[ch38] The Tormented Life Of A Teenager

[yaytotallyfunkykiwiG]

this aint no fairytale, joe. well it was until the the blone bitch-ass whore came along.

you have a snowball's chance in hell of getting her back now.

[fofanononyy]

Haha, wow :)

[JoBrosFanMexico]

i am starting to hate Joe!

YES! 100th comment!

[allywhitexx]

YOURE HITTING THE 100 COMMENTS :DDDDD

[Lauraclassof2008]

OMG OMG!!! this so amazing what you are writing more and more drama in  each episode!! :]

[WakeUpBrittany]

97 comments!! isn;t this awesomee!!??:D

[PrincessCxX]

Nice images in my head .. lol x

[greenaiko7]

ITS ALREADY 94 COMMENTS!! im so excited for the next one!!!!

*sqqquuueeeellll*

[myzzrockerchicxoxo]

Woah. Hell yeah that was hot! xD

CHEESE :D

[BettaBitta97]

haha,

"just what i need a fucking boner"

haha.

i love nick; your is awesome.

XD

[JoBroLuvr42708]

LOVED IT!!

[NesChlo93]

amazing !

so you have 702 subscribers, and now 90 comments. i think its time to post!

[xoxojonaslovrxoxo]

pleeeeeeese post more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[iHeArTtHeJoBroz]

hahah Joe AND Nick Shirtless!!!!!!! if i was there....hahah jk:) post soon!!! i love ur stories!

[jonasbrosluver1324]

post the next chapter please!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[rachelxojonassxo]

OMG.

holllyyyypooopp!

:D

[TMT1905]

i'm commenting again cause I love it sooo much, like please update soon, I mean if I could subscribe to you again, I would!!!

[bnljc2]

OHHHHHHHHHHH post post post

[jonasbrosfan1324]

ahhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! two Jonases shirttless!!! holy freakin crap!!

[jonasbrosfan1324]

grrr. that girl that tried dirty dancing with nick.... id slap that bitch!! nick is mine bitch back off!:P

[lea15469]

OMG! GREAT CHAPTER! PLZ POST MORE!

[candyyBiTTER]

OMG, I smell DRAMA! Great chapter :D

[joejonaswife004]

OMG!!! teenie moment.. Joe & Nick shirtless (lol.. jkjk) I loved the last 3 lines. I hope Joe keeps his promise or I'll be ssooo MAD!!

[MONICAAAily]

If I comment again and again to reach 85, does that count? (;

[mrsjosephajonas16]

this dtoryr just keeps getting so much better!!!!!!!!!!!! i CANT wait for the next one i am dieing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[jesusismysavior16]

please post another eps. they are so so so so so so so so good!!!!!!!!!

[funnyperson200]

OH OH OH OH .

that's what's gonna happen.

(:

so ... cliffhangery ! D;

[luckiducki321]

OMG so dramatci!!!!!!!!!! ahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!

[JBfanXL0veThemX95]

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! both jonas' shirtless!!!!! lol! can someone say broke the hot meter? lol! more please LOVE IT

[itshjustmee]

ahh, she HAS TO takee ihm backk, they were in lovee. omgg!!!!!

[saaaaaarah15]

post more!

[teamvampire189]

you want to kow somehting...he doesnt desserve to have her back!! after everything hes done she better not take him back...just stick with nick sweetie lol...i liked him from the beginning...:)

[ClubJrocks]

OH mY OH MY OH MY!!! keep on writting

you just can´t leave us like that!

[BlondieCroat27]

AHHH!!! AMAZINGGG <3 hes so hott.

[itsprincessyal]

OMG!!! JOe JOnas IS deffineylt hawt!!!!!!!!!

[PianosInMySoul]

i tihnk Nick might be enjoying this "assignment", but thats just me

[NickJonasLover82]

OH MY GAWD!!!!!!

holy crap i would be ON TOP OF NICK ( not in that way...) if i were at that party! i mean shirtless! w-o-w! Joe, holy sh** get your girl back boy!!!

haha cant wait for the next chapter- those people better subscribe FAST!

[SexiiBabii271]

OMG!!!!!  post more!!!!!!!!

[utubevidluver]

finally joe!!!!

go get your girl back!!

[iRawrSnap]

hot damn. :)

[ktburd3856]

oh my god come on joe u have to get brittany back!!!!!! i want to know what happens!!!!

[pink297]

is it me or is it hot in here!?omg this is getting too good than i expected

[XoxoUnknownWriter]

Wooooow;; it's getting heated ;pp

I like it. :]

Bahaha; the last part made me laugh; how Joe stripped off his shirt and was like "I'm getting my girl back". xD

[iluvnickjonas210]

woohhhooo!! i'd like to be at this damn party!!!

gosh, i love this chapter. i mean nick shirtless, joe shirtless . the only way it could get better is if kevin ripped off his shirt too XD

lmao, awesome chapter

[snwbordluvr23]

I want 8 more subscribers and 85 comments for next chapter.

(:

you evil demon. leaving us like that with that kind of order. [=

[TMT1905]

sooooo awesome, omg I can't wait, c'mon Joe, get in there!!! Write more, this is crazy good!!! XD

[Briable13]

GO JOE!!!!!

[kellyx2211]

joe has FINALLY come to his senses!!!!!

[UhHoHello73]

Invite me to the party PLEASE!! lol

[lovemecuzimjackie]

oh . my . fucking . god .

omg omg omg this is crazyyyyyyy

i can not waittt

[alohaxahola]

OhMyGod!!!!!!! this is going to be sooo good! your a genius!!!!!!!! =D

im dying for the next chapter!!! =P x

[xShesFreakingOut]

ooooo

this is getting gooooddd

COME ON PEOPLE, COMMENT!!!

(:

[germandreamgirl11]

woaah that was quite sexy ! can't wait for the body shot compation :P :) great eppie ! ♥

[IWantConverse]

weeeeaaahhhhhhh!

lol hot much?

its fucking hot! lol...hmm....joe's gunna get his girl back? and with nick for competetion?

hmmm.....cant wait for moreee!

[TeenScoopNow]

wooot! im excited! make it hott baby! ahaha cant wait for the next epi chicaaa! <3

[kellylynn11xo]

I am so excited for this competition hahah

[potchammy]

Omg, was that a Jonas shirtless contest? I wish I was there!!!! xD

[MartuXa16]

OH MY GODDDDD!!!! This was one of the funniest chapter EVER!!! Nick is sooo good trying to be normal!!! (got the sarcasm?! xD) The shirtless part was hilarious!!! Nick was trying and then Joe just rips his shirt off ad BAM! girls all over him... You know, Trying to get Britt back while trying to make her jealous is not a good plan Joe!! OH this is getting spicy!!! Me loves it!! =D I need the next one!! ASAP!!! lmao Really loved it!! =) And dorky? I'm not mad at you!!! Love you!

[JoeJonasLuvar03]

AHH!!

[ajT15JoBros]

oooo kinky :)

haha that was wow im sooo excited for the next one!!!!!!!

[IPONEDI]

Yes yes . That is quite sexy !! I really enjoyed reading that .

[elaine92xx]

love it

[OCluver93]

omg i loved it!!

can't wait till the next one :)

[MelanieAmanda]

cant waiiittt!! :)

[greenaiko7]

hahaha, that was sortta funny in a weirdish way! lamo

[emluvskj]

HOW THE HELL DO I GET TO THIS PARTY!!?!?!?!??!?!??!?!??!?!?!­?!?!?!?

OH EM GEEE

i like the part when nick rips off his shirt and when he has to keep his hand in his pocket WAY TOO MUCH to be normal BAHA =D=D awsuM!! cant wait !! and can i have nick if britt doesnt want him ????? hahahahahahah

[EmMa1397]

ahh! can't wait for the next onee :D <3

[marriedtonickjonas]

yay GO JOE, Even tho i think your an ass, your kinda changing :)

[fiabombia]

omgosh!!! post now!

[haleyhalo323]

Ooooh... Dirty . . . i like.

[MeLoveNemo]

:OOOOOOOo joe's actually realising something! love love love, can't wait for the next one. wish i could subscribe to hurry things up but i have already!

[dacb36]

oh my god i love it.

[MusicJunkie0688]

OHMYGOODNESS!!!!!!!

[ally5775]

OHH!!! holy hunkey monkey cakes?!?

oh god... as soon as you said Joe ripped his shirt off my heart dropped!! haha!!

Lovedit!

Ah brotherly love.... gotta love it!!

[longachany]

u have to post soon chikaa

every time it gets better!!

:D awesomee

[dontworrybehippie2]

haha, i could just see him standing in the middle of the room and then he rips his shirt of and wind starts blowing his hair and shirt back. okay nevermind, that was weird.

haha, thanks for posting :)

[Boycrazy7484]

ahhhhhhhhhhh (:

more more more!!

omg i was so picturing nick and joe shirtless (; haha like nick doing it all slow and joe just ripping it! ahah im a dork i know (: but hurry and post more!

[ilovetheJoBros30]

i just started reading this.

and it is amazing!

[alyssacc5196]

oooooooo!

more please

[zacsgrl1426]

oooh lala! hahah!!!

I love this freakin series!:D

Everything about it is amazing!

Every episode has me on the edge

of my seat, or on the floor laughing my

ass off because I fell off the chair, lmao

All I have to say is i FREAKIN love this

series!:D

[xoxtiiXD]

awesome!!!!!!!!!!!

[MONICAAAily]

AHHHHHHHHHHHH!

Yesssss ;) haha, but, it's kind of a weird picture of joe ripping off his shirt, then nick taking off his shirt across the room. Eh, I don't know.

I'd kill to be in that party. But it's fictional.

[JaimarKair]

Yeah. It's my story, I do what I want with it, and you have NO idea how much I want that. xD hahahah! but then again, who DOESN'T want that?

[MissLeah20]

HOLY!

God Brittney is one lucky bitch seeing Joe and Nick shirtless. AHHH!

[WakeUpBrittany]

this just keeps getting better and better and better!! !:D

JOE GET HER BACK!

[nbvzyt]

yay!!:)

Joe's getting her back:)

please post soon!

[stella123jonas]

ohmygoddddddddddddd

BOTH JONAS SHIRTLESS.

brittany is alucky one xD

I LOVED THE LAST LINE

isnt it cute? :D

[JBSxStories]

this is intenseeeeeeee! :D

i want moree

i love how this is going

lmao

postt

[fanfictwriter]

ooooo.

nick AND joe shirtless?

hmmm... (;

& i think joe already blew it... well, maybe not.

[iwantskittles]

OH MAN. GO JOE. GO JOE.

YOU GO NICK!! hahaha.

And, I would have my jaw drop if both of their shirts were taken off. I would just gape at them for DAYS.

:)

[allywhitexx]

OMGGGGGGG

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!

I LOVED WHEN HE RIPPED OFF HIS SHIRT.

and COME ON PEOPLEE!!!

stop whining.

shes an amazing writer

and she deserves way more!!

she actually takes a lot of time to give us something to read for fun, she needs to get more things back :)

LOVED IT.

post moree<3

[CeeJayygotOJD]

Holy crap... Intense, dudeee [:

But in a good way! I love it!

But really.... 8? 85? Wowza :/

I guess I'll just ask my friends to read and sub you :]

[JaimarKair]

thanks :)

i don't think i'm actually asking for much, 'cause that's what i always get in the chapters. over 80 and 90 comments/

:)

[CeeJayygotOJD]

No problem :]

I sorta sounded rude! Haha.. Sorry about that! Yupp, I know the comments but I was just saying because it takes me like forever to get even just 5! Haha :)

[kittyprincess51210]

loved it!!

[addicted2jobros]

OMG!!!! that was freaking awesome!!!!!!!!!!!

nick and britt making joe jealous... let's see what willl happen in this competition XD

loved it!! as always chica!!!

[JosephAdamLuver]

OMG! Come on people! Subscribe and comment so she can post another one!

[montanav1]

hmm love ur series but ur a little too demanding about subscribers.... no offence. but whatever ill try to get my friends to subscribe.

[JaimarKair]

yeaah. sorry. :p

it just sucks that everytime the number decreases and not increases? :/

[lillehrocksyew]

nice 1st. =DDDDD

[allywhitexx]

no you're not xD

[Annecb349]

F I R S T

be jealous ;)

okaay i love the body shots *-*

and when joe ripped his shirt

:))