dramatic monologue

[alleeyanah]

Good acting. Could use more gestures and body movements to express as much as her voice was expressing, though. Other than that, really good!

what monologue is this???? does anyone have the full monologue?

[RhythmBulzara]

I don't get why some people are saying it's boring or awkward or not that great. Her acting is really good.

[kimberlyLCH]

hi, i was wondering if you could send me the script for this monologue please.

[BushraBaaby]

I love this

[ilovesubway26]

talk with your hands more

[TheMichaelmanley]

you are one good actress have you done Lamda before

[hyt243]

I'm looking back at this and wow.. It's so rushed

[TheGlamourista]

@hyt243 really? i liked the pace ~! the beggining was maybe just a tad but the monologue story was so great i was distracted

[hyt243]

@TheGlamourista Most of the middle was rushed, I mean... there's not really much of a beat in some bits... Sure, the voice was great but it wasn't visually engaging. You also just said the story was great, yeah, it was great. You didn't mention the acting, though.

[TheGlamourista]

@hyt243 the acting was a little bit above decent. the beggining was honestly so boring but then towards the end the story got interesting so it was just hard for me to focus on the acting skills

[TheGlamourista]

@hyt243 it felt somewhat unnatural too .. and i dont mean un beleivable but like unaturally awkward.;

[Cancerophobia]

...That won most dramatic monologue in 2008? It's not that great...

[thegirlwiththehair1]

that was really good vocally but i think you need to get more comfortable moving your arms a little more though. i know thats really hard to do though. besides that i think you did great!

[Courtneyraine90210]

Ur amazing!!!!!!!

[day152k10]

This Video Really Helped Meh With Ma 2 Min Monologue

Very Good In All Tho

[StefaniSamacOfficial]

I won the best monologue of the year, 2010 :)

[hyt243]

What I think... The voice is awesome, not enough movement imo... I think that's what most people are saying too. Anyways, great job!!

[mavenofficial]

this is horrible, what i see and what i hear dont go well together

[starfishloverbird]

Wow !!!!!! Good job :D

[birdiemeyers]

what is that from!!!????!!! i would really really like to know!!

[McCulloughParis]

Nice Ass!

[juan16911]

I thought it was dull at the beginning but as I was about to switch off you convinced me. I suggest a lot more body movements not just hands. Great job over all.

[masinarocks]

Felt forced.... learnt, unnatural... are you really broken? I switched off around 2:34. Good try keep going at it. Imagination is great, but where is the nakedness in the soul of your eyes...

[MrPlaiedes]

Great job! Remember don't yell from the neck up, yell with your body. Acting is more like dancing, really, you're dancing to the rhythm of the script, the character, what you want from your character. Thanks for sharing and good luck!

[TheRealGreenshell1]

lol, she hella got raped.

[sailabonkie12]

wow... i just had a talent-gasm

[TheatricThings]

That was AMAZING!!!!

[JXZjeremy]

Rushed.

No variation.

Not enough body langue to reflect vocal emotion

Use your arms more.

Face doesn't seem to reflect the emotion. Poor video quality however so that may not be so.

Best was was probably around 2:45

You have much potential. Keep working.

[nshirzad]

whats the name of this monologue or which play is it from?

[corinneharrilall]

That was really good :D

[PiggiePC]

Oh... wow.... ;A;

I wonder what the title of this may be, its a great piece! and you were great too! :D

but the daddy was mean ;___;

[mecrazy123]

PLEASE SOMEONE GET ME A WRITTEN PIECE OF THIS. YOU ARE FANTASTIC

[lyndon10708]

wow... i almost cry...

uhm., where can i able to see the written peice of it? anyone can help me?? please...

[sparkyjones]

off to the beer store again?

[brainsxbeauty]

you voice and tone were excellent here, and you really made me believe you were hurt at the end. But in the begenning, i would imgine you would be a bit more pissed off at youre mom, like "REALLY?" that sort of thind. you should cross your arms across your chest more too, it makes it seem as though youre comforting yourself (because she isnt going to).

keep it up(:

[nitnat9867]

wow that was amazing

[kamisue21]

The voice was perfect but I didn't get the body language I would have been throwing my jacket on and racing towards the "door" with a dramatic turn to throw the rest in her face!

[Felipe140396]

WTH at the end she is like " im done"

[JUANO510]

can subscribe to my page... becuz im already subscribed to yours... thanx beautiful

[JUANO510]

i love it... it felt so real. really. can you take a look at some of my monologues? please. im gonna subscribe 2 your channel. do the same.. great monologue

[fingaherby]

Terrible.

[DestinedStar7]

@fingaherby i agree.

[shermorallos]

what is the title of this monologue and who is the author of this?

[MagnumStellarz]

its really good im a crappy actress try to move your hands in less repetitive ways

lol your so much better than me

[mrsbichon]

this is a wonderful monologue, nicely done!!!