I think you need better blocking. You're usage of props and hand motions are okay. oh my, you NEED to slow down man ^_^. You definately need more emotion in your voice your face showed expression and it was okay. But you need to work on how to recite a shakespear before you just attempt it.
Yeah, I take the words way out of context, don't I? What Jacques says with melancholy, I prefer to say with conviction. Gets the point across better for a modern audience. =)
I think this is actually quite good xx
KirstinStalker 4 months ago
Failure Loser. Hahah.
cnnbm1 11 months ago
not bad!! not nearly enough sense of loss in its enunciation but remarkably well dictated.
diddymuck 11 months ago
not that bad!! try it again with iambic pentameter.
diddymuck 11 months ago
americans fail at shakespeare!!
ThomasMaxMutton 1 year ago
Well done. I think?
stevensonrf 1 year ago
SLOW DOWN!!! Also, comical or cynical. Pick one.
jmbladesnake 1 year ago
I think you need better blocking. You're usage of props and hand motions are okay. oh my, you NEED to slow down man ^_^. You definately need more emotion in your voice your face showed expression and it was okay. But you need to work on how to recite a shakespear before you just attempt it.
sorta1990girl 1 year ago
excellent ...I need to recite this.. too
jossdeaddoll 2 years ago
Meaning is more sweet.
Peace.
nosehappen 3 years ago
Yeah, I take the words way out of context, don't I? What Jacques says with melancholy, I prefer to say with conviction. Gets the point across better for a modern audience. =)
ZachsMind 3 years ago