also, you're doing Oh No soon? :D I made a video with that song last year. It's a fun one to work with! I don't spose you ever saw mine but if you mean the Marina song, god...I love that woman. >3
@StinaTheBizzare Oh, I did see yours! It inspired me to want to do an animation of me and my friends! It won't be done for a while though, I'm on break right now, and have never been lazier! @O@ Hopefully, I'll start on it soon ^^;;
she's stood there or talking. When you talk to someone, I think more muscles in the face around the mouth move like a crease of the eye or a ridge in a shoulder...but I don't think that detail matters as much unless it's a proper fbf jobby. Like I said, I am bad at this crit thing and need a lot of it myself so I hope that helps x.x other than that, keep animating. You enjoy it, and it's a great hobby so...I say go for it ^^
@StinaTheBizzare YAY! Thank you so much for the criticism! It was very helpful. I'll keep in mind all your advice! ^^ I totally understand what you mean about the hair now! Curse my curls... they are AWKWARD! Thanks for all the advice! I will try my best! >=3 THANK YOU!!!
@StitchedUPHeart9 is ok, use them to your advantage. I'll sound odd but literally get a few strands in the mirror and pull them and let them go so you can see how they...spring? also, your hands are your best friends. I'm left-handed and have an awkward habit of drawing the left hand so I can't use it for a reference...I'm too dumb to flip my right x.x
Secondly, the profiles and mouths could use some practice. I like how you do the eyes, they're pretty and yet suitably absent for the song in this, but when you do the mouth like at 1:05, just be careful how the lines join, apart from that, it's alright. Like me, hands are annoying for you, aren't they? to this day I cannot draw hands correctly, they're like spazzy little sausages I can't master x///x and there are some parts that for an animation could perhaps use a bit more life, like when
Hey there, you left me a comment asking for criticism on this so I shall try. ^^; Ok, I'm...really bad at this. Firstly, both characters are sweet and I love your character's hair but when it flows, ionno if it's just the style of the PV but there needs to be a little bit more motion in there- the top layers are static, but if you look in the mirror with a fan on or summat, take notice of the way hair kinks in curves outwards and kinda seperates. In anime, it's quite prominent~
also, you're doing Oh No soon? :D I made a video with that song last year. It's a fun one to work with! I don't spose you ever saw mine but if you mean the Marina song, god...I love that woman. >3
StinaTheBizzare 2 months ago
@StinaTheBizzare Oh, I did see yours! It inspired me to want to do an animation of me and my friends! It won't be done for a while though, I'm on break right now, and have never been lazier! @O@ Hopefully, I'll start on it soon ^^;;
StitchedUPHeart9 2 months ago
she's stood there or talking. When you talk to someone, I think more muscles in the face around the mouth move like a crease of the eye or a ridge in a shoulder...but I don't think that detail matters as much unless it's a proper fbf jobby. Like I said, I am bad at this crit thing and need a lot of it myself so I hope that helps x.x other than that, keep animating. You enjoy it, and it's a great hobby so...I say go for it ^^
StinaTheBizzare 2 months ago
@StinaTheBizzare YAY! Thank you so much for the criticism! It was very helpful. I'll keep in mind all your advice! ^^ I totally understand what you mean about the hair now! Curse my curls... they are AWKWARD! Thanks for all the advice! I will try my best! >=3 THANK YOU!!!
StitchedUPHeart9 2 months ago
@StitchedUPHeart9 is ok, use them to your advantage. I'll sound odd but literally get a few strands in the mirror and pull them and let them go so you can see how they...spring? also, your hands are your best friends. I'm left-handed and have an awkward habit of drawing the left hand so I can't use it for a reference...I'm too dumb to flip my right x.x
StinaTheBizzare 2 months ago
@StinaTheBizzare OH MY GOD ME TOO!!! *is also an freaky left-hander* 8D
StitchedUPHeart9 2 months ago
@StitchedUPHeart9 i am left handed too :D
TheChristieMilkshake 6 days ago
@TheChristieMilkshake SWEET! *left hand high-fives you*
StitchedUPHeart9 5 days ago
Secondly, the profiles and mouths could use some practice. I like how you do the eyes, they're pretty and yet suitably absent for the song in this, but when you do the mouth like at 1:05, just be careful how the lines join, apart from that, it's alright. Like me, hands are annoying for you, aren't they? to this day I cannot draw hands correctly, they're like spazzy little sausages I can't master x///x and there are some parts that for an animation could perhaps use a bit more life, like when
StinaTheBizzare 2 months ago
Hey there, you left me a comment asking for criticism on this so I shall try. ^^; Ok, I'm...really bad at this. Firstly, both characters are sweet and I love your character's hair but when it flows, ionno if it's just the style of the PV but there needs to be a little bit more motion in there- the top layers are static, but if you look in the mirror with a fan on or summat, take notice of the way hair kinks in curves outwards and kinda seperates. In anime, it's quite prominent~
StinaTheBizzare 2 months ago
Awww~!! No thank you Juliet~!!! And this is amazing~!! LOVE IT~!!^^
leeesther20 2 months ago
@leeesther20 ESTHER!!! -glomps- :3
StitchedUPHeart9 2 months ago