Always love the feel of an open tuning, it adds a flair of majesty that standard just can't quite reach.
The first chord of the refrain is phenominal. Really shakes up the flow in a good way. The progression of the bridge/chorus (not sure what it is in this structure) is lovely, and your voice is pleasant as well.
I'm viewing you on DKMaher13's channel. I can definitely see why you are the featured artist. Besides being a magnificent singer that could most likely sing anything and make it sound good.. that is one gorgeous song you have created. Love the chord changes on the pre-chorus where it drops to a minor sound and you start working your chords up the neck. How did you come up with that? That is one sweet lead in to a very catchy chorus-CAPTIVATING! *****
I wish I knew your real name, so right now I could say "wow, yourname, I like it, I really do". Such a sweet song. But... can I make a suggestion? Have you tried breaking down the tempo? I don't know, I feel it would sound even more beautiful if it was way slower. I really liked the lyrics.
Another great one. I love your songs. Keep up the amazing work my friend. I love to write also so I really appreciate originals. All the best, kyle
kylemarney1 1 year ago
Just awesome
RyanUnplugged 1 year ago
Great song! - and I'm very envious of your fantastic singing ability
skylark51 2 years ago
This is really nice. Love it! :)
JulieVaughn 2 years ago
Always love the feel of an open tuning, it adds a flair of majesty that standard just can't quite reach.
The first chord of the refrain is phenominal. Really shakes up the flow in a good way. The progression of the bridge/chorus (not sure what it is in this structure) is lovely, and your voice is pleasant as well.
Oswlek 2 years ago
I'm viewing you on DKMaher13's channel. I can definitely see why you are the featured artist. Besides being a magnificent singer that could most likely sing anything and make it sound good.. that is one gorgeous song you have created. Love the chord changes on the pre-chorus where it drops to a minor sound and you start working your chords up the neck. How did you come up with that? That is one sweet lead in to a very catchy chorus-CAPTIVATING! *****
matthewjameshardin 2 years ago
nice job! 5 from me!
debbieswinyer 2 years ago
Very cool song, Awesome songwriter, I'll definitely be checking out more.
5/5
RyanUnplugged 2 years ago
Nicely done. Love the voice.
tomvband 2 years ago
Listening right now.. first off , great choice of chords, your voice is amazing! It's fun to post a brand new song...
Oh and I love your voice! did I say that? please keep writing.. you are very very good! I am rambling... in short Great song!
afrost59 2 years ago
I wish I knew your real name, so right now I could say "wow, yourname, I like it, I really do". Such a sweet song. But... can I make a suggestion? Have you tried breaking down the tempo? I don't know, I feel it would sound even more beautiful if it was way slower. I really liked the lyrics.
SwivelHawk 2 years ago