Good start if you ask me. If I could give you any advice it would be to take your bells and string melodies and slow them down some. I have tendency to make fast tempo melodies as well, since you have a nice fast pace with your drums I think a melody that has quite a few quarter notes with some eighths thrown in here and there would really set it off. :)
yo alll u sick asss bitches are nothin u just lookin like a pumpkin i got this shit on me u gusy are just a fuckin fleee and i make this shit bleed u cant rap for shit just go take a nap u just lookin like a scum and neeverd chewd gum
yo this beat is sick i rap you get ticked the man or creator needs to file a paper to copyright before someone steals his rights i got hoes all on me my names james walshie i get all the pussy put it in the pockeet
Because this beat sucks, it deserve a whatever song, bibbity baba bo man I think something is wrong, how can I write the song, or even clean my dong, when I wake up in the morning my eyes be lookin cheech an chong, go hit the bong, ring the dong, King to kong, play some pong, but check your cash, an yes that rash, ill have a sit down with ya class, I bring the gas, an let them pass, cus they aint worth it not near as, my totum pole, up out the hole, into your soul, one major goal.
to start off the drums are too loud ... the strings need to have more presence. and tbf u need a nice synth to sit on the top of the beat for chorus. ther ain no real pattern to the tune, pretty stop and start and looped every 8 bars, except addin the hi hits , mite be a bell? buh keep at it ul get better ;)
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ye man ye man..its all hunky dory now llook smoked a spliff..openiin up now ye man..look man..got the master plan..now man.hahaha look its soo simple fat beat rappin a head...fat beat beatin dreads on the road to the hip hop...got smoke stock..tunes waitin for them big drops cars wiv the drop tops droppin like that hot stuff...red hot lava drama..i can bring ur karma..please dnt be alarmed an chill this ent afghan still but so like we got the same will stronger afghan im gonna harm ya waaaaaama
this beat is wacked go get a life or lessons how to make a beat kuz u suuuuuuuuucccccccccccccckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,122903910391039018301
really don't know where u tryin to go wit that paino sound and the kicks are all over the place. not a good rythym can't bob yo head wit it keep workin on it foo you'll get there
Weak.
lbeckamaria 1 month ago in playlist sick beats
this hurts my ears
michael84821 1 month ago
they stink it sounds to plain i like nice ones :)
TheKamiigirl 3 months ago
Good start if you ask me. If I could give you any advice it would be to take your bells and string melodies and slow them down some. I have tendency to make fast tempo melodies as well, since you have a nice fast pace with your drums I think a melody that has quite a few quarter notes with some eighths thrown in here and there would really set it off. :)
xXKushkinXx 4 months ago
yo alll u sick asss bitches are nothin u just lookin like a pumpkin i got this shit on me u gusy are just a fuckin fleee and i make this shit bleed u cant rap for shit just go take a nap u just lookin like a scum and neeverd chewd gum
mohamad2324 6 months ago
i can rap to tht if u want me to send in a videwo
xXdoubleOstudXx2 8 months ago
sounds like age of empier 2
aahhahahhah at 0:21
amoro61 8 months ago
yo this beat is sick i rap you get ticked the man or creator needs to file a paper to copyright before someone steals his rights i got hoes all on me my names james walshie i get all the pussy put it in the pockeet
gregmak34 1 year ago
Because this beat sucks, it deserve a whatever song, bibbity baba bo man I think something is wrong, how can I write the song, or even clean my dong, when I wake up in the morning my eyes be lookin cheech an chong, go hit the bong, ring the dong, King to kong, play some pong, but check your cash, an yes that rash, ill have a sit down with ya class, I bring the gas, an let them pass, cus they aint worth it not near as, my totum pole, up out the hole, into your soul, one major goal.
BennySmacks 1 year ago
ehhhh. not very good...
MistaJacoby 1 year ago
let sbe constructive,
to start off the drums are too loud ... the strings need to have more presence. and tbf u need a nice synth to sit on the top of the beat for chorus. ther ain no real pattern to the tune, pretty stop and start and looped every 8 bars, except addin the hi hits , mite be a bell? buh keep at it ul get better ;)
XTerminationOfficial 1 year ago
wak
siccmade45 1 year ago
slow it down a little and a little more chopz and stopz harder bazz to
longoriam1 1 year ago
If u added more bump u could work with it but it seems like there is no drop in it
SlimBeats1 1 year ago
the point is it to be simple
JmXgreen 1 year ago
it is a little simple but not bad
chevyleokid 1 year ago
craaaaap omg... -,-...
TrayDee0 1 year ago
wayyy to simple, listen to kanye
CBlanchProduction 1 year ago
sick beat luv it
gagehelms 1 year ago
begining good but not end
jj0709 1 year ago
this beat sucks BALLS hairy ones. BALLS that is all. BALLS
LaughingPotatoMan 1 year ago
@LaughingPotatoMan u talk about bals alot u must like them
gagehelms 1 year ago
was ist das für ne kacke?
gay beat gay dj
thermaglobal 1 year ago
its pretty gay
isotoful 1 year ago
This is nice but mine is way better!!! Check my beat out everybody and comment!!!!
Georgefreijbeats 1 year ago
eleos
Oukranos0 1 year ago
so beanerish
playahatincrew 1 year ago
this is sick man!!!
leonevans15 1 year ago
yo this shits pretty good like i just did a lil freestyle to it for fun and shit worked like keep up the work kid ur shits tight
geezy1414 1 year ago
this is bad i herd better doggz but keep it up your almost dere
XxMrStylesxX 1 year ago
its a little to fast, and theres just too many different sounds going on. like its sick at the start and then it switch's.
MackMan169 1 year ago 2
sick
HHOHandyman333 2 years ago
this shit 2 fast
& sucks
BLNTman91 2 years ago
this shit sucks pussy
samflowers5 2 years ago
GREAT SHIT!!
123Bastardo 2 years ago
it sounds tight
ilivebyfaith08115 2 years ago
nice beat xD
TheLawl2222 2 years ago
what program did u used ?
cammeranto 2 years ago
I dont like this beat.,,,,it sounds simple. too much simple.....baahh......
flexraphop 2 years ago 15
@flexraphop go make your own
max77themax 6 months ago
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ye man ye man..its all hunky dory now llook smoked a spliff..openiin up now ye man..look man..got the master plan..now man.hahaha look its soo simple fat beat rappin a head...fat beat beatin dreads on the road to the hip hop...got smoke stock..tunes waitin for them big drops cars wiv the drop tops droppin like that hot stuff...red hot lava drama..i can bring ur karma..please dnt be alarmed an chill this ent afghan still but so like we got the same will stronger afghan im gonna harm ya waaaaaama
1GreenDiamond 2 years ago
Nice Beat man. will you chack mine out and rate and comment please ? .... peace !
xENxxHipHopxBeatsx 2 years ago
Nice beat. Check mine out.
americangod 2 years ago
Damn nice beat!! :D
HipHopBoiiiii 2 years ago
wowoW
gtsgamer 2 years ago
thats pretty shit loooool
danhale14 2 years ago 2
its ok
joselombana666 2 years ago
jo fuck this lame ass wack beat this aint art dog my 5 yr old lil sister is making better beats then this one
mcraghard24 2 years ago
i freestyled the whole length of the beat man keep it goin' you got it!!!!!!!!
johng1386 2 years ago
can i use it for a video ??
ThePivotUniverse 2 years ago
WACK AS FUCK
TeK9YoUnGbUcK 2 years ago 2
listen to my beatzzzzz !!!!!!!!!!!!!
anouarrabdi 2 years ago
Gay
xXKushkinXx 2 years ago 26
fuck no
2468john 1 year ago
get dat wac ass shyt off of here
YoungAmazing11 2 years ago
its ok i like it but slow it down kid
0824891 2 years ago
cack
ILLER121 2 years ago
slow it down just a little..
laughter2119 2 years ago
this beat is wacked go get a life or lessons how to make a beat kuz u suuuuuuuuucccccccccccccckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,122903910391039018301
gasyagnera 2 years ago
its too much bass at once its beats too hard if u could change the intervals of the thump it would be dope...make the 2nd n 4th a little softer....
Shanizzle23 2 years ago
LOL g this sounds like some like some nintendo shii or sumthyn ... buh ull get better
Gram905 2 years ago
this is the fucking shittyist beat i have ever heard...
40bryan 2 years ago
learn music theory...you're okay at beats, but musically it sounds like shit, sorry
nickfizzle1212 2 years ago 2
thats a nice beat man im likin it, chek my beats out they hela original nd got sum nice flow
PlatnumProductions12 2 years ago
noooooooooooooooooo
SuPaMaNallday 2 years ago
want me to make a download on this?
tehcoolworld 2 years ago
it needs to slow down a bit
MrLildistro 2 years ago
this beats aite
i mean, i can feel what ur tryna go for bt it just needs to be timed out a little bit better
work on it a little bit more nd u can prolly end up with something better
just dont add nothin else
to be more specific
add the background high pitched part earlier in the beat
if that confuses you dont try to do it
mramansingh 2 years ago
this really suck,sorry i started fl studio 8 2 month ago and i can make a much better beat ,even if its easy-.-
trancetheking 2 years ago
Really? Wanna make me a simple beat? lol
I have XXL Producer edition,
IkalVotan 2 years ago
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sadly its just one beat
XXInteractiveXX 2 years ago
sadly its just one beat
XXInteractiveXX 2 years ago
man your wak
SLiP7547 2 years ago
i agree
SuPaMaNallday 2 years ago
i like it alot... Add me
feastofjesus78 2 years ago
wow this is a bigger disgrace 2 rap than soulja boy
dagraz372 2 years ago
if you think this is dope, ur brain is small
lenny122376 2 years ago 2
shitttttttttttttt
murkinmanz4321 2 years ago
sad thing is, this beat is better than most new hip hop flops that come out. Love it
interpol007 2 years ago
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romamocl 2 years ago
Why you hating ....... can you do any better , don't think so intel you do keep your rude comments to your self .
kiss3z933 2 years ago
I like dis beat mayne, keep it up...
treleon210 2 years ago
stewie has to shut his mouth, i bet hes listening to hardcore. great job man thats one sick beat
bezhan47 2 years ago
that is weak dawg my grandma can do betta g so keep workin at ma g
stewie2999 2 years ago
WACK az fuk
WEHUNT001 2 years ago
send me this beat homi3
eastsydeswagga 2 years ago
omg my golly i love ur beats i love black boys to.....lol
jlundin905 2 years ago
dude these r some ill beats
soccerbear4 2 years ago
reason 4 what is then reason 4 this beat
chronicuk 2 years ago
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platinumbeatZ4U 3 years ago
little bit too much beat
playertothemax69 3 years ago
really don't know where u tryin to go wit that paino sound and the kicks are all over the place. not a good rythym can't bob yo head wit it keep workin on it foo you'll get there
TVillan11 3 years ago
it's weak
lala776man 3 years ago 4
what is reason?
Americ4nG4ngster 3 years ago
beat making software
YouStarMusic 3 years ago
nice!!
oxoxMontyoxox 3 years ago