ansked Demi and Selena to be their girlfirends. WTH happeneed between Joe and demi. i love you and the kiss! WHAT?!?! Selena is moving in episode 2 what!
Other than the speed ,i love it.youshould 've kept the plot like this but put more detail into the situations!
DUDE. STOP SKIPPING. IT SUCKS LIKE THAT. THEY HAVENT EVEN TALKED AND SUDDENLY THEY ARE NELENA?!? WTF?!? NO. SERIOUSLY. SLOW IT DOWN. ITS FRUSTRATING. STOP BEING LAZY AND ADD DETAILS. JESUS.
That is wat i think i dont think they should just skip right into jemi and selena i mean at the begining selena is like so i guess jemi is on in the 2nd episode!
This is all happening wayyy ti fast! Jemi and Nelena are dating and Nick nor Joe ansked Demi and Selena to be their girlfirends. WTH happeneed between Joe and demi. i love you and the kiss! WHAT?!?! Selena is moving in episode 2 what!
Other than the speed ,i love it.youshould 've kept the plot like this but put more detail into the situations!
Debree101 10 months ago
well nelena and jemi happened pretty quick
i'll keep reading though :)
PhineasFerbFAN1 1 year ago
DUDE. STOP SKIPPING. IT SUCKS LIKE THAT. THEY HAVENT EVEN TALKED AND SUDDENLY THEY ARE NELENA?!? WTF?!? NO. SERIOUSLY. SLOW IT DOWN. ITS FRUSTRATING. STOP BEING LAZY AND ADD DETAILS. JESUS.
MsDaniellaMia 1 year ago 6
omg that went soooooo fast! haha i liked the ending, but can u just slow it down a little please
gigglegiggle12468 2 years ago
Your series is amazing!
But happenning too fast!
You should slow it down.
When did they even decide to be couples?
Just can u slow it down?
It's hard to remember what's hapenning!
Sorry if I'm being push or anything!
cutieagirl 2 years ago
you already post that picture on a nelena + jemi story episode 1 the picture was 0;22
rockontaylorswift12 2 years ago
slow it down everything is going sooooo faast
AHHMEHOT 2 years ago
everything is happing wayyyyyy to fast !!! slow it down !!!
AWESOMEGAL2009 2 years ago
wow that all went by so fast
lovly411 2 years ago 2
amazing!
CrazyNickJonasLuvr01 2 years ago
this is happening do fast!!!!! its only episode 2
hsm2luver101 3 years ago
@hsm2luver101
OMG in know right!
Debree101 10 months ago
to get more viewers i think you need to make the couples come slower and stop skipping from place to place and put more detail
but besides that its amazing
-Selin
HogThePhone97 3 years ago 9
i agree with u
hsm2luver101 3 years ago
i used to write a series so i know what NOT to do
HogThePhone97 3 years ago
thats good
hsm2luver101 3 years ago
That is wat i think i dont think they should just skip right into jemi and selena i mean at the begining selena is like so i guess jemi is on in the 2nd episode!
redandpinkBFF 2 years ago
love it<3 awesomeee.
OMJxOo 3 years ago