I like the concept of this short. I was however a bit drawn away by the over use of DOF.( some of which had nothing to do with the story) and some of the continuity was a bit off, like it would be impossible for here to hold the HV20 in one hand by the lcd screen and use the other hand to hold a phone.(Maybe put on speaker phone next time?) At the end of the video you broke the 180 rule with out crossing the back of her head which is un-natural and makes the view focus on the ANGLE change.
Nice work, and captivating. Interesting splashes of red paint on the camcorder, and views from it at times looking like it has red filter. The red paint drop also added a nice new multi-dimension. Looking forward to the second episode.
Is the red paint foreshadowing? Is she going to die? Or is she going to kill him? Ahh I really want a wide shot too. But I watched your other video and I'm excited you have a jib, they're very cool. Best of luck with the shorts. I also itch for a wide shot :) just one. please. also this is creepy like 'Enduring Love'
Woah... I got the link to this from Val's Art Diary channel... just wanted to say these odd characters sucked me in with curiosity, and I can't wait to see where this story is going...
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Well, except my life's paint would be a dull mauve dripping upon a beeper...or maybe a gray spot on a Clapper that turns on the lights...or faded primer on a duct taped walkman!
i got shiver that dute is actually more horrible than his voice is... anyways nice little composition, i am waiting for more so that doesn't end up to red-ink horror and open-ends :P Val is relly cool!
Voylor, my apologies...I was so wrapped up in what was taking place with, Val, that I completely forgot to mention what a really dynamic job you did on this clip. Keep up the truly great work.
Val...what a great clip. Will you show us how this turns out or are you going to leave us wondering what happens to the young girl who decides to finally venture outside the safety of her personal confines? Love how you used the spilling of the red paint to show perhaps something ominous about to take place. Excellent work, Val. What other talents have you kept hidden from us? See you on Sunday.
Fascinating. The fear of living versus the fear of death. Hadn't thought about it before, but Val's comfort before the cameras is reminiscent of Audrey Hepburn. Val's performance here evokes echoes of similar emotions to Hepburn's performance in Wait Until Dark.
The collaboration here is notably inspired. There's definitely more gas in this engine.
The red paint on the phone is a good premination for what could be to come. A shut in painter afraid of rhte world,(by the locks on the door) secretly wanting someone, something, and the very odd man who is shopping her into different places, and who knows about the dog she used to have, I am thinking that the dog died, and the man knows how..... OK ill stop my wantering mind. Good opening, I want more!
very good, i liked it alot, leaves one thinking, will there be a continue? excellent quality and sound. Keep up the good work. Val seems so natural when working with cameras..
anything that beautiful val makes or is a participant of, I truly love and will give 110%...keep up the great work cookie princess...'' EAT YOUR COOKIES ''
Haha! I know. I haven't used one in a long time myself. The "tracking" message in particular cracks me up. :) For the contest I had to use a red phone and 2 additional props from a list of 20. I picked headphones and a VHS tape. :)
How long did it take you? I noticed the guys accent appeared Russian, since Val spoke very little, someone unfamiliar with her may think her accent is Russian, though she doesn't look Russian, I'm sure Russia has immigrants as well. If you move to a country as a child it's easy to pick up the language and the accent. So was this placed in Russia? I mean, I'm sure you shot it at your home, but I wonder if it was intended that the audience feel the setting be in Russia.
Interesting, not bad. I've worked on the set of short films before, even short films take a long time, though this didn't have a lot of acting, and I assume both the people shown in this have some experience, so I imagine it wasn't too tedious, maybe a 1 day project. I think the paint on the phone may have taken a few shots and the video camera recording the guy holding the computer may have as well, and of course the inevitable accidents which cause an otherwise great scene to need to be redone
Haha! We actually did use her phone... I know. How horrible of me. :P It was an old phone though... but still... anyways, thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it and yeah, she really did great.
This is well done. I think most girls would be totally freaked out if a stranger did this, but I sense that there was a lot of symbolism and that this girl may even have an evil agenda herself. He was right about her that she uses red a lot and it is a "violent" color. Could you explain it a little more -- I'm curious.
where's part II???
esotericrose 8 months ago
Well done. I'm anxious to see part II! Val is fabulous.
annspade 1 year ago
That was freaking awesome
stigmabuster22 1 year ago
omg that ws realy good
fulekkei 2 years ago
Nice Val. Great work!
Qermaq 2 years ago
I liked the angle work...W
AMERICANBIKINIGIRLS 2 years ago
Oh shi! VHS haven't seen that in a while. Lol
Art358 2 years ago
I used to be able to watch this on my iPod touch on the Youtube app... no longer. It just says 'This video could not be played'. I wonder why.
But really, really great job on this. I'm definitely looking forward to episode 2. :]
misinterpretations 2 years ago
well Val. i loved it..
i would like to see more....
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DanielRuggerioishot 2 years ago
only just relised that's Val ice vid and concept..
elusivetantra 2 years ago
o_o It' Val! She's so pretty.
Cookie606 2 years ago
pretty
drbang2000 2 years ago
I like the concept of this short. I was however a bit drawn away by the over use of DOF.( some of which had nothing to do with the story) and some of the continuity was a bit off, like it would be impossible for here to hold the HV20 in one hand by the lcd screen and use the other hand to hold a phone.(Maybe put on speaker phone next time?) At the end of the video you broke the 180 rule with out crossing the back of her head which is un-natural and makes the view focus on the ANGLE change.
Whitelinefilms 2 years ago
Other then that it was a wonderful production. Most tubers make junk you made a master piece. PS what 35mm adapter you using?
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XxXxFR3DxXxX 3 years ago
Nice work, and captivating. Interesting splashes of red paint on the camcorder, and views from it at times looking like it has red filter. The red paint drop also added a nice new multi-dimension. Looking forward to the second episode.
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Xx68Phantom68xX 3 years ago
Im so excited for Episode 2!
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BoonTheToon 3 years ago
Well good.
Skyblueginger 3 years ago
creepy but she smiles
ArtChickTV 3 years ago
Nicely done. It freaks me out a bit but so does stepping in dog kaka
Jimbodiny 3 years ago
Beautiful film :) What kind of submission is it?
Yaiyasmin 3 years ago
I can't believe Javier Bardem agreed to do this.
oskinzee24 3 years ago
Crazy-Awesome! =D
ashadowwebdesign 3 years ago
an then she died
ting280 3 years ago
Wow! Stuff like this just doesn't come along often. Fabulous!
P00P0STER0US 3 years ago
I think this might just be the most wierd and awesome video I've seen on here.
ksandom40 3 years ago
it's all about you as always.
Natokowsky 3 years ago
amazing work, so simple, so beautiful, even suspenseful! AMAZING!
RJben 3 years ago
THATS VALSARTDIARY!!!
god she's amazing :)
i love her artwork
cori182 3 years ago
Oops. Forgot to rate it.
Ten thumbs up.
Honestinwilkesbarre 3 years ago
Very enjoyable. I wouldn't change a thing.
Honestinwilkesbarre 3 years ago
Very cool and dramatic!
Can't wait to see part 2.
jdjdbig 3 years ago
OMG this is FKN amazing! Your cinematics are beautiful. Nicely done!
rejer12 3 years ago
MIKMA WAS HERE
mikma 3 years ago
Is the red paint foreshadowing? Is she going to die? Or is she going to kill him? Ahh I really want a wide shot too. But I watched your other video and I'm excited you have a jib, they're very cool. Best of luck with the shorts. I also itch for a wide shot :) just one. please. also this is creepy like 'Enduring Love'
emperorming 3 years ago
all the close ups really make me itch for a wide shot. I guess it's a style. Just not a style I enjoy. Cool story though.
keenanmartens 3 years ago
Wow.
Did anything like this really happened?
Crazy.
Good story, great idea, excellent execution.
AVTPro 3 years ago
Cool! I will use this method to pick up chicks!
culwin 3 years ago
I'm scared! Don't go.
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peanutkkkk 3 years ago
It is very intriguing. Nice work.
ColevanFilms 3 years ago
this is amazing
ProjectErik 3 years ago
i would NEVER go out to that guy, frikin stalker much...
HotChocolateUnited 3 years ago
paint rules, objects are fools
disasterpastor45 3 years ago
A classic suspense story, with abstract overtones, of course. :)
thinkofwhy 3 years ago
I love it, Val.
escushion 3 years ago
Woah... I got the link to this from Val's Art Diary channel... just wanted to say these odd characters sucked me in with curiosity, and I can't wait to see where this story is going...
Nice job! :D
omgoneleven 3 years ago
intersting!. interesting camera work as well!
benzone50 3 years ago
what.... are ya freakin nuts!!!
don't go out there
krawlerado 3 years ago
hmmm....creepy guy...stay away from him
chirpwi 3 years ago
what
Pris1531 3 years ago
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priscillaxoxoxox 3 years ago
kind of reminds me of amelie
mikkydayo 3 years ago
uhm, good
phongleox 3 years ago
really great
antnhec 3 years ago
Wow! That was really something else! Captivating. Excellent work!
blastoons 3 years ago
I really liked this!!! Keep em comin!
FlyKittie 3 years ago
Great film and the shots are well done, good luck!
CreativeSoulTV 3 years ago
well done. love the shooting.
please check out my video
krfilms 3 years ago
You shot this great. I was watching it while listening to this album, ras g and the afrikan space program. It went with it.
topdogkiller 3 years ago
Oh man, what a phenominal film- I can only begin to imagine they layered meaning...
m13r 3 years ago
kinda creepy but i love it!!
wickymay 3 years ago
hey! That's just like my life!
Well, except my life's paint would be a dull mauve dripping upon a beeper...or maybe a gray spot on a Clapper that turns on the lights...or faded primer on a duct taped walkman!
GOOD JOB Val and wierd person!
harryoutdoors 3 years ago
Valentina! Oh wow. I love a good love story. Especially when it makes me fall in love with the characters I feel I already know in a way.
man1d2tran 3 years ago
Excellent work! I really enjoyed every aspect of your film.
tilldeath420 3 years ago
really good... creative and unconventional! ^_^
VideogameAnswerMan 3 years ago
Creative!
prince1will 3 years ago
That was really good.
levmyshkin 3 years ago
i got shiver that dute is actually more horrible than his voice is... anyways nice little composition, i am waiting for more so that doesn't end up to red-ink horror and open-ends :P Val is relly cool!
finlanzer8sa 3 years ago
Voylor, my apologies...I was so wrapped up in what was taking place with, Val, that I completely forgot to mention what a really dynamic job you did on this clip. Keep up the truly great work.
ThruHiker52 3 years ago
haha, no worries.. she deserves every bit of praise... :)
voylor 3 years ago
Val...what a great clip. Will you show us how this turns out or are you going to leave us wondering what happens to the young girl who decides to finally venture outside the safety of her personal confines? Love how you used the spilling of the red paint to show perhaps something ominous about to take place. Excellent work, Val. What other talents have you kept hidden from us? See you on Sunday.
ThruHiker52 3 years ago
Fascinating. The fear of living versus the fear of death. Hadn't thought about it before, but Val's comfort before the cameras is reminiscent of Audrey Hepburn. Val's performance here evokes echoes of similar emotions to Hepburn's performance in Wait Until Dark.
The collaboration here is notably inspired. There's definitely more gas in this engine.
ZachsMind 3 years ago 7
Thanks so much! I really appreciate your comments... and I agree. I think Val did great.
voylor 3 years ago
any word if you made it?
w2pi 3 years ago
Great composition close ups were cool.
Check out my submission Closet Party. It's very different haha and watch it in HD.
white1rc 3 years ago
That man is creepy.
If she is such a private person who doesnt go outside of her privacy,
This man is a stalker with Black cloths on ready to kill.
Id say The red paint symbolized blood,
was a sign from God.
She didnt even take her phone incase of emergency. That was intense.
WTFuckRemix 3 years ago
The red paint on the phone is a good premination for what could be to come. A shut in painter afraid of rhte world,(by the locks on the door) secretly wanting someone, something, and the very odd man who is shopping her into different places, and who knows about the dog she used to have, I am thinking that the dog died, and the man knows how..... OK ill stop my wantering mind. Good opening, I want more!
AntiZeroTrip 3 years ago
I love the video.. So Much Great Suspence!
5 Starrs!!! Wanted to give you 5,000
YTtheRemix 3 years ago
wwoww :p
roscii 3 years ago
XD love it!!
Mau2hon 3 years ago
Cool! Thank you!
voylor 3 years ago
Nice video, well done
geoffreysmovies 3 years ago
Thanks so much! I'm really happy you like it.
voylor 3 years ago
great job val!!!
zedzee1982 3 years ago
she did great indeed :)
voylor 3 years ago
very good, i liked it alot, leaves one thinking, will there be a continue? excellent quality and sound. Keep up the good work. Val seems so natural when working with cameras..
Wyki1200 3 years ago
Thank you. I really appreciate your comments. We might do another one. Val seems very open to the idea.
voylor 3 years ago
claro claro! this was something else... i don't know if it was love or "hate" but she sure desired taking a walk...
EXCELLENCE!
ArachnidTactix 3 years ago
Thank you!
voylor 3 years ago
a dream ? a fantasy ?
bobboberan 3 years ago
That was cool! Good job Val!
EMDF7 3 years ago
Thanks. I think she did great.
voylor 3 years ago
anything that beautiful val makes or is a participant of, I truly love and will give 110%...keep up the great work cookie princess...'' EAT YOUR COOKIES ''
nmsnyder67 3 years ago
omg...much suspense val....this is freaky and cool!
jodykwik 3 years ago
I really like the part with the spilling paint, gives it an eerie feel.
OhThatsSplendid 3 years ago
I'm so glad you think it worked out. I was wondering if the red was a bit much :)
voylor 3 years ago
Fantastic work! Good luck.
kenc54 3 years ago
Thank you so much! Really glad you liked it.
voylor 3 years ago
Interesting. Strange but interesting.
LorieLynn 3 years ago
holy sht. my fone started ringing literally the SECOND hers did. scaryyy.
RadTissues 3 years ago
oh wow... that must have been creepy :)
voylor 3 years ago
somebodysawatchin you... and sometimes love flows thru the phone like paint on a canvas. or so i've been told. enjoyable.
onimarikar 3 years ago
Very good work, great use of camera angles and effective use of closeups. Overall, I give it five stars.
apb148 3 years ago
Thank you so much! This really means a lot.
voylor 3 years ago
lol a VHS player !!! i wish i had one of them =)
Dc45d 3 years ago
Haha! I know. I haven't used one in a long time myself. The "tracking" message in particular cracks me up. :) For the contest I had to use a red phone and 2 additional props from a list of 20. I picked headphones and a VHS tape. :)
voylor 3 years ago
ha! well that was one of the props you have to have - a VHS tape :P
valsartdiary 3 years ago
Hi Val...I like you and anything you do..you got my support 100%.
respectfully40 3 years ago
awhh... thanks so much!
greetings from a cold cold ice place!
valsartdiary 3 years ago
How long did it take you? I noticed the guys accent appeared Russian, since Val spoke very little, someone unfamiliar with her may think her accent is Russian, though she doesn't look Russian, I'm sure Russia has immigrants as well. If you move to a country as a child it's easy to pick up the language and the accent. So was this placed in Russia? I mean, I'm sure you shot it at your home, but I wonder if it was intended that the audience feel the setting be in Russia.
monsterhart 3 years ago
Interesting, not bad. I've worked on the set of short films before, even short films take a long time, though this didn't have a lot of acting, and I assume both the people shown in this have some experience, so I imagine it wasn't too tedious, maybe a 1 day project. I think the paint on the phone may have taken a few shots and the video camera recording the guy holding the computer may have as well, and of course the inevitable accidents which cause an otherwise great scene to need to be redone
monsterhart 3 years ago
I want to see the sequel.
This was very well done voylor! Well planned and executed. It definitely leaves a lot of unanswered questions.
Val, you did a great job as well! I hope that wasn't your phone.
rhythm7a 3 years ago
Haha! We actually did use her phone... I know. How horrible of me. :P It was an old phone though... but still... anyways, thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it and yeah, she really did great.
voylor 3 years ago
hey J, glad you liked it! Maybe we'll do a sequel...
valsartdiary 3 years ago
Omg that was creepy and then it was adorable I love what a great short film, its got a great message too, amazing job.
chazfier 3 years ago
Thank you so much. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
voylor 3 years ago
I LOVE YOU VAL
chrisw40 3 years ago
Well done. You raise existential undercurrents to our visible and visceral spectrum. spooky.
qso1 3 years ago
thank you. I'm really glad you enjoyed it
voylor 3 years ago
I just know the guys is a nut!! Dont GOOOoooooooo0000ooooooooOOOOooOoo! Ok, I used way to many ooooooooos for that.
SirChadwic 3 years ago
haha... definitely too many
voylor 3 years ago
This is well done. I think most girls would be totally freaked out if a stranger did this, but I sense that there was a lot of symbolism and that this girl may even have an evil agenda herself. He was right about her that she uses red a lot and it is a "violent" color. Could you explain it a little more -- I'm curious.
jbevier 3 years ago
Thank you. I know the film poses some questions.. I'll try to write a bit more about the intentions in the vid description...
voylor 3 years ago
val, don't you know never to go walking with a stranger without your cell phone? Something could happen... !
jrbl995 3 years ago
haha! that would be crazy indeed
voylor 3 years ago
Good luck with the contest. Loved the red paint on the phone. Very clever.
manatarms79 3 years ago 2
thanks so much!
voylor 3 years ago
Val are you a fan of Casablanca? Very great movie...
falcore19 3 years ago
very clever. each shot is well thought out. dramatic stuff.
how about paintings to go with it?
markgogo9 3 years ago
thank you. I appreciate that.
voylor 3 years ago
That was awesome. Val, you did great.
GreenPimpHat 3 years ago
Thanks. She did great indeed.
voylor 3 years ago
strange and stranger
FXrobot 3 years ago
haha, sure is stranger
voylor 3 years ago
it's a riddle, isn't it? :)
ssmmiillee100 3 years ago
i guess it is....
voylor 3 years ago
he's even psyco than me... LOL
Nice vid. I'm jealous, he knows Val.
planetazul3 3 years ago 2
haha, yes I know her.
voylor 3 years ago
Val!!
Val = awesome!!
RakeBone 3 years ago
yes she is! :)
voylor 3 years ago
This is YT Project Direct? Red phone, headphones, VHS and amazing artist requirement right? ;)
IntrovertGuy 3 years ago
I love this vid, the use of closeups was fantastic. The story is terrific.
Such a beautiful lady as well. :)
wildwyckedknight 3 years ago 5
awwh... I am so happy you like it!
I think he did a great job!
valsartdiary 3 years ago 2
You did a great job as well Val. :)
wildwyckedknight 3 years ago
Suspenseful, creepy, adorable, under the sheets fear, It was brilliant!!! excellent camera work,and great acting ability.
trafficdreamer 3 years ago
thank you trafficdreamer! it means a lot to me.
voylor 3 years ago
thanks so much wildwickedight! I really appreciate it!
voylor 3 years ago