That was a very good video, I loved the animation of the fox, he looked like a genuine character off a video game. The only thing I can say to improve it, is talk a bit slower, and try to rhyme your paragraphs to make it easier to follow.
lol, you'd think the shepards would just come back and be like, "dude, there's a fat fox stuck in the hole where we.....hey, he ate our lunch!!!" *shank*
@franittalinda Maybe you need to teach Asaop's version if you can find it. This is more of a slightily modern version of the story, so Keenfox's script would be a little bit different from the original.
Reminds me of Winnie The Pooh eating lots of honey at Rabbit's house then trying to exit through the entrance (just a burrow hole) but he was too fat from honey. So his friends gather and yank him out of it so hard he flies till he gets stuck in a hole high up in a tree where a bee colony make and store honey and he eats more honey.
You are right; Winnie The Pooh did have a story similar to this one. I don't know if A.A. Milne had known of the Aesop fable beforehand, either way, it's still pretty good fun ^^ Thanks!
I would say his problem was more about gluttony then beeing greedy. if there were other foxes around to share the goods with but keept it all to himself then it would be greed. ^_^ at least thats how i see it.
This animated short is adapted from a fable written millenia ago. Winnie The Pooh's been around for only a few decades. Whether AA Milne based that story on the Aesop fable I don't know.
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15098D 3 days ago
this reminds me of when winnie the pooh got stuck in rabbits house...
vmedley2 1 week ago
I thought eddsworld was narating this!
SuperRobotStudios 2 weeks ago
@pandaluver98 Suuuure :P
KeenyFox 3 weeks ago
he should have take a powerdump XD
and yes... that is the stupidest thing I ever wrote
draconpost 1 month ago
What he should have done was to take the food out of the tree and eat it outside.
Poharex 2 months ago
@Poharex Pity he wasn't smart enough to think that =P
KeenyFox 2 months ago 3
this fable goes for America
MrZoe007 3 months ago
I think this was nicely done!
Rellymaster201 4 months ago
i shall show it too "he famous rider my brother!
weitzel229 4 months ago
I was expecting the shepards to come back and kill him
sakonaga1 4 months ago
@sakonaga1 That'd be too dark for this kind of cartoon, but then again it is very primitive compared to my later entries.
KeenyFox 4 months ago
@sakonaga1 me too
chris68344 3 months ago
Greed, one of seven deadly sins.
skinnyshit8888 5 months ago
I like the story.I will show it to my little sister ^.^
sonami23 5 months ago
That was a very good video, I loved the animation of the fox, he looked like a genuine character off a video game. The only thing I can say to improve it, is talk a bit slower, and try to rhyme your paragraphs to make it easier to follow.
LionAndCrownEVE 5 months ago
@LionAndCrownEVE This animation was made three years ago. I learned from it by not narrating anything again! XD
KeenyFox 5 months ago
@KeenyFox I wouldn't give up on it that easily if you enjoy doing it. :)
LionAndCrownEVE 5 months ago
That was cute. XD
Animehusky 6 months ago
8 people are greedy foxes
SandshadowWarriors 7 months ago
the fat ugly man who did the voice of the fat fox talks too fast the person is fat ugly greedy and stupid.
trianna1970 7 months ago
@trianna1970 I did the narration, as bad as it was. If you've actually seen me, you'll know I'm as thin as a pencil! =P
KeenyFox 7 months ago
@trianna1970 Ur a huge critic
SandshadowWarriors 7 months ago
Winnie the pooh rip off!
Novius8 8 months ago
@Novius8 If you did your research you will find that the fable I based this animation on came well before Winnie The Pooh =P
KeenyFox 8 months ago
HA! I remember the same basic story in a cartoon from when I was young... I know that you may have heard of it - Winnie the Pooh.
audioblogs12 9 months ago
poor fox.
ExplodingClay 1 year ago
lol, you'd think the shepards would just come back and be like, "dude, there's a fat fox stuck in the hole where we.....hey, he ate our lunch!!!" *shank*
VitaNuovaRevolution 1 year ago 2
@VitaNuovaRevolution The story was kind of inconclusive in that department :P
KeenyFox 1 year ago
6 persons think foxes can't get fat XD
saiber2 1 year ago
Good work.
JulienBrightside 1 year ago
foxes will always be greedy espically for foood lol
MrNoobWarrior 1 year ago
cool
vashmr1 1 year ago
is that flash animation?
vashmr1 1 year ago
@vashmr1 Yep ^^
KeenyFox 1 year ago
so cute ^^
DragonUltraMaster 1 year ago
is sort of reminded me of Winnie The Pooh..
So good and so smooth!!
julietadivabear 1 year ago
You work da wonderz!
Yoo should do more, yoo gotz sum reel talent!
TheKittyOKat 1 year ago
@TheKittyOKat I do make them now and again when I've got the determination and energy for it ;)
KeenyFox 1 year ago
Sounded kinda like Herbert the Pervert. :P
AdelioAltomar 1 year ago
mo offence...but tht was kinda stubid...
yipp3333II 1 year ago
@yipp3333II Just like your spelling, so none taken!
KeenyFox 1 year ago 18
@KeenyFox hahaha lol
yipp3333II 1 year ago
@yipp3333II I didn't thumbs up this comment because I agree, I thumbs upped it because it was a really silly comment and I enjoyed it.
Gibaleopaeri 1 year ago
Lol, good job at animation man!
Have you ever considered a career or something?
MountainFox51 1 year ago
@MountainFox51 Yeah, it takes more than just a little animating to achieve such a thing though :P
KeenyFox 1 year ago
if i was that fox..
i would puke every thing up...
MegaGayforlife 1 year ago
Hi! Please I need the script of this video. ´cause I have to teach it and I don´r understand all the things said.
franittalinda 1 year ago
@franittalinda Maybe you need to teach Asaop's version if you can find it. This is more of a slightily modern version of the story, so Keenfox's script would be a little bit different from the original.
David315842 1 year ago
Cute!
Reminds me of Winnie The Pooh eating lots of honey at Rabbit's house then trying to exit through the entrance (just a burrow hole) but he was too fat from honey. So his friends gather and yank him out of it so hard he flies till he gets stuck in a hole high up in a tree where a bee colony make and store honey and he eats more honey.
BeachballSU 1 year ago
@BeachballSU Yeah. I never once thought of Winnie The Pooh whilst making this ^^) but it is quite a coincidence!
KeenyFox 1 year ago
if they left it for dinner...how come they never got back for it?
DELGangster86 1 year ago
@DELGangster86 I don't think the story ever properly disclosed that. Some say the shepherds killed and ate him, others say they forgot =P
KeenyFox 1 year ago
sexy cool
josesan2504 1 year ago
@josesan2504 Sexy? lol.
KeenyFox 1 year ago
@KeenyFox You haven't heard of the stuck fetish then. Yeah some people find it sexy, though it dosen't apply to everyone though.
David315842 1 year ago
@David315842 I'm not surprised that it exists :P
KeenyFox 1 year ago
@KeenyFox :D
David315842 1 year ago
This looks like a acuall tv show! good job!
FireStarDoink 1 year ago
wats the name of the song at the end
Lifty4ever 1 year ago
It is "Time" by The Affiliates, a local rock band I played in.
KeenyFox 1 year ago
and then the shepherds came back and ate him :P
freeNode5 1 year ago
Gosh, he'd taste pretty bad =P
KeenyFox 1 year ago
The voices need to talk ALOT slower.
Vixengurl1 1 year ago
Any slower and it would be a boring snails' pace, if you ask me ;)
KeenyFox 1 year ago
you know, beatrice potter has a story kinda like this but with squirrels
Starshine1396 1 year ago
The Tale Of Squirrel Nutkin?
KeenyFox 1 year ago
nope, the tale of timmy tiptoes, but squirrel nutkin is funny too
XD lol foxes are so cool
Starshine1396 1 year ago
the lesson is not to be greedy
AliisaMurphy 2 years ago
he should have eaten more, then the tree would have cracked... the fox is cute with the big belly!
ExtremeFatWolf 2 years ago
Lol, maybe =P
KeenyFox 2 years ago
really good work mate. I've tried a bit of stop motion and it's definitely harder than it looks!
MrSomewhere 2 years ago
Yep, I can imagine since both frame by frame and stop motion require a lot of time and patience ;)
KeenyFox 2 years ago
what software did you use to create your videos? I've really wanted to make videos like this!
ILuvGodsCreatures 2 years ago
I used Flash to make this video.
KeenyFox 2 years ago
furries.
gali32731 2 years ago
They're only animals.
KeenyFox 2 years ago
he sounds like news reporter ...!lol
angelynandkanitha 2 years ago
2nd fox sounds like Yoda!^^
CONKER17 2 years ago 18
I think a winne the pooh video had a smiler plot
The one ware pooh is stuck in rabbits front door
Great video 5*
Bassoonandsax 2 years ago 8
You are right; Winnie The Pooh did have a story similar to this one. I don't know if A.A. Milne had known of the Aesop fable beforehand, either way, it's still pretty good fun ^^ Thanks!
KeenyFox 2 years ago
is this what you do in your spear time if it is do more
yourname129 2 years ago
Would love to, but it takes a lot of time and inspiration.
KeenyFox 2 years ago
the story line acculy makes sence
yourname129 2 years ago
Not bad. I can tell you based this off an old fable by Aesop.
Guardianoftheunborn 2 years ago 2
Lovely!
Thank you for sharing!
psYnel 2 years ago 2
that was my tree dick
GARAisSANDMAN 2 years ago
Awsome
ILoveDogMeat 2 years ago 2
Yaaaay! Aesop!
HappyWulf 2 years ago 3
The Fox should have taken the food out of the tree, then eaten it.
Ascensiam 2 years ago 4
Awesome work : )
All of it :D
From the Voice acting to Flash animation to the images quality and design 5 starts !
: )
sting2death2 2 years ago
I'm not so fond of this video as when I finished it, but I'm glad people still appreciate it :) Thank you.
KeenyFox 2 years ago
Very cool animation I enjoyed it alot!!
Firefoxwolffie 2 years ago
this is pretty good animation.
drockman92 2 years ago
I've made better since then. I'm actually quite embarassed by this one now! =P
KeenyFox 2 years ago
well, you have to start from somewhere, Right?
drockman92 2 years ago
Nice animation. Cute foxes. ^.^ great job. ^^
Lightspeedvore 2 years ago
Nice animation.
And really the old fox sound like Yoda master.
chubb0voulez 3 years ago
IT'S YODA FOX!
(the voice sounds like Yoda)
use the force to get out of the tree!
RabidKanid 3 years ago
So much for the force =P
KeenyFox 3 years ago
I would say his problem was more about gluttony then beeing greedy. if there were other foxes around to share the goods with but keept it all to himself then it would be greed. ^_^ at least thats how i see it.
Haasthefox 3 years ago
Probably. Mind you, he didn't have to eat all of the food in the tree - so he was being greedy and being a glut at the same time!
KeenyFox 3 years ago
This animated short is adapted from a fable written millenia ago. Winnie The Pooh's been around for only a few decades. Whether AA Milne based that story on the Aesop fable I don't know.
KeenyFox 3 years ago
a new take on Aesop! a good lesson!
bsl103158 3 years ago
Wow.That was cute.
Kriegsturmer 3 years ago 2
I love Aesop's fables!!!
supergeek46 3 years ago
D'aww! That was so cute. He's even cuter with a belly. =3
FangWolfie 3 years ago 3
I would say the moral of this story is less about the gut and more about being too greedy! It's fun nonetheless. Thanks :)
KeenyFox 3 years ago
What a cute video with a cute moral. I like the animation and your characters look fantastic. Also, was that you doing the narration? Awesome accent!
Theonewhoisinfinite 3 years ago 5
Yeah it was me =P I don't normally talk in that sort of formal way
KeenyFox 3 years ago
Good animation, fluently with cute drawings and nice colors
Gato303co 3 years ago 3
The animation was great, but the voiceover was terrible.
It wasn't the dialogue or anything, it was just your mic. Try putting a sock or two over the mic when you talk into it to block those wind noises :P
ShaunDreclin 3 years ago
Since making this video I've been wrapping a wooly football hat around it! ^^
KeenyFox 3 years ago
Nicely done ^^
Like something i'd see on a childrens show.
However the plot did remind me a little bit of Winnie the Pooh =P
babclayman1 3 years ago
Yeah, I noticed that myself. The fable came centuries before Winnie The Pooh did though, although I think that's a funny little coincidence.
KeenyFox 3 years ago
Maybe if they brought him enough fo0d, he could keep getting fatter til the tree exploded! XD
IggyHazard 3 years ago
Lol that'd have been comical ^^
KeenyFox 3 years ago
I like the Yoda inflection in the wiser fox.
IggyHazard 3 years ago
A very good animation. I realy like you style :D
SOTY3011 3 years ago
Nice animation man!
stukie321 3 years ago
A superbily done short piece of animation. I love it and the narration. Fantastic job. ^_^
David315842 3 years ago
Nice it even has a lesson.
dbmain 3 years ago
"Just take what you need" lol.
KeenyFox 3 years ago
Yes and it is taught to you by a fox.
dbmain 3 years ago
Well done! I like your animation and storyline! It's very well done overall! Great job!
ChronoRuffTrigger 3 years ago