1. The dream I would have made it a bit more foggy (effect) or anything to let the viewer know it's a dream.
2. You're not showing any emotion, in fact your face is barely shown in the video when you wake up except for your eyes which really show nothing and neither does your body. You have to look sleepy, tired, annoyed.
@Grotok Haha thanks. I wanted to avoid using effects in these exercises, and make it strictly editing and video work. To show the dream I tried to use the alarm clock to show viewers that I was dreaming. While my acting didn't give off enough emotion I was hoping the the music would provide the missing emotion. I rushed through the filming of this video so I hope my editing helped convey the message.
very nice!
Here's what I would have changed:
1. The dream I would have made it a bit more foggy (effect) or anything to let the viewer know it's a dream.
2. You're not showing any emotion, in fact your face is barely shown in the video when you wake up except for your eyes which really show nothing and neither does your body. You have to look sleepy, tired, annoyed.
Good job!
Grotok 7 months ago
@Grotok Haha thanks. I wanted to avoid using effects in these exercises, and make it strictly editing and video work. To show the dream I tried to use the alarm clock to show viewers that I was dreaming. While my acting didn't give off enough emotion I was hoping the the music would provide the missing emotion. I rushed through the filming of this video so I hope my editing helped convey the message.
manga292 7 months ago
@manga292 it did, I wish I could do these kind of videos. I just need a small push to get myself started... and it's hard!
Grotok 7 months ago