I'm liking this vid more and more, the fight is really a big step up in my opinion and some of the shots and use of editing / reactions are right up there. Great stuff Graeme
Nice! Not bad at all. Are you martial artists? It looks like you are. One of you focused more on boxing and the other on kickboxing(?) The only suggestion I have is be more distinctive with the styles; unless you want brawling.
Neither of us are martial artists. I have no training whatsoever and I perform and choreograph the fights. I like to study it done in films but there is always room for improvement...Thanks for the comment!
"I am the king of all dinosaurs." That is destined to a line film students will study for ages. This was pretty wild and the outtakes were even wilder. But there were some good fight moves too.
Not because the ideas were bad and not because the actors couldn't do it, either.
It just seems like you settled for "takes" which were not optimal, regarding pace & timing.
E.g. @ 0:45 the take is quite long (~ 20 secs) but the dialog just doesn't seem to be at optimal pace. David's scream @ 1:01 may have required a better timing.
@ 4:11 = best "text" ("...eye-witnesses of what we just saw." XD
Haha! Great job Graeme. I was thinking you could incorporate more kicks into your fight scenes, perhaps some throws as well to diversify it. For example at 1:46 when you are punching, you could end the sequence with a nice spin kick for a little flash.
This is just a short film. We've almost finished a feature length movie with the same cast and crew called 'The Hope Within' - it'll be out in 2010...But expect more short films like this to appear on this channel!
im ptn it roon academy ina
LewisW97 1 year ago
Canna wait until i pit iss een roon the academy :L :L
btw, your website brings up a common domain ad page
masterkrissytaylor 1 year ago
Your movies are so funny and I love the fight choreography in them.
Fratboy312 2 years ago
I'm liking this vid more and more, the fight is really a big step up in my opinion and some of the shots and use of editing / reactions are right up there. Great stuff Graeme
drunkenmaster1605199 2 years ago
Thanks for the comment Ingram! Glad you liked it!
gdn35 2 years ago
Nice! Not bad at all. Are you martial artists? It looks like you are. One of you focused more on boxing and the other on kickboxing(?) The only suggestion I have is be more distinctive with the styles; unless you want brawling.
Gohaku2 2 years ago
Neither of us are martial artists. I have no training whatsoever and I perform and choreograph the fights. I like to study it done in films but there is always room for improvement...Thanks for the comment!
gdn35 2 years ago
Sure, no problem. For not being martial artists it looked really good! Keep it up!
Gohaku2 2 years ago
Haha love yer vids guys! Well done again!!
xxxx
Nikzzy 2 years ago
Thanks Nicola...Plenty more to come!
gdn35 2 years ago
Lol. Nice one guys!!!
djjcuk 2 years ago
"I am the king of all dinosaurs." That is destined to a line film students will study for ages. This was pretty wild and the outtakes were even wilder. But there were some good fight moves too.
Ozirah54 2 years ago
Again, very believable "movie" fight!
The humor fell a bit short, to my perception.
Not because the ideas were bad and not because the actors couldn't do it, either.
It just seems like you settled for "takes" which were not optimal, regarding pace & timing.
E.g. @ 0:45 the take is quite long (~ 20 secs) but the dialog just doesn't seem to be at optimal pace. David's scream @ 1:01 may have required a better timing.
@ 4:11 = best "text" ("...eye-witnesses of what we just saw." XD
Good clip!
Kijinn 2 years ago
Glad you liked the fight. I suppose the humour is an aquired taste!
Thanks for the comment!
gdn35 2 years ago
That's some seriously harsh pounding. :)
Alexoneil 2 years ago
Yeah, I lay into him in the end!
gdn35 2 years ago
Yes I still watch your clips. The short fim was not bad
ninjaman80 2 years ago
O_O cool fight scene
Cant wait till i make my martial arts stunt team :)
keep up the awsome moves
WushuPeace 2 years ago
Great! Did you make your own sound effects guys?
Taycaoco 2 years ago
The sound effects are the same ones they use in Hong Kong films!
gdn35 2 years ago
Haha! Great job Graeme. I was thinking you could incorporate more kicks into your fight scenes, perhaps some throws as well to diversify it. For example at 1:46 when you are punching, you could end the sequence with a nice spin kick for a little flash.
BeigeFunk 2 years ago
Thanks for the comment. I'm not particularly talented at kicking but I will do my best to add a few more kicks in there!
gdn35 2 years ago
1:12!!!
Another great video!
Congrats!!
animaniaco 2 years ago
Thanks!
gdn35 2 years ago
that one guy look like that other guy from bubble boy
SupaFastVideos 2 years ago
Hey guys, excellent!! When is the film out?
thatmadwoman 2 years ago
This is just a short film. We've almost finished a feature length movie with the same cast and crew called 'The Hope Within' - it'll be out in 2010...But expect more short films like this to appear on this channel!
gdn35 2 years ago
Ha :)
spitfirexftw 2 years ago