Thanks for your honest feedback, despite the rude tone. ;) Well, it's a teaser -- so it's not suppose to reveal too much. I like to be subtle with my films. I believe people have the capabilities to see underlying things.
For my character, I think if close attention is paid, you could see from Dan (the guy with the Austrailian accent) said my character was a natual born killer, the scene of where my character is intimidating the guy with the Lexus (Hai) while holding a 9mm Beretta handgun, and then at the end of the teaser said maybe my character should quit 'cause he's gotten too used to killing. It's obvious he's some type of muscle or hitman.
For the other character, the guy with glasses and beanie (Dennis), it's obvious he's trying to get into the crime world. But he's too nice of a guy and he's got a relationship with a woman that's not going so well. So, one would think, maybe that propels him to go into a world of crime to prove something to himself, or to her, or could be an entirely different motive that do not know until we see the actual film.
But in the clip where's he in the car with Hai, he fucked up obviously ("you're all over the news") and that could also mean maybe that's why my character was intimidating Hai in the other clip to find out about Dennis' whereabouts. How my character and that character relates is simple -- my character is a perfect for that type of life while the other character is in no way a criminal. I think all these things I show within the teaser implies that this two concepts will eventually clash.
Making a movie is like writing a book, you have to lead people through steps so that they can understand what you try to show.
I 100% did not understand why the 2nd guy got himself into the crime-world. If it was him trying to prove something to himself/his girlfriend/anyone else, please show it properly.
A trailer is a commercial of your movie(s), if you dont work on it probably, noone will wanna waste their time watching it.
Again -- I just think you're expecting too much from a teaser/trailer that is derived from a no-budget short movie. And no, making a film is entirely different from writing a book.
I am totally clueless, 1 is naturally born killer, 1 is...??? (unnaturally born killer? drugs-dealer? kungfu master?). What made them chose the same path? Why are they related (or be in the same movie)? Screen-writer, man, screen-writer!
Thanks for your honest feedback, despite the rude tone. ;) Well, it's a teaser -- so it's not suppose to reveal too much. I like to be subtle with my films. I believe people have the capabilities to see underlying things.
DarthV87 3 years ago
For my character, I think if close attention is paid, you could see from Dan (the guy with the Austrailian accent) said my character was a natual born killer, the scene of where my character is intimidating the guy with the Lexus (Hai) while holding a 9mm Beretta handgun, and then at the end of the teaser said maybe my character should quit 'cause he's gotten too used to killing. It's obvious he's some type of muscle or hitman.
DarthV87 3 years ago
For the other character, the guy with glasses and beanie (Dennis), it's obvious he's trying to get into the crime world. But he's too nice of a guy and he's got a relationship with a woman that's not going so well. So, one would think, maybe that propels him to go into a world of crime to prove something to himself, or to her, or could be an entirely different motive that do not know until we see the actual film.
DarthV87 3 years ago
But in the clip where's he in the car with Hai, he fucked up obviously ("you're all over the news") and that could also mean maybe that's why my character was intimidating Hai in the other clip to find out about Dennis' whereabouts. How my character and that character relates is simple -- my character is a perfect for that type of life while the other character is in no way a criminal. I think all these things I show within the teaser implies that this two concepts will eventually clash.
DarthV87 3 years ago
As for the background noise, I fucking hate it too! lol. But all I can afford is a cheap Audio Technica condensor mic. Sorry.
DarthV87 3 years ago
Making a movie is like writing a book, you have to lead people through steps so that they can understand what you try to show.
I 100% did not understand why the 2nd guy got himself into the crime-world. If it was him trying to prove something to himself/his girlfriend/anyone else, please show it properly.
A trailer is a commercial of your movie(s), if you dont work on it probably, noone will wanna waste their time watching it.
nguoithutu 3 years ago
Again -- I just think you're expecting too much from a teaser/trailer that is derived from a no-budget short movie. And no, making a film is entirely different from writing a book.
DarthV87 3 years ago
Btw, I like the music.
I hate the f*cking background noises tho.
-Ray-
nguoithutu 3 years ago
I am totally clueless, 1 is naturally born killer, 1 is...??? (unnaturally born killer? drugs-dealer? kungfu master?). What made them chose the same path? Why are they related (or be in the same movie)? Screen-writer, man, screen-writer!
-Ray-
Sorry for being rude with my comments.
nguoithutu 3 years ago
that movie looks awesome when will it be out
CollabFilms 3 years ago