@melianish I like this version better too. I wish the script had been a little better. Drama is always a challenge to write but I think I'm getting better.
Your film was one of the better "earlier" entries that made me go "shoot, this is defintly compitition" lol and having seen countless more newer films since, i have to say, this film is still competitive for a top 10 position. MY ONLY GRIPE with this film is the fact that your extended cut is better then this cut. but at 4 minutes u easily had an extra minute to atleast add in the protest scene right? Anyways i would appreciate your feedback on my film. Best of luck to the both of us :P.
Thanks for the wonderful feedback. Where were you when I was editing! LOL I tried doing some different cuts and this seemed to be the only way to get it to work under 5 minutes. The pacing was really bad if I tried to include everything. It felt too rushed. This shorter version seemed to get the best reaction from people I showed it to.
after viewing it a second time, i feel like i spoke too soon. i would leave as is. i guess it just took a second viewing to completely understand it. anyway nice job.
I really appreciate you taking the time to watch it a second time. This project means a lot to us and we want to do our best to make it good and do the topic justice.
Okay now that you pointed it out, this version is MUCH better then the longer one. :)
melianish 9 months ago
@melianish I like this version better too. I wish the script had been a little better. Drama is always a challenge to write but I think I'm getting better.
meowhissgrr 9 months ago
nice video
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MEOSHABEAN1 3 years ago
Your film was one of the better "earlier" entries that made me go "shoot, this is defintly compitition" lol and having seen countless more newer films since, i have to say, this film is still competitive for a top 10 position. MY ONLY GRIPE with this film is the fact that your extended cut is better then this cut. but at 4 minutes u easily had an extra minute to atleast add in the protest scene right? Anyways i would appreciate your feedback on my film. Best of luck to the both of us :P.
CellarDoorFilm 3 years ago
Thanks for the wonderful feedback. Where were you when I was editing! LOL I tried doing some different cuts and this seemed to be the only way to get it to work under 5 minutes. The pacing was really bad if I tried to include everything. It felt too rushed. This shorter version seemed to get the best reaction from people I showed it to.
dbocaz 3 years ago
I think it is turning out really well. It leaves us very intrigued.
klrqueen32 3 years ago
Good job!
crimsong19 3 years ago
Thanks!
dbocaz 3 years ago
It looks good so far :)
melianish 3 years ago
Thanks for watching. So far so good.
dbocaz 3 years ago
after viewing it a second time, i feel like i spoke too soon. i would leave as is. i guess it just took a second viewing to completely understand it. anyway nice job.
nucleargarden 3 years ago
I really appreciate you taking the time to watch it a second time. This project means a lot to us and we want to do our best to make it good and do the topic justice.
dbocaz 3 years ago
Nice work!
Spective10 3 years ago
Thanks!
dbocaz 3 years ago
overall not too bad, just some slow parts.
nucleargarden 3 years ago
I'd love some feedback. Which parts would you cut down? I have a larger version with different scenes if you'd like to check it out.
dbocaz 3 years ago