Convulsion (Halo reach machinima) Part 1-(HD!)

[droidcaptain]

nice job man i loved it :D

[0ut51d3R]

Just wanted to say I LOVED your Opening.Felt just like a movie trailer or similar.

Also,the camera-work on this part feels superior to the 2nd.More movement being the reason.I happen to SERIOUSLY enjoy movie-trailers IRL.So the trailer-like "feel" of this part makes it better than the 2nd-part,for me...

I should mention that I watched some of the 2nd before switching back 2 this part.So it may skew my perspective some...

Anywayz,Thanx much 4 the Recommend.Totally worth checking. : ]

-Peace

[LBOGaming]

@0ut51d3R Thanks for the feedback!

[ANNIHILATIONist]

Obviously YT limits how many letters i can use in the comment box, so if you want a more in-depth "review" of your mach, ask me in a PM.

[ANNIHILATIONist]

Few Audio delays, like the closing security door.

Robotic Voice needs better "Mannerism's"

Needs more emotion.

Need more realistic conversations, to self and others.

Sound effects slightly overplayed.

Could have better voice actors.

All in all, Easily the best Zambie mach I've seen in a LONG time.

Though, like RedbirdxStudios said, not the best mach overall, but a VERY good one for an up-and-coming machinima director/actor.

Please note, I compare mach's with believeability of real movies/clips

[aaronlee31]

finally another zombie good machinima! In my opinion this is better than rapture so far.

[devvasudev1]

it just feels like dead space this is so awesome

[legoman587]

this is cool

[HALOHATER666]

THIS IS NOT SKYRIN ThsuS IS GJS AND GAY

[RedbirdxStudios]

30 people got bullshit from the computer.

Had to.

Anyway, let's begin. You're camera work is good. There are better cinematographers, but your good. Probably better than me. The sound effects all work nicely, although once again I wonder why everyone hates the sound of the magnum so much they need to replace it.

The story is nice. Easily the best zombie machinima I've ever seen. (Not the best machinima period mind you. That title goes to Rise of the Spartans) Your voice actors are solid

[LBOGaming]

@RedbirdxStudios thanks! did you see part 2?

[barrazaalfredo98]

This is possibly the best Machinima ive seen no B.S.

[cooldonkeyfish]

This is amazing!

It's great to see a machinima from someone that actually makes sense - combine that with fantastic voice acting and 'camera' work and this is just... wow.

[TheBoon24]

nice i watched this a long time ago

[KJS0FLY]

i dont play halo but great job :) subbed

[SoundOfDnB]

Really nice,

[retardedcow23]

This is pretty good. NO! Rephrase. It's FANTASTIC! Especially for your first Machinima!

[MrBlahblahla]

best halo reach machinima ever... of all time

[jorden452]

Ever think of putting it up on Machinima? Its a good anime so it might get you some exposure :)

[setachi5]

wow you guys call this epic? its good but its too much like dead spaces style of gameplay and there is much better out there..........woops troll moment sorry.(hehe still posting though.)

[Samster123able]

Nice work man that was a great machinima! A refreashing storyline from all the usual spartans vs elites. I may be interested to help out with part 2 if there is a part i can play in it thats free write on my channel or send me a email my gamertag is on my channel if you wanna add me :)

[91pancakes]

this is the 5TH time ive seen this

[91pancakes]

I

WANT

SEQUAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!!!!!!!!

[117dnl]

omg this is so f***ing epic!

[Diab668]

This is the most awesome and epic Halo Reach video i've ever seen! :)

[TheGls02]

like this if you want part 2 soon

[LBOGaming]

@TheGls02 part 2 is coming soon i promise!

[McRaymond100]

@LBOGaming Great Job Friend.

[HamsterX6]

Holy crap! That was awesome. Can't wait for part 2!

[CyberScottParker]

i want 2nd part!!!!! :D

[messwithfuntion]

nice nice be sure to inbox me part 2 :D subbed

[halodanny360]

epic



[14DarkhaN14]

wtf orgasm begining but cool in general :D

[SuperS0nic644]

awsomest halo machinima ever great job cant wait for part 2

[Daren621]

I think Youtube should just remove the dislike button.

[firelord100000]

omg where the hell is pt 2 ?

[bob2bobert2bobertson]

Imagine if this is how all infection games were.

[bob2bobert2bobertson]

I liked and favorited. I usually don't watch random vids people send me, but I like Machinma so I gave this a chance. This is very well done, good job!!!!1111!!one1!shift11!

[mousey165ify]

AWESOME

[SuperHahaha1313]

awesome. period.

[ThePillowlamp]

Amazing considering its your first Machinima. Keep up the good work bro!

[LOKBLUDOM3N]

EPIC AS FUCK!

[Megastar8271]

Epic video! (Subbed)

[GoldCheeze]

So awesome! :D

[THEAELEADER]

not bad

[RogueAngelFilms]

Good video can't wait till the next one

[AKOJ93]

Well, i must admit, i am waiting for the next episode...

[jamie007pwnz]

Well I thought this would be something stupid because of spam... But it's actually quite good. But the one thing I thought needed improvement is that we need an intro. I don't like watching a series if it's going to start at the climax.

[CyberGenocide]

Oh and i forgot to mention the music fantastic, nicely played in time and appropriate for mood.

[CyberGenocide]

the voice acting was poor and unenthusiastic, however the production was fantastic and the editing was wonderful, the story has kept me interested enough to watch part 2.

[whygod1105]

Well done boys, very well done =)

[mrhmeister]

Very nice wish I could help but my xbox is fried :(

[KRmalyon]

aweome 

[0070Xedilian]

This would be better if the spartans were... The Very first elite skin.

[apachiedelta1]

wow this is actually pretty scary!

[NobleSixOne]

well its far better then Rage, that's for sure.

[Shradnown]

One of the best machinimas I've seen in a long time, nice work

[hilltopdub]

whattup star wars voice

[glardian966]

Voice acting is a little cheesey and sometimes its hard to understand the voices over the loud music. May I suggest subtitles?

[D4K44R1]

Finally, a machinima other than RvB that has a measurable level of effort and viewer enjoyment in it. Great work guys! :D

[HaloStrategist]

this was pretty fricken awesome man. Its about time we get a GOOD halo machinima. Well... besides red vs. blue of course :D

[Selsiuss2]

Pretty good.

[sedman211]

Here's my feedback: SWEET shit. If you guys need a mature, extra actor, I'm your guy. GT is BulletExodus.

[x0able0x]

for your first machinima this is awesome

[svenskanton]

nice one mate 10/10

[ParchedInk]

Pretty damn good... Keep it up :D

[Cowpwnz]

So...

Much...

WIN!!!

[LBOGaming]

@Cowpwnz

Thank...

You...

Bro!

[PSP3000PLAYER]

Just make a few more videos and there will finally be a Halo movie. I loved this!

[PIEgunz]

Good.... to much talking though.

[TwFManiacal]

This was fucking awesome...I'm jealous I wanna be in it!!!

[shadowvowed187]

HALO COMBOAT EVOLVED ANIVERSERY!!!!

[DarkRebbelX]

it

[DarkRebbelX]

try

[DarkRebbelX]

should

[DarkRebbelX]

you



[DarkRebbelX]

its really fun

[DarkRebbelX]

spam

[book2face]

This is good, very good. Keep it up.

[ticklemeelmo357]

ok im not impressed though

[Wollweepop]

wow that is very good!! I SWEAR ITS AMAZING!

[superschrute]

i like it. it would be pretty cool if he had like a group with assault rifles and they were just backs up to a wall mowing the "zombies" down. you dont see that enough in zombie films. great job though

[dertyboy55]

nice video



[TheMalici0usM0nk3y]

Very well done. :)

[cedricgabionza]

i should have some sort of creepy narrator to fill the mood

[blafargusnation]

AWESOME!!! for your first Machinima

[IronSpiderman2099]

great video cant wait to see the rest I wont point out anything bad leave that to others. Its just simply great

[Sylan247]

Very Good. Well done

[bl4ckblood]

The computers were not very computer like

[bl4ckblood]

Did not like the console voice..

[ThatsMrFrank]

very atmospheric

[mcjester321]

aqdaq

[kharlmichaelbalgua24]

i like the map. and the machinima is cool =D

[booyahhayoob]

There is NO WAY this your first Machinima!

[RDrMythBUSTers]

pretty cool sorta like dead space

[johnman570]

Very impressive. Acting was excellent, the story line kept me hooked. I can't wait for more to come!

[pizzagrenade]

Clearly you like taking opinions from complete strangers because of how crucial some people can be. I will be completely honest right now. I just have to say... Wow. I was surprised at how good this video was. There was a slightly noticeable thing I will point out. I noticed that during some close ups the clip didn't even start yet because his breathing started late. It isn't all that bad but you could fix that easily. Just pointing that out there. I am subbing as well.

[khaaaled2007]

That was great, can't wait for part 2 

[wattosacrim]

only aimbot can do that shit. lol.

[XmegaprrX]

nicely done. my only critique is the talking bit that Tailsthehacker01 mentioned.

[wbhurt01]

Did some of your ideas for this machinima come from the Dead Space series (just wondering)

[LBOGaming]

@wbhurt01 ......yes :)

[XxsgtTeasp00nxX]

Wow...just... Wow! I have subbed, can't wait for part 2! I agree with the others though, add some more survivors so it doesn't get stale, use some other maps as well and maybe include some scenes where it's not as dark but apart from that, simply amazing!

[connosd]

Alright, my view, if you want one from a complete stranger, is that while the presentation and plot is great, you should reflect on Portal or Dead Space. Most people complained about the lack of backstory and character interaction, so that's a start. Add a few moments when the plot can thicken, for example, add a few more human survivors and give the unnamed main character a Halo-related plot, same with all the others, and allow a few minutes of mid-combat chatting. Combat gets tiresome soon.

[MrGerardocardenas]

cool vid

[chickenlegs429]

The musics a bit to loud at the end.. I couldn't hear the A.I Talking.. But the video is great. I subbed.

[ODER66MIKE]

its pretty good

[RayetWolf]

So, what's this supposed to be about, running around killing Zombie Spartans? I can do that in Resident Evil 5 Mercenaries.

[Zero12387]

Why did you send me this I don't know who you are, stop sending random people videos. Not saying it's a bad video, but stop sending to randoms.

[eyejah0]

That was good you should add some zombie sounds when their chasing gu. oh and take the shelds off the zombies

[halobioniclefan]

Part 2 isn't out yet??!!!!

[1CTXXTC]

i could edit :)

[N1njaassass1n09]

Subscribed. you guys are awesome

[YugiohDuelistEkritan]

that was epic. really well put together. can't wait for part 2.

[crazym16dude24]

Man that was awesome. Keep em comin bro.

[TheSuicider66]

One man, alone on a ship, filled with zombies. Fuck the west wing, GET TO THE ESCAPE PODS!

[USAirForceJacob]

epic man thanks

[SGmattilus]

epic

[c0l4p4rty]

i really love the way this looks, like a real horror film

[ultimategamer61]

pretty good

[piyu5h]

loved it bro keep em commin :)

[RaYtAy151]

Everythings awesome except the audio. The Audio is not completely balanced, I barely heard the background music, and the first 3-4 gun shots in the beginning were not completely synchronized with the actual footage.

[ToaKai3456]

Awesome voice acting.

Wicked effects.

Epic viewpoint switches.

Super voice acting again.

O_O

Maximum awesomeness

EEEK.

[animefinalfantasyix]

wow amazing story, its interesting and how the voice acting is put is really nice, the camera angles are also great! keep it up =)

[blafargusnation]

AWESOME!!!

[Suraya293]

this was actually pretty good

[TheColdburnMaster]

This is SICK

[SpecRLegend]

great job guys.



[Trunksmad]

This was pretty good. Lil to odark to see, but overall pretty good.

[Blazuela]

Better than first machinimas I've seen :)

[Tailsthehacker01]

You wanted feedback?

#1- At the beginning, through the mask of the Spartans holding the plasma sword was a little blurry/fuzzy. I don't know if that was intentional, but I figured I would point it out.

That, and though the lines were well written, he doesn't have to say everything he thinks. He's the only sentient life form aboard the ship, nobody hears. (according to the computer at least). And trust me, If i said everything I thought i would be b**ch slapped every time i saw someone annoying.

[LBOGaming]

@Tailsthehacker01 thank you ill will make sure this is reported to my team and we will implement this in our next episode thanks for the feedback! :) and we hope you liked it :)

[Tailsthehacker01]

@LBOGaming Trust me. Anything as well produced, and related to Halo will always get my attention. : D

[Lukeclooney]

@LBOGaming dont listen to that asshat tails it was perfect

[MegaCrapass]

@LBOGaming dont fucking listen to tailsthehacker01 hes one person loads of other people probably thought it was good just the way it is. so dont change it over one person view

[ashproductionz]

great mate :)

[Robro345]

would like to see the full one!

[Runeshot654]

Impressive! Keep it up. :)

[FaCeHaCkEr101]

cool

[SwimFreek0022]

I didnt finish watching it, but it looks good.

[Percent1hundred]

Alright... You hooked me. How often are the episodes coming out?

[LBOGaming]

@Percent1hundred we're currently working the script for part 2 it should be out by mid november or so...

[FluidDeconstructor]

@LBOGaming

Too bad 3rd person animation in Halo is not as good as in Crysis 2 or Battlefield 3...players in Halo look like they glide on the floor, not actually making contact with the ground.

[mynames13013]

awsome pretty damn good!

[MrCracker21]

Wow dude this was actually pretty good. Makes me want to play reach again.

[Zantanian]

This kicks ass! I love RvB but this is amazing. Holy crap! Subbed4sure!

[MrConfuzer2001]

hes like its nok or never i hope i dont die

[MrConfuzer2001]

ya i got a message from u sayin watch this and why should i watch it

[commentperson14]

PICK UP THE SWORDS

[ES21007]

@LBOGaming

Very nice. Say, how do you send theses PMs to random people, and why did you anyway?

[TheBonepicker]

+10 for voice acting. Great work

[ediskrad327]

Zombies in SPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA­AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAC­E

[ChaoticMaverick]

very very cool

[speedenforcer918]

Great Machinima! 5/5.

[AveryOMG]

this is the first good thing i got in a message

[syluxsamus]

I received this in a message, and I must say this is really well done!

[izze97]

thanks for the message1

[haugotownable]

if halo made a zombie mode like mode... im 90% sure it would be like this..

[bioniclefan1995]

wait...why are humans chasing humans?

[LBOGaming]

@bioniclefan1995 it will all be explained later

[RigaudonAS]

@LBOGaming That was great. Thanks for the message!

[sverredennye]

@bioniclefan1995 well, their not humans, not anymore. they are dead, but alive on the same time. they are the undead.

[zackk710]

Very cool! :D

[SkulkingMEDIA]

My God this is Amazing, The Lighting, the Acting, the Vpices are great except I think the computer voice could use some tuning in a few places (you can still tell the "human-ness" in it), but dont get me wrong, THAT WAS AWESOME!

[Alexiandro0]

That's some rad bottomless clip :D

Nah, JK, loved it, great job and I enjoy seeing more of you.

[JustMillz]

Nice job :D

[supertaco6]

FANTASTIC work! My favourite bit was the first 30 seconds, they were great!

[SeanKZ10]

someone sent me this in a message saying it blew their mind im thinkin' "must be good". Well, YOU JUST BLEW MY MIND TOO!

[featheredice]

Why would a computer terminal countdown the time until it opens a door?

[Simplepeepee]

EPIC!

[SuperTechmarine]

coooooooooooool

[ThePrivateAwesome]

Awesome!

great work!

[austintimpe]

Its ok make it longer though