hey great job especially for something that's original... plz don't take this offensively this is just some constructive criticism based on what i've seen from some of your vids but i think you should try some of your songs with someone playing the guitar for you just so you can fully display your voice. Don't get me wrong though you do great with playin and singin but just something u could also try in order to really showcase your talent. God bless you ; )
This was great; you were great; everything was uhm.. great? lol. I think you have a future nevertheless. Stick to what you do and you'll go far(: Keep it acoustic too! Makes it amazing.
well that was great i find bluntfacts comment , rough, very rude i think he is a bulshitting fat wanker who lives a sad dream in the wirld of you tube i read his channel you can turn people into stars grow the fuck up , I am a subscriber to your channel april its great keep doing what you do and dont listen to the fools .
Keep writing original songs there good ^^
darkassassin803 6 months ago
hey great job especially for something that's original... plz don't take this offensively this is just some constructive criticism based on what i've seen from some of your vids but i think you should try some of your songs with someone playing the guitar for you just so you can fully display your voice. Don't get me wrong though you do great with playin and singin but just something u could also try in order to really showcase your talent. God bless you ; )
squishynoodle22 1 year ago
This was great; you were great; everything was uhm.. great? lol. I think you have a future nevertheless. Stick to what you do and you'll go far(: Keep it acoustic too! Makes it amazing.
TaintedToxins 1 year ago
this sux
im just kidding
u rock :D!!
BlackKnight146 1 year ago
Love iiit :) Keep it up, you are great!
AnnisGuitar 1 year ago
I loved the song!
By the way, next time, post your lirics!
Keep Up!
U're Awesome!!
senemig 2 years ago
you look sad :(
DaryllVideos 2 years ago
yes, i wrote it!
Apryllove16 2 years ago
Awesome!
BreakinPRS 2 years ago
Is it your own song? =)
BreakinPRS 2 years ago
Thank you :)
Apryllove16 2 years ago
u shud post the lyrics up too!
is this a personal story hehe? very nice! :)
kevinkahomusic 2 years ago
well that was great i find bluntfacts comment , rough, very rude i think he is a bulshitting fat wanker who lives a sad dream in the wirld of you tube i read his channel you can turn people into stars grow the fuck up , I am a subscriber to your channel april its great keep doing what you do and dont listen to the fools .
slipslimo12 2 years ago
wow! you are really good! keep it up!
svkilpatrick 2 years ago
I consider this to be a rough demo. I have seen lots of them.
But...the camera loves you. And, the LYRICS tell a great story. I'm not sure about that tempo change.
I can already push a melody hook into this song, but I would rather that you discover it yourself.
Regardless, it will be forwarded to people that make career decisions. If they contact you, it's not a joke.
Bluntfacts 2 years ago