One Leaf

[andres66682]

good good video

[buzzdrumbc]

this is a little rough mostly in the drum department still great vocs hopefully the finished product will bring more drumming options i cant pinpoint what it needs but i'm sure you will settle this beat down and add some creativity but goo job on the one day demo!

[killadelta01]

Nice

[CRTEMB]

i keep coming back to listen....

[JulianP1992]

For me this is my favorite song of the three that you guys have, i really like the drums, the rhythm is very original ,but I think you should coordinate more the sound of the guitar with the drums and give a better ending to the song, not just stop. Anyway good job guys, I'll look forward to the final version....Good luck!!

[KORN555666KORN]

Hey Jeff

It's ok if your still sour after out spout a few years ago but you could respond to my inbox .

I mean you send me a message about your new band out of the blue then no response c'mon

let's talk :)

[Artistsofvagrancy]

@KORN555666KORN All right, lets get it all off our chests, right here, right now... First of all, you know EXACTLY why I haven't talked to you for years, and you can't expect me to simply forgive you for that, I mean COME ON, you yourself HAVE to know that you pushed the line WAY too far, and you thought that you could keep prodding me with your imaginary stick, but NO, ENOUGH IS ENOUGH, I snapped, and with good reason, you know you deserve nothing from me.

Jeff

[KORN555666KORN]

@Artistsofvagrancy I'm sorry I'm actually pissing myself you win :)

By the way great music :D

[Artistsofvagrancy]

@KORN555666KORN Anytime :P

[Sonyphilia]

Your trying to make super radio friendly music. but failing

[Artistsofvagrancy]

@Sonyphilia Sorry dude! We are continually trying to make our songs better, and we have made drastic changes to this song. But still, your reasons why you don't like it would be much appreciated. Thanks either way! :D

[SubwayStar7]

I really dislike the drums, and the vocals could use some work but they have potential, however the guitar is really cool to me. Overall I think it's pretty cool.

[theflyingebit161]

@SubwayStar7 I disagree, I really like that drums. Very uplifting, and gives the song a great flowy upbeat feel, that the guitar also fits well with. But IMO it needs some variation, like at the 3:00 mark they should slow down a bit to match the rest of the instruments. Just my opinion, but otherwise a great song :D

[SubwayStar7]

@theflyingebit161 I can see what you mean, but as a drummer, I just don't find it very creative. It's also rather repetitive. I dunno, maybe I'm just nitpicking. But nonetheless I agree with you, it is pretty good.

[Artistsofvagrancy]

@SubwayStar7 Yea dude, I know what you mean, as the drummer, I know I REALLY need to mix it up, and I do have plans for that in the future, but at the time, I honestly just wanted to get the demo done because I was under some time constrains and pressure, so yea, I basically just did the drums with nothing fancy, and in fact, we are recording in a day, so fingers crossed, it will be better. :P

Thanks so much dude!

[theflyingebit161]

@SubwayStar7 I'm also a drummer myself (:

[scarfacedjd]

Good song bro

[TheNebulaangel]

See I like this one, even though as you say it is a demo. :)

[callum6069]

great but not my kinda music. you have alot of potetial love the vocals and drums, guitar can do a little more work tho :)

[SlightEcho]

Very nice song, keep it up :)

[JosiahConroy]

Lyrics at great meaningfull however at the start you need to sound confident the start of the song has to grab attention that's all I say keep that in mind and best of luck hope to see you in jb hi-fi someday

[tojamon]

great tune !!!!!

[stomachlining]

like the demo's rawness... & your signature voice

[werandomnize]

It's cool, kinda like guano apes. But you guys gotta try keeping it diverse, otherwise you won't have many fans.

[norijlesforever]

well the background is acciptible but you shouldnt go to system of a down videos and invite people from there cauze we like the singer to sound at least a lot more evil and screaming so i do think you suck.

metallica forever

system of a down forever

linkin park forever

this never

[Artistsofvagrancy]

@norijlesforever Yea that's cool, there will always be people that like it and people that hate it, and I'm cool with that. Thanks! :P

[ONEOFHAM1]

I never knew an ostriches eyeballs were so big...

but this is a good demo, even though it is a little rough

[Piggurt]

Real catchy. As you said, the vocals aren't clear, but overall it was enjoyable. Good luck on the recording !

[yakakuzei]

this is good stuff as for as demos go,id love to hear the finished product. keep up the good work!

[mick4226]

just as good as the others keep it up

[jaggalojay1]

you can go somewere with this keep it up !!

[skall95]

cool , i like the music . fast-paced song

[Artistsofvagrancy]

@skall95 Thank you!!!

[DanDev319]

As the first comment said, it does sound promising and im looking forward to hearing a full version ^^

[Artistsofvagrancy]

@DanDev319 Alright! Thanks so much!!!

[scair7331]

Even as a rough sounds very promising

[Artistsofvagrancy]

@scair7331 Ahhh! Thanks! And yea sorry about the extremely rough sound! :P