American Idol Songwiter Contest Entry You Can Feel My Heart

[augfive]

no one should be denied thier dreams! Im just saying..keep writing and improving.. andgood will come of it, but, some companies and aspects of this bussiness are dishonest..know that as u create and dream ps ..sorry my typing is so bad!

[augfive]

the soings picked for the top 20 are all by pros and are recorded professionally and arranged.. they are all affiliated and work with executives and/or musicians and judges from the show... its a money making scam..NO cfance for an unknown to get in.. harsg truth  but truth it is

[tinkermusic]

What can I say, one can still dream no, true or not, you can't deny me my dreams

[novanine9]

Paul would love this one...and so do I! Nice chorus "feel my heart" passage. Have you thought of just recording this with a couple of clean 60's esque "rick" guitars & back up vocals...ala..."Here, There, and Everywhere"? That kind of arrangement might really bring the shine in this beautiful song. Cheers!

[tinkermusic]

Good suggestions. BUt with my limited arrangement skills I'm hoping that the producers of AI will see what way to make this work best as well. ANd I'm ready to write more songs as well. Lots to do so little time haha

[gwithadream]

Beautiful song! With the right singer, it could be a hit! :)

[tinkermusic]

Really? Great that people might think so. Means so mcuh..Hope producers agree with you. WOuld love to make a name for myself, certainly not going to do that as a singer haha

[gwithadream]

Yeah, really. You're a great writer. :)

[Melvis2000]

Thanks for coming to my site and braving through my bad vocals.

I like this song and think it could be good for any of the contestants. Love the music to this song. Great job bud...

Melvis

[tinkermusic]

No problem, thks for listening to mine. I am no singer, just a songwriter, hoping someone discoers our songs. Thanks

[Missybear4u]

hi, well I think it has alot of potential. Depending on who would sing it....different arrangements would arise Im sure. Nicely written, not sure if it fits todays music, almost has an early 80's feel, but again they rearrange everything anyway. I do like the song.

Great job..and good luck, I entered , I wont play second title for your love. My original.

Figured why not. So good luck, mine isn't even in the right style, not slow and mushy at all.

[tinkermusic]

COuld be ture about not the right arrangement for today. And when you see people like Cook do BIlly Jean the way he did, then there isn't any song that COULD'NT work for AI

[JohnSMcCormick]

Good luck on the contest. I'm keeping my fingers crossed on my entry.

[billykharl75476]

Good job very well written and good structure. you are right it is a tough year to break the top 2o. Take a listen to my song and let me know. Again good job.

[tinkermusic]

Thanks for the nice words. Listened to your entry and like it very much. Good luck to us all.

[jwipe]

Really nice! Feel free to comment on mine as well.