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[StephenHalloran]

I like it- but I don't like to explosion--- being a avid reader of Brautigan--- I think of him as the most gentle of poets... I think it would better if nothing happens... nothing can be a real cool...also... I don't like her neck opening up and sharing words towards the end--- I think that that has a Pez like quality but it is not with the spirit of Brautigan---- if you changed both of those things I would love it!

[MaribelSantoyo]

Ok. this is sorta fu##$. I see where you're going with the gun shot.

[rocketqueenz]

i think brautigan would love love this

and laugh a bit

[rocketqueenz]

amazing.

[AliceNread]

It was great. It is too bad his poems are so short.

[lifezkind]

sorry, but no

[Yarrowstalks]

any constructive criticism?

[lifezkind]

i appreciate the recording of Brautigan reciting the poem and the graphics are done well, but the image of what appears to be his head blowing up is just too disturbing considering the way he died. i'm also not sure what such an explosion has to do with the poem.

[gnomelover]

I have to agree. could you explain your reasoning for that image?

[Stumbleine689]

I find this to be alittle creepy. But still pretty sweet.

[amoyoy]

i hate when that happens