I'm surprised nobody commented on this yet. I see a few issues with it but overall pretty good. You're tempo is much lower than 144 and be sure to drop the forte-pianos much more that start on measure 4 of line 4 and continue to the first measure of line 5. I think I hear a few stumbles but they were at lower dynamics so I can't be sure. Also I would recommend loosening your drags in lines 8 to 11, it could be the sound on the video, but it sounds like you're buzzing them instead of 2 hits.
I'm surprised nobody commented on this yet. I see a few issues with it but overall pretty good. You're tempo is much lower than 144 and be sure to drop the forte-pianos much more that start on measure 4 of line 4 and continue to the first measure of line 5. I think I hear a few stumbles but they were at lower dynamics so I can't be sure. Also I would recommend loosening your drags in lines 8 to 11, it could be the sound on the video, but it sounds like you're buzzing them instead of 2 hits.
CodyLee1224 1 year ago