"Harvey's Immaculate Donut" - Original Short Written and Directed by Jacob Pauwels

[DanHerdegen]

Excellently done. Aside from a few audio issues it seemed solid enough. I personally know Mr. Turpen and can say that this was well played. (He is by far one of the least snoody people I know.) Take this experience as a learned one, audio can be the difference between excellence and mediocrity.

4/5

[maynardwest]

I disagree, I think that audio is the difference between a boring movie that you can sit through and a boring movie I cannot.

[senothron]

looks pretty awesome.

[dragonbreath87X]

Good work, Jake, turned out great. Like the ending credits

[maynardwest]

Creative ending credits.

Poor audio, I can hear the blips everytime there is an audio track change. It sounds at time that you turned up the audio gain to a point where there was way to much hissing. Some of the dialogue was poorly written mainly "waitress, I think I will partake in a doughnut".

It looks like you slowed down the falling coffee mug in post, when you should have recorded at a higher frame rate.

The bedroom set up seemed setup and not like he actually lived there.

2/5 sry

[EllyThePhilosopher]

Hah! I love the end credits, very cute. Good job.

[skcrary]

This was a lot of fun! Way to go, Jacob! You and your team did a great job.

Excellent ending; it took me by surprise.

Also, your music choices were fantastic.

[azusastreet]

Nice job guys!

[guitarmysoldier]

woo! I dig it. I think it turned out great. I like the added story parts too.

[KillFilmVol3]

Awesome man, it turned out great. It was awesome working with you.