Episode 2, Part 1: "I'm So Sorry", The Weakness

[Corgiixx]

The dialogue is much more enhancing in this one, I DO NOT like the priest though... it is such a blah actor. It doesn't seem like she can get into the part, and play the role all I see is a female pretending to be a boy.

[toolgirl150]

hahaha! Yup - our stuff is rough in a lot of places, but our biggest complaint was here. We had to recast. Ep 6 has new improved priest! LOL

[EUGENEH0RNSWAGGLE]

Really enjoy the dialog to these episodes and the black and white enhances the atmosphere to it all...

Eugene

[toolgirl150]

Wait til you get to episode 3... all bets are off... ;)

[EUGENEH0RNSWAGGLE]

:0)getting there for sure!!!

[PuppyZwolle]

"For sleeping with boys?"

heh heh. Served nicely chilled... the line not the boys.

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[toolgirl150]

Ah yes, the dance, the wordplay.... the seduction.... cim75 helps me out with those turns of phrases.

[PuppyZwolle]

Oh the lines help but it is the way you bring them that actually have the impact. Or did cim75 tell you to say it like that?

[toolgirl150]

No, he's just a word-ophile. I hear how things should come out in my head, sometimes weeks in advance. while cleaning the tub one day, J & Z's first verbal interchange popped in my head. I want to put that in somewhere!

[PuppyZwolle]

And THAT is why you should not work on vids all day. You'd miss out on stuff like that.

It is has to fester like a nice parma ham. Grow molds and ripen. Develop a life, inteligence.

[dogpatchdebbie]

THis movie is fantastic!!!!

On to part two:)

very cool:)

[toolgirl150]

thanks debbie! Big thanks also to DeLisa - now I have a ton of comments to go through! Yay! :DD

[TheRonGordyShow]

Whoa... Brilliant! I have been watching these, however when I watch them, the sit is akweays undergoing maintenence, so I havent been able to rate or comment, so I came back this morning, time to be sure and let you know how cool I think this is.. I'm hooked.. -RG 8:00AM 3/20/08

[toolgirl150]

thanks ron - sorry I'm so behind on comments - yeah, YT is so buggy sometimes!

[PuppyZwolle]

I'm so impressed.

Kevin MacLoud from kmmusic metioned you.

I got to watch this. You really know how to tell a story. I'm so curious where this is going.

[toolgirl150]

Thanks so much! KM mentioned me?! Wow - I'm going to go check that out! I'm glad you enjoyed my creepy little story! :DD

[PuppyZwolle]

This is where we first met.

Two short months? Feels longer. At least a year. At least a year of following what you did to get 'here'.

Strange how time seems to loop. We traveled back in time and into the future and even at the same time. And still there we are, hére we are. Again. In this spot.

Strange to be in a place where something began that has not ended yet.

[DelisaProductions]

This is a very exciting series. All the elements are there, top notch. Love the androgynous characters, script, acting and music score. On to part 2.

[prismaya]

Fantastic dialogue. I'm really enjoying this!

[jenzatron]

Oooooooooh. "for sleeping with boys?"

Going to watch part II now :P

[toolgirl150]

I'm so bad... ;)))

[SteveNGarth]

Interesting Lauren I'm going to watch teh next 2 parts... Keep this up!

[cim75]

Very satisfying to see it up and running!!!!!! One teensy thing, I'm a Mc not a Mac, no matter how much I aspire to having a better operating system, LOL. This looks and sounds fabulous!!

[toolgirl150]

Oh fuck me! I keep screwing that up! I'll make sure it's all fixed in the notes and then flog myself not to do it again! Crap. I thought I had it straight. Its you and Kevin that screw me up! Mc and Mac. Mac and Mc. I wonder what the historical difference is? I bet you know!

[cim75]

In the transition from Scotland to Ireland the A got dropped, why I do not know, LOL.

[captainfury2007]

I love your story telling.  I am so pick when it comes to the delicate balance between horror and intelligence. You pull it off with ease. 1,000 stars.

[toolgirl150]

thank you so much capn! Oh - and you make a hot ZOMBIE! I agree. The BEST sci/fi horror (or any thing for that matter) has to have a solid story. Relying gore or effects alone doesn't work. Oh - and remember - alot of the delicious linage was written by cim75! :DDD