Jenny's Lament "Was it you I slept with???"

[icisue]

Absolutely superb! I loved the English accent too - lol

~Sue~

[LeSaMilano]

ha! this was great - fantastic delivery Patti and I love that it was derrived from a real story.

[pi314too]

thanks Leslie! :)

[gandersourcefilms]

i'm upset now. she told me i was special. bugger! john :)

[pi314too]

lol , John, I just noticed this message from you. Thought I answered it a year ago hehe...And yes you are special :P

[DirtPrincess1013]

This lady has way to much free time

[pi314too]

lol

[kristiansson]

The english accent makes me laugh (in a good way) ;-). Is that how we sound like to Americans lol! Keep up the good work!

[Pattipi]

lol Ok Kristian..and here i thought that accent wasnt too bad hehe...check out my new vid with beula the bag lady..theres an accent for ya hehe ;)

[tigrankalevian]

Eres una mujer hermosa y muy expresiva. Viendo tus videos siento que me hablas directamente. Sólo quería que sepas que disfruto esta compañía que sabes prestar a pesar del desconocimiento y de la distancia.

[pi314too]

This one came though in Spanish Edgar...how did you translate to English before? :)

[tigrankalevian]

I know a little English

[tigrankalevian]

You are a beautiful and very expressive woman. I see your videos and I feel that you speak to me directly to me. I'm sorry, I do not speak English. To only it meant you that I enjoy you.

[pi314too]

Thank you so much, Edgar! What a sweetheart you are. I have an Aunt Blanca from Columbia too :) so I find it cozy that you wrote to me. Is this being translated into Spanish somehow? If it is please let me know how you were able to translate it on youtube. I just subscribed to you...I invite you to subscribe! Warmest Regards, Patti pi

[Furnifur]

This was great! Thanks for sending it my way. How long did it take you to come up with it>? Recliner Chair LOL And it's so true!!

[pi314too]

Hi Furn Glad you liked it. I thought I responded to your comment weeks ago but I guess it didnt take. I wrote the poem one day when I was working in a little soap store my sister used to own. It was boring in there so I had a lot of free time.I think I wrote most of it then came back to it on and off for a couple of weeks.:) They always say to write about what you know :D

[aleishar]

Love love love love it!!! You really made this poem come alive to me. I could picture her vividly. :D Thanks!

[pi314too]

Thanks so much, Aleisha. :) Glad I could take ya for a lil mind ride

[RoastDuck666]

pooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo­ooo u ha

ve any pies?

[LeftofCenter7]

OMG...this is great. Love the accent too ;)

[pi314too]

Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it :) Patti pi :)

[LairdRB]

Got to this through Renetto, via Geriatric and Oc5. Very good, and super delivery.

[pi314too]

Thanks, Laird! Glad you enjoyed it. :) I have a musicians channel under the name Pattipi too :)

[aimenhoodle]

THis has to be my all-time favorite YouTube video. LOVES it! You rock. 8-)

[msmd5672]

That was great!!!

[clockworkhorrorshow]

Wonderful. You had me laughing.

[Broshmosh]

Your British accent is actually pretty good compared to some I've heard.

Mine beats it though =P.

The way you read that poem is awesome. You put life into it. Makes me want to read one of mine out x3.

[pi314too]

Thanks for commenting Broshmosh! Im glad my British accent isnt too bad lol...Its hard to know when you're raised in NY and live in the Arizona desert. :) Come subscribe!

[sneakypreacher]

Another fatdwarf56 subscriber...Your poem was very well performed and hilarious as well. Great job!

[pi314too]

Thanks Sneaky! Come subscribe! Would love to have ya,  Peace pi :)

[kesikes]

Patti excellant poem and recital, look forward to more. Thanks also to fatdwarf56 for the recommendation.

[pi314too]

Thanks so much. Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks to fatdwarf56 too. :) Peace, pi

[pi314too]

Thank you:) So glad you came by.  Peace, pi

[yorgathecroat]

Nice job.Very well written and delivered.

[pi314too]

Thanks a million, Yorgathecroat. Glad you enjoyed it! Come subscribe! :) pi

[oneiblind30]

AWESOME!

[JuMpThEcOuCh]

WEENER!

[Sportiboy]

I also found this video through fatdwarf56. I love this poem and you voiced it so well!! 5 stars!!

[pi314too]

Thanks Sportiboy! With Smiles, pi

[vidular]

Nice and you have a great sense of humor.

[creativefisher]

I love how you told us the story before you read the poem, it made it much more interesting and of course I had to hear the whole thing. I LOVE IT!!! The passion, facial expression, and animation you gave brought it to life! 5 stars!

[pi314too]

Thanks Creative, Feels good to hear that from someone who's art I respect so much. :) You are art walking. :) Peace, pi

[Urgelt]

Clever, clever. I liked this!

Nice to see a poet who knows what meter is - and has a sense of humor - and is alive. Trifecta!

[pi314too]

Thank you so much, Urgelt!!! :) And thanks for subscribing. Im alive , Im alive! :) :)

[ekornet123]

Hi Patti.

I realy love your poem,bravo:)

[aimenhoodle]

I had to come back and watch this again. You are so very talented... does YouTube have a section for your favorite favorite videos? Man, you rock!

Peace,

Aimee

[pi314too]

Thank you sooooo much. :) Ya made my night. With Smiles,  pi

[positivesue]

That is going straight in my favourites!

[pi314too]

Thanks Sue! woohoo. :)

[jeseryn]

You are so talented :) Please keep posting your songs and poetry!!

[pi314too]

Thanks Darlin...youre a sweetheart. :)

[LadySeneca]

I found this video through fatdwarf56.  Brilliant! You have such a way with words that I must see more. Consider me a new subscriber! :)

[pi314too]

Thanks so much, Lady Seneca! And thanks to fatdwarf56! pi :)

[wiav8r]

Awesome! Had me giggling!

[pi314too]

thanks a million..come subscribe Waiv8r if ya aint yet. :)

[fatdwarf56]

Great work. And you present it so animated. Keep it up.

[pi314too]

Thanks, Maurice! :)

[Grojk]

nice!! :)

[CoquiDave]

LOL... "women just store 'em in the hall???" You're dating yourself! <G> Good job!

[pi314too]

Er..um..think ya mighta missed da point, Dave...just like a man..hehe (wink) Glad ya liked it. :) pi

[CoquiDave]

Nah... Didn't miss the point at all. Just saying, these days??? Women's brag more than men by a long shot! LOL...

[Minniver]

Brava!!! Brava!!! I always love your work you are a comedic genius. :) Keep 'em coming :)

[hmarty]

Awesome Patti. 5 stars. Wish there were 6! More, more, bravo!  Peace

[Clereece]

That was hilarious! And you Patti Pi, have quite a poetic flare and talent for story prose! 3 thumbs up! I am your subscriber now :)

[periurban]

Brilliant, as ever!

[pi314too]

Thanks, Peri!!! Brilliant is such a dazzlin' word. My head is explodin'. Woohoo. :) pi

[leahknits]

wish i was as eloquent as you so i could tell you how awesome i think that was but all i can say is WOW!!!

[pi314too]

Awww shucks, Tanks. :)

 pi

[Marihani]

This was great! You didn't say a single naughty word, and yet my naughty little mind got the message loud and clear! Hehe!

[VioletKitty411]

Patti, this is fabulous...funny yet so true!  You're so very talented, my poetry is pretty bad, actually :-P Love it!

[pi314too]

Thanks, VK! I really appreciate you. So glad you like it.

Peace,  pi

[ImaMuffin]

that is way too funny. Are you published? You really have quite a mind for the sort of thing. Your style reminds me of the impossible lovechild of Edgar Allan Poe, And Shell Silverstien. this is going in my favorites.

[pi314too]

Thanks Muffin! I just self publish my songs but Ive never submitted my poetry for any publication. Thank you so much. Im more than flattered by your comparisons. :)  pi

[aimenhoodle]

That was absolutely AMAZING! Are you channeling Dorothy Parker? 5 stars and I'm subscribing... can't wait to hear more from you. Peace...

[pi314too]

Woohoo, Dorothy Parker! Im likin it. :) Thank you. Thank you. So happy to have you as a subscriber! Peace, pi

[BNDS9]

That is an excellent poem Patti. :) Erotic and Funny. I always wish I could think up poems.

[pixelchick]

That was a great poem and you are a wonderful writer/ storyteller. I love your expressions and the way your voice inflection shifts to convey mood and sarcasm. BRILLIANT!

[billybigun64]

fandamatastic!!!

[FableForge]

Amazing, no teleprompter and I didnt catch you reading either, you have a great memory and talent for declamation! Five-stars!

[pi314too]

Thank you, Fable. Yeah, I usually memorize all my songs and poetry. Probably cuz I spend so much time dancing around with the words in my head. :)I used to do theatre as a child and had to memorize long scripts so dat prolly helps too :)Trained my brain to retain. So glad you enjoyed it! Peace, pi

[FableForge]

Aha, teather background! Well, it shows! My respects!

[FreeWingz]

Thank you for sharing this and letting me know about it. It's such a clever way of using words that you've managed to express with such rhym and rhyme:)

~FWz~

[pi314too]

Glad you liked it FreeWingz, Thanks!

 :) Peace, pi

[IXGertXI]

Perfect delivery! Well done,Patti. I enjoyed it throughly.

[Jackel444]

Wow, this is a great one, Patti. VERY FUNNY TOO and extremely well written. I was subscribed to you but now I notice Im not. Probably was Jack in one of his moods. He reeks havoc whenever he can. Told you it was a mistake to hook him up on here. lol Just kidding. You know he luvs ya. :) Dont know how I got off your list though. Keep it up. You're great. The world is waiting for you.

[eclecticart]

Hi pi, Glad to see this is now attached to the exhibit. You are so great. Hope a million people see this wonderful piece. You are so versatile. Terrific. I wish you much success.

[pi314too]

Thanks! :) :) :)

[Kirsti555]

Patti, bedazzled again by your Brilliance. You've managed to paint a masterpiece in my mind, that's incredible and an all around winner! Minniver's Snowball contains beautiful, shinny crystals like you. Thanks for posting. R.

[pi314too]

Thank you , thank you for all the wonderful comments. :) Im blushin'

pi

[firstmoondancer]

YOU are fabulous my Dear! Standing ovation!!!! More like this one, more, more!!

[tushygalore]

Brrrrrrrilliant!!!! I lovelovelove this!

Lady, you are SO subscribed to!

[pi314too]

Woohoo!!! Thank you. Thank you. :) With Smiles,  pi

[eclecticart]

This poem is terrific! Flow and timing is superb. You are so talented and funny. Wonderful singing voice too. Love your videos!

[superlunary]

When I want to see a smart, funny, intelligent and talented woman...I come see you, Pi! Love it!

Best Wishes, Superlu

[pi314too]

Awww shucks, tanks! :) pi

[danivloger]

Poetry is alive and well,Pi.Thank you.

[SSGLuceyGirl]

Awwww Thank you so much for sharing this poem with us. I've really enjoy it! BTW - you are amazing story teller!

Tons of hugs - Mel

[pi314too]

Thank You , Mel!

[spinnergrrrl]

Bravo! That was wonderful, I was laughing so hard and your time with your expressions are just pristine.

[pi314too]

Thanks! Great that I could make ya laugh! Woohoo!

[hippyhillbilly]

Pi you are absolutely very talented. Awesome poem. Thanks you for sharin' this. You glow from within ;) Peace & Health to you and yours

[geezerart]

We vote you NUMBER ONE! Best POET! Great storytelling!

Thanks for sharing this we us!

Mr. & Mrs. GeezerArt