I Just Wish It Would End!! Chapter 1 [[ It Wont Happen Again!!]]

[analicia12334]

OMG HES A FUCKING ABUSER, KILLER, AND AN ASSHOLE!

[TxtTalk168]

oh god

[pooters929]

I freaked out when you said her mom was now dead. plz wright the next one.

[HillaryAnn11]

wow!! Great job!!

[JonasDemiLove]

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[JessieJonas69]

wow!!

[elaine92xx]

omg it so sad but i can wait till the next one

[567sweetmuffins765]

woah

that freaked me out just reading that

that def a talent u got

keep it up :P

[Joejonasizhot]

WOW!! That was amazing!! You have AMAZING talent!! I seriously cant wait till the next!!

[pupzNdogz]

wow that was intense loved it though

[kaylaeee12]

wow.

[ginapm121]

thats so wrong but please post more i want to know what will happen!!!!

[bamlvr01]

oMG wow this is really good please post more soon

[musics0in0my0soul]

where do you get the insperation for stories like this its crazy good as if im there watching it happen!

[JOEJONAS94]

Wow thanks, and i love to write, songs, poetry, stories so it just caomes to me, thanks!!

[chocolategirl996]

i loved it

and can somebody tell me what is the name of the song in the vid?

[TaterTot97]

wow. just wow. this is AH-MAZNG. i think we all know someone is going to save her. or at least we all hope...

DUN DUN DUN DUHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

lol im kinda hyper.......

post soon love

[JBstorywriterxox]

omg. plz post again soon!! i love it but its soo sad..i was almost in tears.

[busie711]

I love it! Some one needs to help her! She's gonna get knocked up by her dad!

[jonaslovers597]

omg that would be drama!!!!!

[busie711]

i know right?!

[fungirl4343]

oh wow I was in tears thats so sad.I feel so sorry for her.Next one please.

[dnaluvsualways]

some guy strong guy better stop this mess and treat her right.....POST another one PkZ

[joejonasfan96]

omg thats crazyy!1 post more soon!!!!!

[jbumpus001]

hurry

[BeatlesLover200]

WOW!!!!

[skipmccue]

ITS GETTING SOOOOOOOOO INTERESTING

[haleylc]

Ohhh great story!!! Please post soon

[opbwithapples96]

OMG THAT WASS AMAZINGG!!!

more like freaking now!

[JemiStories]

i love it hurry with the next one!=]

[iluvdogs1212]

addicted on the first letter of the story woah! more!!!!

[partypumper1]

one word: MORE!!!!

[maliz831]

can't wait for the next one!

[JBfan4ever123]

more plzzz post the next one plzzz

[jonas3luva]

omj soooooo sad!!!

in the next chapter plezzz inrtoduce the characters so i will know who is in the story!!

[JOEJONAS94]

I will dont worry

[Jonas4Life12]

OMG!!!!

Ur amazing!

Usually when people describe their fathers raping them in stories, it never seems as realsistic as you make it seem! great job!

[JOEJONAS94]

Thanks!

[kyliegoodrich2013]

I NEED MORE!!!!!

[J3SSiKiiNSx3]

whoa! u write so well i could imagine that which was a bit scary but i liked the story

post more please

[nina3220]

W0W!

I'm Already Addicted!

[star96skater]

whoa!!!

i loved it!!

more soon please!

[TDL43]

wow post more plz and the dad is really killer

[mrsnickjonas092294]

Luv It!!! Post more??? Plz?!?!?!

[iNCREASthePEACE]

omj! intense!

[JonasDirtyFantasy]

moree (:

[TraLaLa195]

looks goood!

[ParamorexFreak]

whoa! killer dad!

loved the story!! <3

[JoeFliesMyHelicopter]

That was soo sad!!!

[JOEJONAS94]

do u like it/...?

[JoeFliesMyHelicopter]

Yes it is very emotial & utterly amazing but somewhat horrific but extenuating joy is filling my body every time I read this extatic story. Please post antoher story as good or even extremely better than this amazing, graphic paragraph!

[xEmoSarahx]

POST MORE!

[FruityEnglishGeordie]

plz post mor....nd i red it str8 awy nd thr was more nd i strtd 2 read agen nd der was less?

anyway plz post more!plzzz

[JOEJONAS94]

sorry i didnt mean to i put up soem of the next chapter and i had to remove it asap so yea

[Davinder190]

post more please

[icanwritestories11]

wow that was intense!!!!!!!!!!!! awesome but really sad i wanted to cry

[ludavid4everurthebes]

omg awesoomm plz post more though y didnt u make an intro? its okay though

plz post more today!! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz