Hey man, nice to see an honest video :) sadly this is going on in all of us :) Love the lyrics. The razors edge reminds me of the path of the warrior. The war that goes on inside all of us, every day. Ultimately the war with ourselves. The war with our own mind, that wont let us have a moments rest. Well in till we concur it that is. Loneliness seams to be the new epidemic these days. Well put my friend ;)
To be honest i'm not the artsy type, I see things in black and white and without much depth when it comes to art. So i thought it was creepy but does cause me to have a feeling, so i guess it is art.
The lyric is very good, in the music I'd hear more life, more energy in the chorus. The voice of a dying man is good in the verses, but I'd add some sharp guitar samples and some aggression in the vocal line of the chorus.
@Abrimaal ...thanks Abrimaal, I'm just starting to play around with Garageband, I was kind of thinking the same thing....I kind of threw it together in an afternoon....
<3 wow,for your first creative project for us all to share,that really is amazing!you truly are blessed with creative ability as a gift from God :))) i really enjoyed it,the black and white,the camera angle,the music and your echoey voice.big smile!!! huge!!!!!!...love and peace. <3~<3~<3
Loved. It. I read it about 3 times and showed a few friends also! I'm really glad you did this and i hope you are in no way going to stop. You put it out there and that's the first step. I look forward to seeing this grow. Tell us your thoughts and what creativity boils in you. Let it out, because if your other writing is anything like this..you just gained a fan! Good luck! If I see anything in this... EyeseeArt..
@TheOwlking1996 ....thanks Adrienne, you gave me the confidence....I used Garageband...Ambient vocals, Deep Pad 03 synth, and 70's drums...it became so much fun the more I got into it....I have to work on the vocals next time....project more confidence, but I found a new outlet! Yay!.....my MacBook is going to get a work out.....thanks again....hope everything is going well for you.....
Very nice, trippy video and really creative poem there Jamie! I love the audio and the slo-mo visuals in this. The black and white looks like it has a slight tinted filter to it? The sound on this is crystal clear. Glad you uploaded this one. I hope there's more to come! Nice to see you making more creations :)
@Fenner1976 I just sent you a dm....I borrowed your technique of b & w and slow mo....I just used the mike in my MacBook, not even my condenser mike...this was so much fun actually.....thanks Gav....
EXCELENTE
CACHABAS1 1 week ago
@CACHABAS1 ...thankyou...
SleepWhenIamDead 1 week ago
cool video !!
TomCoteMusic 2 weeks ago
@TomCoteMusic hey thanks, just messing around
SleepWhenIamDead 2 weeks ago
*applauds*
I know those feelings well.
Well done. I'm looking forward to the next.
Ti8TGOWBB 2 months ago
Hey man, nice to see an honest video :) sadly this is going on in all of us :) Love the lyrics. The razors edge reminds me of the path of the warrior. The war that goes on inside all of us, every day. Ultimately the war with ourselves. The war with our own mind, that wont let us have a moments rest. Well in till we concur it that is. Loneliness seams to be the new epidemic these days. Well put my friend ;)
workwithnature 3 months ago
@workwithnature thanks for your thoughts, they mean alot.....thanks again.....
SleepWhenIamDead 3 months ago
good video =)
AllisonLyricistSA 3 months ago
Nice work Jamie... dark poetic theme & very artistic vid!
Thanks for sending my way!
BjavaBluesStop 3 months ago
nice
sonicguyh213 3 months ago
good !!
ratayska 3 months ago
@ratayska ...thanks so much!....
SleepWhenIamDead 3 months ago
nice one!!!!
tagzee 3 months ago
To be honest i'm not the artsy type, I see things in black and white and without much depth when it comes to art. So i thought it was creepy but does cause me to have a feeling, so i guess it is art.
911theinsidejob 3 months ago
@911theinsidejob ....thanks...I was kind of in a creepy mood when I wrote this, so it worked, hehehe....
SleepWhenIamDead 3 months ago
The lyric is very good, in the music I'd hear more life, more energy in the chorus. The voice of a dying man is good in the verses, but I'd add some sharp guitar samples and some aggression in the vocal line of the chorus.
Abrimaal 3 months ago
@Abrimaal ...thanks Abrimaal, I'm just starting to play around with Garageband, I was kind of thinking the same thing....I kind of threw it together in an afternoon....
SleepWhenIamDead 3 months ago
<3 wow,for your first creative project for us all to share,that really is amazing!you truly are blessed with creative ability as a gift from God :))) i really enjoyed it,the black and white,the camera angle,the music and your echoey voice.big smile!!! huge!!!!!!...love and peace. <3~<3~<3
1melodyaurora1 3 months ago
@1melodyaurora1 ....thanks Melody....
SleepWhenIamDead 3 months ago
nice job
2ndjonah 3 months ago
@2ndjonah thanks....
SleepWhenIamDead 3 months ago
Loved. It. I read it about 3 times and showed a few friends also! I'm really glad you did this and i hope you are in no way going to stop. You put it out there and that's the first step. I look forward to seeing this grow. Tell us your thoughts and what creativity boils in you. Let it out, because if your other writing is anything like this..you just gained a fan! Good luck! If I see anything in this... EyeseeArt..
EyeSeeArt 3 months ago
I like it:) Very trippy. I like the effects you did on the audio.
Good job.
TheOwlking1996 3 months ago
@TheOwlking1996 ....thanks Adrienne, you gave me the confidence....I used Garageband...Ambient vocals, Deep Pad 03 synth, and 70's drums...it became so much fun the more I got into it....I have to work on the vocals next time....project more confidence, but I found a new outlet! Yay!.....my MacBook is going to get a work out.....thanks again....hope everything is going well for you.....
SleepWhenIamDead 3 months ago
Very nice, trippy video and really creative poem there Jamie! I love the audio and the slo-mo visuals in this. The black and white looks like it has a slight tinted filter to it? The sound on this is crystal clear. Glad you uploaded this one. I hope there's more to come! Nice to see you making more creations :)
Fenner1976 3 months ago
@Fenner1976 I just sent you a dm....I borrowed your technique of b & w and slow mo....I just used the mike in my MacBook, not even my condenser mike...this was so much fun actually.....thanks Gav....
SleepWhenIamDead 3 months ago