You wanted my critique, so here it is. Sounds nice, you got the hang of the melody, just try to put out the kicks, claps and hats more. Try giving more variation and FX, ill give you a 5.
i like the fade in at the beginning and the mix with piano and synth is nice. But i think the synth melody should have a smoother transition. Also, i think at the beginning of the song the atmosphere is well balanced, but toward the end it should be similar to the beginning. I hope you know what i mean. Finally, i think the melody itself is good but its played too much throughout the song. It's a bit repetitive but not too bad. Still, very good work.
Nice one! You should do more songs! This is the only way to improve! This track have some "bugs" like DjSimiliar wrote, but it's obvious that You have a tallent! Good luck!
nice track man, nice theme, but next time add some more variation! i mean... it starts up with a looooooooong build up then stays the same for the rest of the track:( thats what i didnt like bout this. When ya make a new track tell me ill check it out ;P
This is very clean and well thought out! I love songs like this where I can just get lost in the music. I agree with ViperDragoon21 that the kick could be stronger, but I definitely know what it's like trying to prevent distortion. It just takes a lot of practice. I hope there will be more soon!
I honestly like this a lot. It might just be my headphones but maybe it needs more drum kick. As for the name, I felt like it can be called Fleeting Dream cuz its relaxing and its like I'm dreaming or something ^_^
I used too much VST's and soundgoodizers so if I were to put more bass in the kick it would sound distorted, and I didn't want that to happen like in my Mortal Kombat theme remix. You see I'm still a n00b in FL so I don't know to master the track so well. Thanks for comment.
that intro synth is shmexy as phuuuuuunk
presidentillclinton 10 months ago
i fucking love this god damnit
hellgate02 1 year ago
Well I definitely like it... it has so much Energy in it... great. 5*****
AdrianvonZiegler 2 years ago
You wanted my critique, so here it is. Sounds nice, you got the hang of the melody, just try to put out the kicks, claps and hats more. Try giving more variation and FX, ill give you a 5.
NightTranceDay 2 years ago
Great indeed! did u use gated pads? check my song too, i think a few pads from reason would be great 4 this song :D
TheStyLLeR 2 years ago
@TheStyLLeR Yes, some from nexus, I think at 2:20 or so, I'm to lazy to check xD
SMRDcompany 2 years ago
i like the fade in at the beginning and the mix with piano and synth is nice. But i think the synth melody should have a smoother transition. Also, i think at the beginning of the song the atmosphere is well balanced, but toward the end it should be similar to the beginning. I hope you know what i mean. Finally, i think the melody itself is good but its played too much throughout the song. It's a bit repetitive but not too bad. Still, very good work.
Neonicss 2 years ago
Goood realy very goood
sardynka123 2 years ago
@sardynka123 :) thanks
SMRDcompany 2 years ago
Very Good!
crazybomerman 2 years ago
great sounds
Robertrrrrrrr 2 years ago
Sounds great! This is quality stuff, and shows you have potential for even more!
no0od13s 2 years ago
I really like it, only thing i can say you should do is make the kick have more punch, try adding some compression.. otherwise 5/5
newzealanddude92 2 years ago
Nice one! You should do more songs! This is the only way to improve! This track have some "bugs" like DjSimiliar wrote, but it's obvious that You have a tallent! Good luck!
Kraegar9 2 years ago
wow
you made a pretty good track
i like it - 5***** !
gamecontroller90 2 years ago
the beginning is pretty good m8 ;) but try to tweak the standard NExus sounds to something unique in the future, that will make it even better!
anyways, good effort! 5*
0ceanline 2 years ago
nice track man, nice theme, but next time add some more variation! i mean... it starts up with a looooooooong build up then stays the same for the rest of the track:( thats what i didnt like bout this. When ya make a new track tell me ill check it out ;P
DjSimiliar 2 years ago
great song really......
aleszaletelj 2 years ago
very good, i liked it, make more like it!
come and check out my stuff
Th3Sp4rTAN 2 years ago
You can hear that you put some time into this one! Too bad its a short song. 5/5 here
Solxify 2 years ago
BRAVO
kukis50 2 years ago
Very nice.... well done definitely a hands up tune!.... Take a listen to mine if you get the chance
DTadagio 2 years ago
oh yes. *****!
Styles3Six 2 years ago
This is very clean and well thought out! I love songs like this where I can just get lost in the music. I agree with ViperDragoon21 that the kick could be stronger, but I definitely know what it's like trying to prevent distortion. It just takes a lot of practice. I hope there will be more soon!
Lamar3m1 2 years ago
I really like this 1 SMRD. Good work man!
hellgate02 2 years ago
good Work 5*
MDD1949 2 years ago
Thanks for the message, i like this one, great melodies! Song name fits well ;P
xxxdanielaschmidtxxx 2 years ago
Geil! 5*
NozillaFirefox 2 years ago
I like the name Vibrant Future that MetaKnight suggested C:
zraya218 2 years ago
K then I'll use it ;P
SMRDcompany 2 years ago
I honestly like this a lot. It might just be my headphones but maybe it needs more drum kick. As for the name, I felt like it can be called Fleeting Dream cuz its relaxing and its like I'm dreaming or something ^_^
ViperDragoon21 2 years ago
I used too much VST's and soundgoodizers so if I were to put more bass in the kick it would sound distorted, and I didn't want that to happen like in my Mortal Kombat theme remix. You see I'm still a n00b in FL so I don't know to master the track so well. Thanks for comment.
SMRDcompany 2 years ago
a good name let's see
feel it out or something
it's an relaxing music
sofijan94 2 years ago
Vibrant Future
MetaKnightMK 2 years ago
ok thanks for commenting
SMRDcompany 2 years ago
Elecantcarsis
fool232323 2 years ago
lol thanks for your opinion :P
SMRDcompany 2 years ago
Rising Tide
bcdrummer 2 years ago
thanks for the opinion
SMRDcompany 2 years ago
i got good names-Come to me, Jump into the past
Advandnaruto 2 years ago
Hey thanks for your opinions.
SMRDcompany 2 years ago