Nice work overall, but the acting was... meh. Your characters didn't seem to follow any sort of thought process. There was no sense of desperation, and no sense of panic or fear. I understand that this is a piece of a whole, and won't make total sense alone, but still. If you were actually in that situation, would you walk calmly? No.
It was also somewhat hard to believe that the masked man failed to notice BOTH assailants. The first, perhaps, but it was a little too convenient on the second.
incredible you guys did a good job with this one the actors were great and the editing was so on par with hollywood cinema that it actually looked like a blockbuster, nice wrk
It could use a lot of work and go through a few revisions. Also you should have at least put some type of generic story story to it like you did in Transaction.
@MulticonProductions Yeah I read it but even still the shots and editing seem they could have been a bit better, along with some of the shot compositions. I wanna say Brett filmed this, i'm not sure though, because I can see his style of close ups in it a lot. The way the camera moves doesn't seem too dramatic, it looks more like a mistake rather then going for an effect. The effects are cool, I just wish I would have seen a puddle of blood after Andre got shot. It's decent but could be better.
@joeybmx1 Yeah me (brett) filmed this, michael edited, i think some of the shots as michael is running away came in nice, and i think the quality is good with it as well!
@joeybmx1 Hi this Michael, the guy who edited this. Yes, this could have been better. But on the same token, it could have been worse. Andre's first blood hit was a monster to track because I had no proper tracking points and after hours of working on that single shot, I honestly just wanted to finish it and move on. Just keep in mind that we are in no way professionals. We are learning and as we learn we get better. Thanks for the comment, though. I'll definitely make a note of it
@ohthatskoo It's just constructive criticism, I don't mean to bash anything or offend the video in anyway. I go to school with these kids so I know it's not professional, but it's still alright. The effects were really cool you guys did a pretty good job with the effects and I think that's this videos strongest point so keep up the good work with those. And no problem, anytime.
Great talent its always good to see teens doing this kind of stuff and to do it this well, its beyond me. Amazing job all of you, the acting, the editing, the sound, the camera work, incredible, looks great.
Hey, this Michael M. (Guy who edited the video), great job on sound design Brett. The video "feels" a lot better now with your amazing sound design. Keep it up. Oh, and, if anyone wants to see some of my stuff check out my channel. We'll be having more videos up soon. (Sorry, about shameless ad, haha)
Keep it up bro. I'd love to hear what you think about some of my videos. Let me know your thoughts.
ZFilmzor 2 weeks ago
Nice work overall, but the acting was... meh. Your characters didn't seem to follow any sort of thought process. There was no sense of desperation, and no sense of panic or fear. I understand that this is a piece of a whole, and won't make total sense alone, but still. If you were actually in that situation, would you walk calmly? No.
It was also somewhat hard to believe that the masked man failed to notice BOTH assailants. The first, perhaps, but it was a little too convenient on the second.
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howexpertassistant 4 months ago
Oh no!!! Mike's dead!!!!!!
WolfgangXohmbey 5 months ago
incredible you guys did a good job with this one the actors were great and the editing was so on par with hollywood cinema that it actually looked like a blockbuster, nice wrk
17REDBLAZE 6 months ago
Good work mate ;)! Like the editing... looking forward to see new vids ;)
EpicActionTV 6 months ago
OOPS I CRAPPED MY ANTS !
Airickk2021 7 months ago
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bojava 7 months ago
@bojava
ma'am that is very rude and very hurtful to ones self-a-steam
MulticonProductions 7 months ago
Good workkkk!!
AngieWangie85 7 months ago
video cool , magnific and nice ^^
fivezion 7 months ago
It could use a lot of work and go through a few revisions. Also you should have at least put some type of generic story story to it like you did in Transaction.
joeybmx1 7 months ago
@joeybmx1
This got ended abruptly there was a point then a cop came and told us we had to leave and took our guns did you not read the description?
MulticonProductions 7 months ago
@MulticonProductions Yeah I read it but even still the shots and editing seem they could have been a bit better, along with some of the shot compositions. I wanna say Brett filmed this, i'm not sure though, because I can see his style of close ups in it a lot. The way the camera moves doesn't seem too dramatic, it looks more like a mistake rather then going for an effect. The effects are cool, I just wish I would have seen a puddle of blood after Andre got shot. It's decent but could be better.
joeybmx1 7 months ago
@joeybmx1 Yeah me (brett) filmed this, michael edited, i think some of the shots as michael is running away came in nice, and i think the quality is good with it as well!
MulticonProductions 7 months ago
@joeybmx1 Hi this Michael, the guy who edited this. Yes, this could have been better. But on the same token, it could have been worse. Andre's first blood hit was a monster to track because I had no proper tracking points and after hours of working on that single shot, I honestly just wanted to finish it and move on. Just keep in mind that we are in no way professionals. We are learning and as we learn we get better. Thanks for the comment, though. I'll definitely make a note of it
ohthatskoo 7 months ago
@ohthatskoo It's just constructive criticism, I don't mean to bash anything or offend the video in anyway. I go to school with these kids so I know it's not professional, but it's still alright. The effects were really cool you guys did a pretty good job with the effects and I think that's this videos strongest point so keep up the good work with those. And no problem, anytime.
joeybmx1 7 months ago
@joeybmx1 stop hating the video was good to meeh
AngieWangie85 7 months ago
Its good to see you're definitely improving from when you did Transaction, which I also thought was pretty good.
Nachal4 7 months ago
Good job! Way fun to watch! cnt wait to see toby myers whats it aboutt?
discochick4020 7 months ago
great shit fellas. but when andre gets shots, the appears and then disappears
Kid27Kool 7 months ago
@Kid27Kool Yeah, the blood hit was a monster to get to look right in terms or tracking. And, well, he didn't want to ruin his shirt, haha
ohthatskoo 7 months ago
nice vfx dude! :)
Stefman398 7 months ago
Editing was good.
Sound was good.
Effects was good.
all around 8.9 out of 10. My complaint to short, no point to it, but you did say this was a scene so its ook! good luck on toby myers!
ISneezeMoney 7 months ago
sickness guys!
hitsuya16 7 months ago
yo this is pretty good. good luck on ur upcoming 1st film
yungtman 7 months ago
GOOD JOB LOOKS LIKE A MOVIE TRAILER
MrNrepetto 7 months ago
this is great
SuperLuigiBros1 7 months ago
Sick!
TehTwitcheh 7 months ago
oh wow theres always that 1 dumb bum that dislikes the video =/
sad to see, i think this is a good video.
BrettnButter 7 months ago
Good work, i see your stuff is way more professional now.
I enjoy theses videos alot more. Getting better from all aspects of the game.
Brettending 7 months ago
Great talent its always good to see teens doing this kind of stuff and to do it this well, its beyond me. Amazing job all of you, the acting, the editing, the sound, the camera work, incredible, looks great.
UBAmandaFan 7 months ago 2
@UBAmandaFan Thanks for the comment, we appreciate the positive feedback. (I was the editor/actor, haha)
ohthatskoo 7 months ago
Nice music Michael Donners a beast!
Brettayy 7 months ago
Good editing, the effects look mighty real i enjoyed the music and sound as well.
Great video all together def a step up from transaction!!
aubrey 7 months ago
@aubrey I appreciate comments like these, thanks!
ohthatskoo 7 months ago
SHIT WAS SO SWEET.....GOSH. HOMEBOY GOT OFFED. THATS WAT IM TALKIN ABOUT. youth have so much talent i swear. MAD PROPS TO WHOEVER INVOLVED
16THESAINT 7 months ago
Hey, this Michael M. (Guy who edited the video), great job on sound design Brett. The video "feels" a lot better now with your amazing sound design. Keep it up. Oh, and, if anyone wants to see some of my stuff check out my channel. We'll be having more videos up soon. (Sorry, about shameless ad, haha)
ohthatskoo 7 months ago
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Wow THE best work so far im just mad it ended like that!! damn police!!
DanteVailII 7 months ago
Wow THE best work so far im just mad it ended like that!! damn police!
DanteVailII 7 months ago
FREAKING AMAZING!!!! yo, when are we going to plan out the next video where I can serve as a cameo :)
LilNefty 7 months ago
So...when's the release date for the full-length feature film? haha. This is really awesome. I was honestly on the edge of my seat.
OhMyMariel 7 months ago 6
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aubrey 7 months ago
@OhMyMariel Will be released soon, a trailer is set for a few weeks.
MulticonProductions 7 months ago
This is why you guys are like my favorite youtubers keep up the vids i'm really looking forward to the short film
RoboticMonkeyPro 7 months ago
AMAZING! THE ENDING WAS LIKE BAM! .... i want more GIVE ME MORE!!!!!!!
windhero100 7 months ago
Really good i enjoyed ;)
prettyboi101 7 months ago