I like your song, can hear lots of potential ... some constructive criticism ----I think it's a bit too long ...people have short attention spans these days ....and I also think lyrically the song could be more specific, for example words or phrases that help a listener visualize something like a yellow rose (to set her free)---something like that ... I have always struggled with lyrics. Check out Ani DiFranco to get a better example of what I mean.
@1800scopes short attention span - yeah I understand what u mean but I would like to break that
keep in mind this is a sort of a demo, so if there would be more instruments
about the lyrics I meant set her free as to set your girl free would be a metaphor for your rich mind of ideas to be set free and to reach it's full potential. thanx
this is really good :) could you maybe take a look at some of my covers and originals and subscribe if you like them? thanks :)
MaskedAcoustic 1 month ago
@MaskedAcoustic r
great songs! keep on rocking in the free word and set her free
yaronam 4 weeks ago
I like your song, can hear lots of potential ... some constructive criticism ----I think it's a bit too long ...people have short attention spans these days ....and I also think lyrically the song could be more specific, for example words or phrases that help a listener visualize something like a yellow rose (to set her free)---something like that ... I have always struggled with lyrics. Check out Ani DiFranco to get a better example of what I mean.
1800scopes 1 month ago
@1800scopes short attention span - yeah I understand what u mean but I would like to break that
keep in mind this is a sort of a demo, so if there would be more instruments
about the lyrics I meant set her free as to set your girl free would be a metaphor for your rich mind of ideas to be set free and to reach it's full potential. thanx
yaronam 1 month ago
hey thanx for your comment! where are you from?
yaronam 1 month ago