Scribbles on my Heart // Part 1 [60 comments for the next one]

[WorldOFJonasx]

1. I love Joes part!

2. GRR I LOVE THEM BOTH SO MUCH BOTH!!!

3.They gonna kiss =]

[lovedrunkx33]

I loved it, I like Joe's POV quite frankly

[TaylorLautnerfan45]

awesome.. lol another commet xD

[Maiqu20]

Awesomeness!!

1. The end

2. Both

3. Kiss?

[Jemi4thewin]

Omg!!! My new faavorite story!!! :D

1. Favorite part was the end!

2. Umm Both.

3. What's going to happen?! A Kiss!!! :)

[musicxrocks7]

The is really good so far!

1. Fav. part: when they were about to kiss at the end

Least fv. part: when the teacher caught demi

2. i really like both

3. they're about to kiss but then they both pulled away or someone interrupts them?

[Fearlesslovex3]

1. i like all of it xD

2. umm, can't choose! you do both so well.

3. Maybe he doesn't kiss her, but demi starts to gain feelings towards joe.

[catfall]

1. haha,the ending it was really cute xD

2. Demi all the way xDDD

3. idk

[xabcarolina]

morree :)

[jadenegirl]

1 - Fave Part was when they sexually flirted :)

2 - Joe's, it was so good seeing a guys perspective, and him and Nick are funny :)

3 - they dont kiss, but Demi has feelings for Joe now :)

3 -

[hexenkind]

Ahh!

How could you stop it there?! o_O

1. Joe's part ;)

2. Both is awesome!

3. I hope they kiss, but they probably won'T :(

Can't wait for the next part!

[buildabear96]

Whoa! i Think i just found my favorite series, it was very unique i never read a story like this so you are the first :)

can't wait for the next one♥ Jemi

[mzzjudylee]

:O builabear96 actually commented on my video, omg. haha. thank you! that means a lot.

[iluvcookiies3x3]

Favorite part was was the end xD

hmm...hard to choose...i like both xD I glad ur doing it this way, so we'll understand how BOTH of them are feeling :)

maybe a kiss??! ;D ahaha LOL. ♥ed it [:

[TheKlk629]

This is really good! Love it! :)

[alexbatts123]

1.everything i liked all of it

2.both but joes more

3.kiss or hes gonna chicken out and demi is shocked but suddenly starts liking him

[savannahluvsnicholas]

kay i'm the 60th(;

[emilwee123]

1.Honestly i loved it all

2.Demi's but maybe joes once in a while

3.Either they dont kiss or they do and demi

acts all mad but actually felt something then

like is all confused and stuff

[hugsandkisses2jonas]

This is sooo good I loved it I subbed you

galsss!:)

[douniana361]

1) LEAST?!?! HOW RUDE! Neverrrrrr.

Favorite.. Demi kissing her phone... haha I've done that :p

2)DEMIIIIIII but I think you should go into Joe's one in a while but you don't always have to redo the whole episode in his POV. :)

3) Joeyyys gonna kiss her! :p And she gonna secretly LOVE it.. But act all POed...

[sojj6614]

1.joe and demi the part in the hall way :)

2.idk ;i like demis because that how i think since i'm a girl & : what i like about joe's part is that it helps me to understand how guys think so idk!

3.demz gonna be like what are you doing you freak get way or puch him or hopefully they well kiss :)

[SecondhandFire]

1:my favorite part was when Joe pulled her in.

2: i like them equaly. but if i had to choose one i think it would be demi's.

3: i really dont know but i cant wait to find out! :)

[MissCharlotteX13]

Not the best are youu joking it was great!

Loved the way youu ended it a need to see! the next one now lol haha no rush tho !

1.Loved all of it

2.and both but i liked joes a little bit more i dont really no why i just do :PP

3.there gonna kiss (hopefully )

OR Demis gonna go "wat the hell are you doin?" and then joes goin to be like "ehhh ...BYE " then runs away haha x

[JonasGomezSwift284]

1. Jemi, of course./That you ended it there. haha :)

2. I like them both. It tells me what both of them are thinking and feeling.

3. I don't know, but I'm excited for the next one! :)

[NickJonasGurl99]

1:do i have to choose?xD

2:I think Joe's it kinda helps me understand guy's minds xD you're good :)

3:demi is going to lean in to kiss him all seductive, then lean back and smirk saying nope not a chance than walk away,flaunting those hips (;

[PuertoRicanBratz]

1. Loved it all! :D

2. Both :P

3. Idk? They might kiss?

Cant wait for the next onee :D

[kaiTlynxo2]

loved it! can't wait for the next one

[mileycyrusrules5988]

1.loved it all

2.Demi

3.I know they wont kiss

[cristy922]

1. fav ; all of it :D. least ; 6:02 :( why ? COS THERE WEREN'T ONE. :/ why'd you stop there ?! D: lol.

2. joe's. his one's hilarious xD. haha. :)

3. they're gonna kiss :D . but seeing as Demi don't like joe like that, well maybe she'll like slap him or something xD

[shatteredYou]

gosh, be lucky i won't kill you for stopping there! :o fucking cliffhanger man. ;) haha

1. i don't know, i like the whole chapter. mostly, how you said he 'panicked'. cute. lol.

2. demi's pov , just tiny tad better though. ;) they were both great. :)

3. he's going to kiss her, and she'll like it (hopefully) but maybe get a bit irritated and pull away? haha hope not though. xD

[shatteredYou]

oh wait, i forgot, he might just chicken out and let go of her. xD hahaha

[kuhadiza]

1. when someone *cough* joe *cough* wrote back :D and the ending!!

2. both!!

3. there gunna kiss

[kitkatkirsty]

1. Fav was every bit of it:)

2. Joe's

3. I really don't know :s

[superfan15vane]

please let them kissed!!!! I'll love that Joe kiss her really passionate and Demi kiss him back! hehehe Like Joe's pov.

[BTWILUJB]

lol does boys read seventeen magazins?

1: my fav part was at the end it was so funny... When Demi said that. I didn't hate any of the parts in the story

2: I more like Joe's, cuz that he's part is more like WHAT HAPPEN NOW.

3: I don't know

[TribeSpirit]

AH! NO NO NO! Why's you stop it there?!? I HATE YOU! But at the same time I LOVE YOU!!

haha! Would another bribery get us the next part? hehe jk.

And thank you so much foi including me in the dedication!

1. Favorite part: Hmm, ALL OF IT! Least favorite: non.

2. Honostly, Joe's. But I think you should continue writing it in couble POVs. It's makes it more interesting.

3. Perhaps Demi would slap him? haha I hope not. I don't really know, but I'm sure something grat would happen.

[elsie411]

KISS!!!!!!!!! AWESOME!!

[ElisaMelody]

1. all were awesome,the end part better

2. Hmm...I think u should use both or only Joe's

3. idk...but im sure there will not be any kiss haha

[SarahAlwaysKnows10]

1. fav.: the ending.

2. joes

3. no clue

[CampRock0321]

1. My favorite part was the iphone part haha and no least favorite!

2. uhh Joe :)

3. I have NO idea lol

[xoxoflipflop12]

1. Every single second :D

2. Both but, joe's a little more :)

3. She gonna tell him to "Get bent" xD

Love Thar'70Show.

[worldofchancesxx]

KISS! KISS! KISS!

[peaceexbitch]

wow! that was great!

cant wait till the next part!!(:

[haleyisabelleelder]

1. Honestly, it might sound like I'm just being lazy and not trying to think of my favorite part, but seriously, all of it was my favorite. AMAZING job. Definitely a story to get hooked on :)

2. I liked both, but Joe's was my favorite :)

3. She's going to freak out x)

cannnotttt wait for the next one :D

[HayxBerry]

hehe this is haleyisabelleelder on my accout that I actually use.

just to let you know xD

[xxxImaginePeacexxx]

1.EVERYTHING WAS AMAZING

2. Joes but it was all incredible

3. Demi won't give in, but if she does she will go crazy and get mad right after. Or maybe somebody will interrupt them.

I DONT CARE! WHATEVER YOU DO WILL MAKE ME HAPPY

This is my new favorite series thank you sooo much for making this

it was so so soo great and its only the first episode. I don't usually watch Jemi storys so keep it up. Can't wait for the next one!

[NileyAndJelenaLove]

SHXTT ! Lovedd it Judyy ! ive been waitinqq FOREVERRR! ahh nxt pelse?

[ohmyjemilover16]

*singing voice*Amazing! ha

I loved it :)

[hotmiddlechild002]

1 ending!!!

2 joes!!!!

3 joes gonna kiss her or shes going to slap him and get away!!!!!!

[NileyUniverse]

1. Every single second :D

2. Both but, joe's a little more :)

3. She gonna tell him to "Get, bent" xD

Love That'70Show.

[disneyfanaticxo]

Yay another story for me to get addicted to! lol. Write when yew can :]

[CrazyNickJonasLuvr01]

when demis tlkin to miss a haha:)

demi's has more detail but joes is just more inviting...sorta if that makes sense?

Miss A is goin to wlkin into the hallway, or his track coach, or nick, or her moms gonna call, or like someone else said there gonna kis, shes gonna slap him, or shes gonna run away

^wow that was a lot ^

[XxPittPenguins94xX]

1. all of it//none of it

2.I like them both : )

3.idk kiss?

[Catsrockm]

amazing!!!!!!!

[bookworm1880]

1) Favorite-Uh...the "now you're so desperate you have to hook up with inanimate objects" line. That was great, though the whole thing was fantastic. :P

Least fav-The two seconds of distraction I had while trying to figure out if I'd ever heard of winter track. :D

2. Joe's. :) It's so cute and funny. Demi's probably gives a better idea of what happens, though...I would keep hers first.

3. Demi shoves him off, to my great dismay. :P

I can't wait for the next one!

[iluxoforevea]

loveeee it

[ashadaily1996]

that waz amazing i luv how udo joe and demi's povs there so cute 2gether.

[topular578]

amazing!!!! cant wait for the next one!!

[Chiwowwow2]

1. Joe trying to be assertive. lol.

2. Demi's. She's more relatable obviously.

3. He'll pull away. He has to leave her wanting more. (:

[iMileySelenaDemi]

1. favorite was the ending(:

2. i like demi's more. but i like how you have both of the point of views!

3. i think demi is going to push joe away xP or nick walks in on them.

[trippskeee]

1. All of it. :D

2. I like them both actually! :]

3. Maybe they'll kiss, or Demi will slap him before they can. x]

[Debbierockz67]

amazing i love it :D cant wait for more

[timberwolf0083]

1. i really like it all

2. errr...they both just mesh well together

3. shes going to slap him and joes going to get nick for giving him "such great" advice.

[DemiHeartJoe]

:o

1.ENDING! NO JOKE!:D

2.I love them both! I can't pick!

3.JOE IS GOING TO KISS HER!

HURRY WAT WITH THE NEXT ONE PLEASE!

[LibbyJonas]

omggg...fabulouss!!

[Paramorefreak0594]

ooooo that was good

[mizzfionaa]

holy this is awesomee (:

[itssparkling]

WHY'D U HAVE TO DO 60 COMMENTS?! you know your gonna get them all tomorrow:P haha. awesomee:)

mya<3:)

[getdownandgetoff]

1. Favorite part/least favorite?

Last bit! :D

2. Do you like Demi's pov better or Joe's?

Both!!

3. What's going to happen?! :O

Hmmm... I don't know. I looooove this story though. I'm glad you have proper grammar and spelling. Like, SO glad hahaha. :D Update soon!! <3

[NazForReal]

YOU GOT MY USERNAME RIGHT! :O

1. Favorite part was the ending. So cute!

Didn't have a least favorite part.

2. I like both. I seriously can't choose.

3. THEY'RE GONNA MAKE OUT IN FRONT OF EVERYONE! :O

[cantreadme27]

awesome!

[sunakit]

I love it

[xxloleverxaxx]

awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

[x3xiiloveiitx3x]

Incredible. Like always. You have no idea how much I love this story.

[sunakit]

amazing