I love the effect of the chalk board. It is a very creative idea and it fits the "school/education" feel. The story was fun too and I thought that the music during the part where the spoons are discovered missing was very dramatic and funny :). Good job.
this was great! the story was creative and so relate-able. I think students would love it. The pictures were simple but informative and gave it a nice laid back feel. I loved it!
So so cute! Extremely creative and fun! The only thing I would say would be not to have the text covering the illustration - which was probably hard if your picture wasn't cropped at all and you couldn't use the picture with more room on the edges to fix it. So cute though! wow
LOVED THIS! i think this is my favorite so far! i love the use of the chalkboard and the cut-out people/utensils?...you have a really good reading voice too.
I liked the illustrations a lot! I thought they were really creative. My only suggestion would be to make the text not cover the illustrations. Good job!
I liked it a lot! I thought the illustrations were so creative. My only suggestion would be to make it so that the text did not cover the illustrations. Good job!
I love the effect of the chalk board. It is a very creative idea and it fits the "school/education" feel. The story was fun too and I thought that the music during the part where the spoons are discovered missing was very dramatic and funny :). Good job.
NatHowells 5 months ago
this was great! the story was creative and so relate-able. I think students would love it. The pictures were simple but informative and gave it a nice laid back feel. I loved it!
sjacque2 5 months ago
So so cute! Extremely creative and fun! The only thing I would say would be not to have the text covering the illustration - which was probably hard if your picture wasn't cropped at all and you couldn't use the picture with more room on the edges to fix it. So cute though! wow
MrsReid2011 5 months ago
LOVED THIS! i think this is my favorite so far! i love the use of the chalkboard and the cut-out people/utensils?...you have a really good reading voice too.
chelseamarieshort 5 months ago
I liked the illustrations a lot! I thought they were really creative. My only suggestion would be to make the text not cover the illustrations. Good job!
0004katie 5 months ago
I liked it a lot! I thought the illustrations were so creative. My only suggestion would be to make it so that the text did not cover the illustrations. Good job!
0004katie 5 months ago
Amazing Video Lani ... I LOVE IT !!!! ;)
riajspy 5 months ago